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| #Post#: 3124-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: August 19, 2017, 11:20 am | |
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| I spend 99.99% of my time bored with whatever it is I'm doing at | |
| the time. Because of this I spend most of my time thinking and | |
| daydreaming, so I have a few arc and story ideas that I've come | |
| up with in the process. I'mma dump them here if that's okay, so | |
| I can have a place to keep them and possibly further develop | |
| them into something that could maybe be run/written someday. | |
| #Post#: 3130-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: August 19, 2017, 11:36 pm | |
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| I�m bad with titles so I�ll just call this one� iunno� | |
| Bingle Bang: The Quest for Dang | |
| Special Snote: Everything I plan does not take into | |
| consideration firearms nor modern technology. I usually try to | |
| keep it close to show canon if it can be helped. | |
| A bare bones summary and very light description of what I'd have | |
| in mind: | |
| Not too long ago I spent way too much time thinking about | |
| characters and junk that, in a perfect world, would be used in a | |
| series of fan fic stories if I didn�t procrastinate like crazy. | |
| Each I find could be converted to a forum arc with some work. | |
| One would be a prequal taking place after Nightmare Moon but | |
| before the Mane 6 are born. I thought it would be fun to screw | |
| around with the time period before the Elements and flesh out | |
| what could have happened in that time. | |
| This would be during a time where - without the elements - | |
| serious threats obviously would have been dealt with by special | |
| teams, knights, the military, guards and blah blah. Could be a | |
| chance to make a character where you can have them establish | |
| some lore for the past and be referenced or met by current | |
| characters later on in their life should you wish to have an | |
| aged veteran appear somewhere down the line. They could be a | |
| jumping off point for further stories involving them, | |
| experienced characters that could provide adventures of their | |
| own for current ones, a grumpy old codger, hublablubahblub. | |
| This particular story would be relatively grand in scale but, | |
| considering the time period and the fact that characters | |
| participating would more or less be created specifically for | |
| this, relatively self-contained and focused. There would be a | |
| big bad, battles, arc NPCs, the works, but the fact that we know | |
| the world ends up the way it does means strong encouragement of | |
| deciding how these characters that would be made for it end up | |
| towards the end. Since this would involve war, it would be a | |
| chance to make a character with how they end up being the focus | |
| as opposed to just being a regular character you would want to | |
| have participate in everything. Maybe you want to make a war | |
| hero that dies on the battlefield? Maybe they did something neat | |
| and earned themselves a statue in the Canterlot Castle gardens. | |
| Or maybe you can play someone who�s actions were vital but went | |
| unsung and only those that survive would be able to share their | |
| story. | |
| Drama and junk. | |
| The main bad guy would be a sort of hybrid character that would | |
| be difficult to explain as he would have reality warping | |
| abilities. Nothing terribly game breaking but enough to keep | |
| fighting him a very difficult thing to plan and pull off due to | |
| his ability to change immediate surroundings to a certain degree | |
| and influence perception. Some details on him would be | |
| immediately available to royalty due to them being royalty or | |
| whatever, and behind him would be his own faction, but beyond | |
| that RP would be needed to learn more. | |
| Starting of this would most likely be the main bad appearing | |
| somewhere and working to build strength while the good guys | |
| catch wind, try to locate and prevent his actions. Chances are | |
| they�d not succeed to make room for the escalating conflict, but | |
| mehbe can cut it short, or at least effect the way things role | |
| out later down the road, if actions are smart and just dang ass | |
| perfect. | |
| This story would I imagine be about Teen in rating but possibly | |
| upgraded to Mature if we wanted it to be more serious and what | |
| not. I would love to have planned moments and ideas collaborated | |
| with others to include to spice up the story, but the usual RP | |
| improv would still be the norm. | |
| Well, this killed a half hour or so. :P | |
| #Post#: 3158-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: August 25, 2017, 9:16 am | |
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| Boom Zoom: The Tomb of Doom | |
