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Post #AyMBUtUfjWzP2RXZsu by [email protected] |
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Would anyone share their opinion of the one-sentence summary of the novella tha… |
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Post #AyMBcrES1fXYLBkbBY by [email protected] |
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Summarizing is difficult for me, and I'm very close into this story during … |
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Post #AyOUKBnNdOmg3mouEi by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia maybe the stakes need to be larger than just his career? Sounds … |
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Post #AyOUKBvt7lacUAnhUu by [email protected] |
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@CaraBruar Thanks! That's something I'm trying to balance -- hinting th… |
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Post #AyOVS4MxEFErIamU7M by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia it does show the conflict - political mysteries have a way of th… |
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Post #AyOVS4TKqWLJcNla40 by [email protected] |
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@sundog Thanks! I'll try to choose some better language for what he current… |
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Post #AyOW2mnZWEtDWEjsau by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia I have two immediate impressions:It feels like it conforms to th… |
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Post #AyOW2mzym6oY8iXmvw by [email protected] |
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@clarablackink To that point, it's been complicated to balance that the MC … |
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Post #AyOW2nNjLnoTKNekxE by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia Maybe the third one is more about the sci-fi setting itself.Pull… |
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Post #AyTPqLi4mQmy5yedV2 by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia I love it. To me it says that while the story is sci-fi, it focu… |
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Post #AyTPqLs0BWjEalIYyG by [email protected] |
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@pentup Thanks! Yeah, you've really hit the nail on the head -- one of the … |
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Post #AyTPqMfzBgi95mgTse by [email protected] |
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@erosdiscordia After reading the other replies, I also want to add a HARD disag… |
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Post #AyTQStbJDtTKD5rylc by [email protected] |
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@pentup I've fought against the idea that I'm writing a YA book, becaus… |
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Post #AyTQlBk2VyG5gYfxoW by [email protected] |
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@pentup If people don't want a happy and personal arc that the novella woul… |
