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Author: Josuah Demangeon <[email protected]> |
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Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2022 21:09:11 +0100 |
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Before the era of smartphones, laptops, before Windows and Apple, |
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there were pioneers who took the fun of computers from the hands |
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-of the the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively |
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+of the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively |
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so that mere individuals could afford it. |
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-An ocean of creativity sprout. Art of all kind were made on these |
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-new toys, that were permitting to many to try on its own, or enjoy |
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-a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, a play of video game, an ASCII |
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+An ocean of creativity spread. Art of all kinds were made on these |
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+new toys, that were permitting many to try on their own, or enjoy |
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+a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, play a video game, ASCII |
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art... |
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Offering these pioneers a one-way ticket to enter the legend, |
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-8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room into our |
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+8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room in our |
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heart for the 8bit heroes. |
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