I love it. The imagery is rich and full. I'm a fan of the "in
the end, we are all but stories" concept, and that we live
scripts unknowingly, that were written by others long ago.
The debater in me wants to debate the concept of being pulled
forward down lines unseen towards a definite end certain to be,
yet whose path is unknown to the traveler... but as far as
expressing the concept well, you succeeded brilliantly smile
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