Network Working Group                                      R.T. Braden
Request for Comments #368                                  UCLA/CCN
NIC 11015                                                  July 21, 1972
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                             COMMENTS ON
                 "PROPOSED REMOTE JOB ENTRY PROTOCOL"

   Chuck Holland's draft proposal (RFC #360) is an excellent
document, very complete and consistent.  Since the final standard RJE
protocol will be widely used on the Network, honing its definition now
will save trouble and discontent later.  Therefore, I will proceed to
make a new suggestions and pick a few nits.

  1.  In my humble opinion, the  command  verb  "BYE"  is  overly
      cute; I would find "QUIT" much less offensive

  2.  The "(pathname)" syntax (p.5) may need some reworking.
      It would be very desirable for all protocols or Network
      access programs to use the same syntax for selecting a
      host and socket and/or file name.  (Note that the FTP
      documents use the term "pathname" in the more
      restricted sense of a local file system name.)

      a.  The PORT construction seems very undesirable,
          since it depends upon a particular bit convention
          of TIP's.  TIP's have bent Network protocols rather
          badly in the past, but surely we don't want to build
          their particular socket system into an official
          protocol.

      b.  For convenience, it may be desirable to allow hex
          and octal socket numbers.

      c.  There will probably be other hosts besides TIP's which
          will use the "(host-socket)" pathname, and some of
          them may want a transmission attribute other than "T".
          The proposed syntax should be changed to allow (attributes)
          in (host-socket)

      d.  I see no reason to exclude attribute "TE", since the control
          characters cr, lf, and ff exist in EBCDIC as well as ASCII.

      e.  There are many EBCDIC codes, and at least 2 ASCII's.  The
          (code) construction needs expansion.




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  3.  The syntax of OUT might reflect the fact that pathname is
      required only for (disp) of "(S)".

  4.  It may be desirable to distinguish syntactically (job-id)
      and job-file-id).  For example, this would allow the command

           ABORT (job-file-id)

      to abort the job currently being transmitted, regardless of
      its id (this assumes that multiple jobs for a given user
      are sent sequentially).

  5.  The replies presented in the document are very good, but may
      need some elaboration.  For example, the syntax error messages
      should be more specific.  When the user enters:

           OUT=(H) UCLA91: NE/ARP998.WGW.TEST

      he would like the error message to indicate explicitly that
      the hostname is not valid, rather than merely being told there
      is something wrong with one of the parameters.

  6.  Experience with remote job entry to CCN via the Network has
      shown that the user wants a transmission status command, to
      find out how many records have been sent or received so far.
      The network bandwidth corresponds in order of magnitude to
      one page per second.  The average output for jobs submitted
      to CCN from the Network has contained about 30 pages, so
      significant transmission delays are not unusual.  It is important
      to add a command for this purpose.


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