| This idea is probably the most fleshed out of all of mine due to | |
| it having started as an arc idea for the previous forums then | |
| was rewritten to act as a standalone fan fiction that I�ve | |
| written a couple of chapters for already. It wouldn�t take much | |
| for it to be changed back into an arc for others to participate | |
| in. | |
| This story begins with a mystery involving the sudden | |
| appearances of wild and dangerous animals and creatures within | |
| several different cities in Equestria, presumably via magic as | |
| reports claim that they literally just appear out of thin air. | |
| The mayors of each are gathered to discuss what�s going on and | |
| devise a plan on how to anticipate the next occurrence as well | |
| as try to discover who�s responsible. Your characters would | |
| either be assigned to investigate should they be the type to be | |
| given orders from the crown or would be caught up in what�s | |
| happening due to having chosen to attend a festival being held | |
| in one of the two target locations deemed the most likely to be | |
| attacked. From there shenanigans would ensue. | |
| This story has what I like to think of as three major stages | |
| with increasing challenges and higher stakes the further along | |
| you go (duh), each area having its own characters, enemies and | |
| such that you would meet and need to deal with before learning | |
| more and moving on to the next to try and keep things fresh. The | |
| locations would be varied and not take place in one single town | |
| either, so expect some variety. | |
| I know, like, two of you may already know what happens in this | |
| story due to me having talked about it before, but even so you | |
| could still participate and maybe even help write it if you have | |
| any cool ideas you think would add to it. :P | |
| #Post#: 3416-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: October 31, 2017, 2:03 am | |
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| Arc "pitch" if anyone is interested. This is for Boom Zoom: The | |
| Tomb of Doom. I remind that this would not include modern | |
| technology military or otherwise and would operate off of show | |
| canon only where magic is basically the driving force of | |
| everything. | |
| PART 1 | |
| --- | |
| This heat sucked. Normally the summers of Equestria were | |
| merciful to its capitol but this year the season simply wasn�t | |
| having it. The trees did not move; they did not sway nor bend as | |
| the mellow breeze so commonly felt through-out the mountain side | |
| city of Canterlot had been nowhere to be found for weeks. If not | |
| for the occasional trembling twig or shaking leaf one would be | |
| fooled into thinking the parks of the city were a work of still | |
| life art. Pretty, but frozen and not easy to enjoy under the | |
| oppressive radiating heat infesting the still air. It didn�t do | |
| many favors for the populace that the city happened to have its | |
| own lake and waterfall running almost its entire length either - | |
| just outside of the walls mind you - making things wet and | |
| sticky for everyone without the free time to take a dip. | |
| You know what isn�t fun to wear when everything when the heavens | |
| are set to broil? Armor. Especially a set you�re required to | |
| wear for the entire day, much like the required dress of the | |
| Royal Guard posted around the city. It was interesting how | |
| quickly many of the guards had broken into their own little | |
| factions while under the oppression of Celestia�s sun. The | |
| guards out in the market square roasting in the oven that was a | |
| heavily populated area envied the ones on the walls since they | |
| occasionally felt the air move. The ones on the walls hated the | |
| ones inside the castle, what with their shade and cold stone | |
| walls and junk. And the ones in the castle? They hated their | |
| lives since they were the ones that had to listen to everyone | |
| complaining about the heat, but also because the �cold stone | |
| walls� did nothing for the sweat they had dripping from their | |
| brows. However, there were a few who found themselves hating | |
| their lives just that little bit more than the others as they�d | |
| fallen victim to a unicorn that had been walking through the | |
| castle and been very displeased by what he�d seen. A unicorn who | |
| demanded perfection from all he came across and didn�t hesitate | |
| to say so. A unicorn whom two guardsmen wondered if anyone would | |
| miss as he berated them for every little thing. | |
| �Straighten up. No slouching pony is going to wear that uniform | |
| and get away with it on my watch.� | |
| This unicorn was an elderly pony, one with wrinkles and a grayed | |
| yet disciplined mane kept carefully cut to set an example. | |
| �You�re glistening. Wipe yourselves down else a dignitary will | |
