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Post AypP6h0hWnkeJXiJpA by [email protected] |
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Post #Ayo03iPDBxAVlEhabI by [email protected] |
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Coronation done, the court awaited the raven bringing the prophecy of the new k… |
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Post #Ayo0PZuxQkgBo4yZhg by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF "Cheer up, friend", the man next to him said."Being st… |
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Post #Ayo0cCf5CuE5RaZSAS by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I don’t get why the face of the halberdier droops … was he planni… |
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Post #Ayo31oKwT7khRIULbc by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF grinBut I feel like I'm missing something -- can anyone explain t… |
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Post #Ayo31oTRxUYdrgT8ro by [email protected] |
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@pixin @MicroSFF I‘m at a loss too, but maybe the halberdier has the heart fa… |
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Post #Ayo31oatVoVqElx5TE by [email protected] |
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@monoxyd Bingo! |
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Post #Ayo33MlrvcKgWbpCu8 by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF \o/ |
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Post #Ayo3r1EKI7zQCCoOau by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF A stroke of bad luck for the halberdier |
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Post #AypOn8ti8O0j0t7cf2 by [email protected] |
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** Mea culpa.A lot of readers on multiple platforms have let me know they didn&… |
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Post #AypP5bejwvNHQ1vKnA by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Just change to "cardiovascular disease". |
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Post #AypP6h0hWnkeJXiJpA by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF This tale reminds me the beginning of "The Master and Margarita&… |
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Post #AypP9MIoyXHmxWScTY by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I understood the story, but because I failed to recognize the droopin… |
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Post #AypPGEJx39JOEOGXNg by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Well, Kings dying in bed tends to suggest a long period of mostly pea… |
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Post #AypPUCGhTfGzv5PAXo by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF maybe something along the lines of "Behind him the hand of a hel… |
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Post #AypQ9hIn02mA2fAfWS by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF *patpat* |
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Post #AypRPLGQnvHgHP5lCK by [email protected] |
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@dianaprobst *wails* I thought I was so clever! |
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Post #AypSb7Z1fNwtDcyCDA by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF A stroke can be instantly deadly. Every death is ultimately heart fai… |
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Post #AypT8rflFyMlmKD79U by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I like that a fallible human wrote this story, responded to feedback … |
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Post #AypTHRvmKhHeY3nPyi by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF technically, all deaths are heart failure, in some sense. 😅 |
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Post #AypWDKtupPODRuefDM by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Hey, it works if you read the drooping face as a sign that the halbar… |
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Post #AypWOO3rPzMMR7ZmJk by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I got it, but only because I know how you think. Alas. |
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Post #AypZUqn7oTLv8oWPRo by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Ahh, I did wonder - maybe this should be expanded to slightly-longer-… |
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Post #AypZqslb9JmhdeJTiS by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF @dianaprobst You were/are! You just tried to squeeze a mini into a mi… |
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Post #AypazbXMg4tClKNWoy by [email protected] |
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@dianaprobst My commiserations. |
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Post #AypchPr1ZkS7Dy1rDk by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Ah, thanks for explaining. I got as far as the halberdier having a st… |
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Post #AypiIsOsu7PuFBY4mG by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF No, no. It takes two to tango. |
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Post #AypkSbbIQ6iCwc7Yhc by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I misread it as dropped… and thought he was despairing his assassin… |
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Post #Ayq2t7Yi1M9clVhiAi by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF I oddly followed the twist without realizing that drooping face was e… |
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Post #Ayq3ff78ZAaYjdxC5Y by [email protected] |
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@onemerlin You read the story I thought I wrote! |
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Post #AyqH1GIco2sNY4xOFM by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Thanks for the explanation. I did associate the drooping face with ei… |
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Post #AyqRSfZTx9FfHwY7iC by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF Oh man; boy did I read that wrong."Heart failure." ...I tho… |
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Post #AyqvZFsirWC8GVbam8 by [email protected] |
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@MicroSFF @dianaprobst I could tell you were being clever (and now that I read … |
