Cold wet misery hangs,
Dotted with small balls of light,
Scared of everything.

Alt:

Cold wet misery hangs,
Dotted with small balls of light,
Fear envelopes all.

a mild fear rises? [alt last line...]

Alt 2:

Cold, wet, misery hangs,
Dotted with balls of light, in
Shadows monsters lurk.

Alt 3:

Cold, wet, misery hangs,
Dotted with balls of light, a
sense of dead dread forms.

Alt 4:

Cold, wet, misery hangs,
Dotted with balls of light, a
sense of dread lingers.