| slip on the puddles you�re leaving and use the accident for | |
| leverage.� | |
| His silvery coat was doing better than his mane but was not | |
| immune to the age he�d experienced. It was fading a bit in | |
| color, but it�s base color was still obvious enough. | |
| �Why can�t I see myself in your armor? You call this polished? | |
| You somehow guard the castle of our illustrious leaders and | |
| expect visitors to be impressed by a smudgy breastplate? This | |
| isn�t a nightclub, kiddo, and you aren�t some shady bouncer | |
| kicking out rowdy patrons after they vomit on your hooves. Clean | |
| yourself up!� | |
| His voice was raspy in that way only age could make it. Well, | |
| age and a lifetime of yelling at others. | |
| �Don�t you roll your eyes! Such disrespect! From a guardsman! I | |
| should have you stripped of your responsibilities and forced to | |
| clean latrines on the frontier! Or better yet, teleport you to | |
| the bottom of the ocean with a fresh set of gills and see how | |
| that plays out!� | |
| This unicorn�s name was Gleam. �Head Instructor Gleam� he would | |
| be quick to correct. He didn�t deal with unruly and sometimes | |
| unstable unicorn colts and fillies day to day to be referred to | |
| like any old pony. He had no authority over the guard - not | |
| anymore at least - but that hadn�t stopped him from laying into | |
| the two posted outside a set of massive and beautifully carved | |
| doors leading into one of the castle�s meeting halls. Believe it | |
| or not, it wasn�t even because of the heat that was making the | |
| guards next to him consider crimes against his property as this | |
| was just common behavior from him. A hair out of place, a horse | |
| shoe left rusty, a spear that did not stab to his exact | |
| standards, any of these examples and more were enough to incur | |
| his wrath and force one to suffer through a session of lectures | |
| and �back in my days�. | |
| �Your mane is supposed to be trimmed in a perfect yet subtle | |
| curve, colt,� Gleam scolded, jabbing a hoof at the plume of the | |
| guard to the door�s left, �This wavy irregular crap is why no | |
| one takes you seriously anymore. How can we say this is | |
| Equestria�s elite when you look like you just rolled out of bed? | |
| �And you!� his attention creaked towards the pony to the right, | |
| �You�re off center. Tilted! One of your shoes isn�t even with | |
| the rest. With a glance, I�d think a stiff wind could blow you | |
| over and I�m not an assassin waiting for just the right time to | |
| fall on one of the countless targets that frequent these halls. | |
| Get that fixed by tomorrow, and you better believe me when I say | |
| that I WILL come check to see if it was done. I know your face | |
| now. You can�t escape.� | |
| If everything these guards had done to help others in their | |
| lives could be repaid with one act, they�d settle for two | |
| individual pony sized meteors landing on them right about now. | |
| One wicked away some sweat from his forehead with a quick flick | |
| of magic, Gleam opening his mouth to object in some way when the | |
| holiest of sounds rang out through the hall. | |
| The doors opened. A shifting of heavy wood and mild woosh of | |
| moving air displaced by the weight. | |
| The guards nearly wept with joy as a yellow earth pony stepped | |
| out. | |
| �Head Instructor Gleam?� she asked to which Gleam nodded | |
| impatiently, �Thank you for coming. The mayors have all arrived | |
| and are ready for you.� | |
| �It�s about time,� Gleam grumbled, �any longer and I�d have been | |
| forced to reform the royal guard into a proper legion the | |
| sisters could be proud of.� | |
| He shook his head and trotted forward past the doors. The guard | |
| he�d most recently criticized, now believing himself free of the | |
| unicorn and lacking in witnesses, looked to his counterpart and | |
| conjured an illusion of a rope with which he pretended to hang | |
| himself. | |
| �� You call that a noose!?� Gleams voice rang from beyond the | |
| doors, �I wouldn�t hang my worst enemy with that!� The doors | |
| shut with a slam, almost to punctuate Gleams sheer disapproval | |
| of the guard�s existence. The guard to the left chuckled while | |
| the one on the right dropped the illusion and groaned. | |
| #Post#: 3417-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: October 31, 2017, 2:09 am | |
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| PART 2 | |
| --- | |
| “That was a conspiracy to run my name through the mud and | |
| you know it!” a mare angrily exclaimed as Gleam entered | |
| the meeting hall. | |
| Things were already lively in here. Gleam took note of and | |
| recognized the ponies waiting for him to arrive while the yellow | |
| pony that let him in wandered off towards a corner of the room. | |
