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From Hero to Zero: How Bad Writing RUINED Odd Girl Out (WEBTOON) |
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by Jordan's Writing and Fighting Show |
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I am mostly a stereotypical man with mostly stereotypical |
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male tastes, so how did a slice of life comic about a |
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teenage girl's high school life once become my favorite |
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story on WEBTOON? And how did this story go to hell? Dive |
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into the world of Odd Girl Out (Girl's world) by morangji |
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and see how the best writing transcends its target |
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audience, crossing into other demographics. See how part |
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one of this story did just that. Then, see how it takes |
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only ONE bad element, ONE choice of poor focus, to RUIN |
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your entire story, as it did in Odd Girl Out! Finally, |
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see how you can avoid this mistake in your writing! |
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Carl Sagan said in his immortal Cosmos series that "the |
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Gates of Heaven and Hell are adjacent and unmarked." Make |
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sure you're astute enough to not go through the wrong |
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gate in your writing. Odd Girl Out serves as an excellent |
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case study. |
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Timestamps: |
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00:00 - Intro |
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02:30 - Why Part 1 of Odd Girl Out was Brilliant: Main |
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Cast |
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06:41 - Why Part 1 of Odd Girl was Brilliant: Pacing |
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08:40 - Why Part 1 of Odd Girl was Brilliant: Supporting |
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Characters |
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11:15 - The Character that Sent Odd Girl Out to Hell |
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14:10 - Chanyang and Nari's Unhealthy Relationship |
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17:41 - Why Chanyang is a Badly-Written Character |
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19:50 - Why Chanyang Should Have been a Villain |
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25:00 - Chanyang in Review |
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27:02 - How Chanyang Changed Nari's Character for the |
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Worse |
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30:22 - An Objective Test of Chanyang's Character |
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31:03 - Chanyang: An Avoidable Tragedy of Writing |
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32:54 - Character Improvement: Chanyang in "Hell Joseon" |
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35:30 - What I Hate the Most About all of This! |
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38:10 - Can Odd Girl Out be Saved? |
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39:24 - Should You Read Odd Girl Out? |
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39:59 - How Can You Avoid Odd Girl Out's Writing Mistakes? |
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42:35 - Outro |
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#oddgirlout #girlsworld #webtoon #naver #nari #oh #yuna |
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#lim #seonji #mirae #seo #chayang #seungha #southkorea |
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#helljoseon #comics #comic #webcomics #webcomic #manhwa |
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#manga #writing #fictionwriting #fictionwriter |
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#writingtips #writingtipsandtricks |
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#writingtipsforbeginners #joseon #morangji #goodwriting |
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#badwriting #lovetriangle #romance #romancewriting |
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#sliceoflife #sliceoflifewriting #highschool #genre |
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Date Published: 2024-05-30 18:07:04 |
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