| There were six on the other side of those magnificent doors | |
| he’d passed just moments before. All were standing around | |
| a large table with plenty of space between them with the only | |
| exception Gleam could see being one fully equipped unicorn that | |
| seemed to be serving as a silent bodyguard for another. None of | |
| the rest were willing to get near any of the others for fear of | |
| them somehow smelling a secret, and their personal bubbles | |
| – as far as they were concerned – encompassed half | |
| of the country. A large and no doubt expensive rug was laid out | |
| beneath the wide circular table before them and light shone in | |
| from one of the many carefully organized windows spaced between | |
| several larger windows that held stained glass. Celestia help | |
| anyone who spilled a drink in here. | |
| “Never once did I even visit that dust swept hole in the | |
| ground let alone sell Cautious any lewd photos of anyone! I | |
| would never bring myself so low as to partake in such frivolous | |
| and degenerate activities just to strike at you,” the mare | |
| continued, a smirk creeping across her face, “besides, | |
| I’d never drop myself so low as to make them suffer seeing | |
| such pictures in the first place. None should live with the | |
| memory of having such a horrid thing burned into their | |
| memory.” | |
| Gleam recognized the voice before he’d even looked in the | |
| mare’s direction. Diligence, an orange Pegasus mare that | |
| was probably guilty of whatever she was being accused of. She | |
| had a reputation for digging up dirt and seeding rumors amongst | |
| the various governors, mayors and so forth across Equestria. | |
| Gleam had no patience for such things and was always annoyed | |
| when having to deal with her. She had this look about her that | |
| always made it feel like she knew something about you that | |
| you’d rather she didn’t, some creepy sensation that | |
| something private was about to be made public should she feel so | |
| inclined. Worst part was how much she enjoyed it. | |
| “How dare you imply that my mother is not a sight to | |
| behold!” a stallion shouted back from across the table, | |
| pausing for a second before catching himself and stuttering | |
| with, “Y-y-you know what I mean!” | |
| That was Merger, a light blue earth pony that thought shaving | |
| parts of his head would become a popular fashion trend. He was | |
| an idiot, pure and simple, and Diligence was playing him like a | |
| fiddle. Not once would he pause to think before speaking and | |
| Gleam considered him a worthy subject for someone to do a | |
| character study. He wouldn’t do it, but it would be worth | |
| having someone try to figure out how Merger managed to get to | |
| his position without being stamped out early on in his career. | |
| “Oh, they’re going to have a field day with that | |
| one,” another pony chimed in, this time a unicorn of a | |
| dark green hue, “you sure you don’t want to try that | |
| sentence again?” | |
| Gleam needed a second to place this one’s name. Dark green | |
| unicorn… He didn’t think he’d met him before | |
| but he’d had to deal with most of Equestria’s | |
| leaders at some point or another so he was sure he’d at | |
| least heard his name onc- | |
| “Go to Hell, Matrix,” Merger yelled, solving the | |
| mystery, “just skip the line and tell them I sent | |
| you!” | |
| Matrix only laughed while the fourth pony at the table - another | |
| Pegasus of a mild yellow - rubbed the bridge of her snout with a | |
| hoof. | |
| “I could have been organizing a banquet today,” she | |
| complained, “This is not how I wanted this weekend to | |
| go…” | |
| Vision? Gleam, thought her name had something to do with vision. | |
| Or seeing. Something like that. It was probably Vision. Either | |
| way, he was growing impatient with this nonsense as he neared | |
| the table. This constant fighting and fanning of rivalries | |
| between the mayors of the various cities and their respective | |
| territories only ever tired Gleam. It was just so very petty how | |
| they’d invent rumors and conspiracies to throw mud and | |
| argue for hours over nothing. Politics was never something Gleam | |
| thought on fondly. He’d and understood it’s | |
| importance of course, but the ones involved always came off | |
| as… well… they came off as these kinds of people. | |
| “That’s enough!” the fifth and final pony, a | |
| sizable dark red stallion of the unicorn race, slammed his hoof | |
| into the table in a show of anger, “Diligence, stop | |
| drumming up drama! Merger, drop it! Matrix, shut up and | |
| Visionary, stop complaining!” Visionary! That’s what | |
| it was. Gleam didn’t think it suited her. | |
| “This isn’t what we’re here for and | |
| there’s far more important matters to attend to than you | |
| two trying to screw each other over! Put it on ice and focus for | |
| Celestia’s sake!” This stallion was named Lion Heart | |
| and Gleam was rather familiar with him, though it wasn’t | |
| for reasons that Lion would appreciate. He was an example of | |
| governance that had yet to embarrass himself in some easy to | |
| avoid way. Scandals involving guard captains, embezzlement, | |
| altered documents and even rumors of smuggling had plagued all | |
| the other mayors present, but not Lion Heart. Somehow, | |
| he’d avoided the drama, and according to the higher ups he | |
| was an example to strive towards. Gleam had yet to be impressed. | |
| “Now, maybe if we’re done seeing who can p*iss | |
| further and on who’s face, we can focus?” Lion Heart | |
| finished before noticing Gleam. | |
| “Head Instructor,” Lion nodded, Gleam did not, | |
| “Thank you for coming. I understand it was short notice | |
| and I’d like to apologize for that right away before we | |
| get into things.” | |
| “Last I checked both Luna and Celestia were both still | |
| breathing,” Gleam growled and took a seat near the table | |
| away from the rest of the ponies for fear that he’d slap | |
| one of them the next time they spoke and rack up another favor | |
| on behalf of the country, “so unless the Elements have | |
| been kidnapped or turned into gelatinous cubes I don’t see | |
| why you needed to drag me away from my duties to witness you all | |
| bicker like school aged colts and fillies. I see enough of that | |
| already.” | |
| #Post#: 3418-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: October 31, 2017, 2:10 am | |
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| PART 3 | |
| --- | |
| He noticed only now that the table had a map scrolled across it | |
| of Equestria’s western countryside. There were several | |
| points marked with flags and a few notes had been scribbled and | |
| laid out over spots that Gleam could only assume were points of | |
| someone’s interest. | |
| “Trust me,” Lion continued, shooting Merger a brief | |
| glare to keep him from speaking out of turn, “I | |
| wouldn’t ask you to abandon your students if the situation | |
| weren’t dire. We need your help.” | |
| Lion glanced back at the sixth pony present, a unicorn fully | |
| equipped in armor that had yet to say a word amd seemed to be | |
| serving as both bodyguard and assistant to Lion. The | |
| unicorn’s horn lit up with a glow of magic as he levitated | |
| a scroll over to Gleam. | |
| “We seem to be under attack,” Lion claimed while | |
| Gleam rolled the scroll out in front him, “over the last | |
| few months there have been several occurrences of unusual and | |
| sudden appearances of various kinds of wildlife.” | |
| “Animals have been showing up seemingly out of | |
| nowhere,” Diligence spoke up, Gleam listening as he | |
| scanned the contents of the scroll, frowning the further into it | |
| he got, “So far we’ve counted four separate | |
| occasions, and they’ve been increasing in severi-” | |
| “It started in Greenswill,” the voice of Merger, | |
| cutting off Diligence in another display of short term petty | |
| self fulfilment, “some… animals materialized out of | |
| thin air. The guard looked into it but found no evidence of any | |
| criminal activity.” | |
| “That’s your city, isn’t it?” Gleam | |
| asked without looking up from his scroll, “what was the | |
| variety. Of wildlife, I mean.” | |
| “… It doesn’t matter-” | |
| “Bunnies!” Diligence interrupted, pausing only to | |
| catch her breath after a fit of laughter, “his market was | |
| flooded with bunny rabbits and it was the silliest thing anyone | |
| ever-“ | |
| “Yes! They were bunny rabbits!” Merger retook | |
| control of the conversation, speaking loud enough to drown out | |
| Diligence whom had refused to stop laughing over the nature of | |
| his crisis, “Rabbits appeared at noon in the center of the | |
| market square during the height of business hours, or so the | |
| patrons had reported. None of my guards had seen it happen, but | |
| according to witnesses the rabbits just suddenly appeared out of | |
| nowhere like they had teleported into the area with no warning. | |
| Like I said, I had my guards look into it but they found nothing | |
| beyond a few traces of magic. We’d assumed it was a prank | |
| some up and coming mage had played on us for laughs and | |
| disregarded it as such.” | |
| “Then a pack of dogs appeared in Noble’s | |
| market,” Visionary adopted the narrative, Gleam halfway | |
| through the scroll that detailed what he was being told though | |
| done so with more magical technicality and insight, | |
| “They showed up at noon during a grand opening for a new | |
| restaurant. Most were run off by the guards that were watching | |
| over the event but some managed to get a few bites in on the | |
| attending ponies before being scared off. We still get the | |
| occasional report of feral hounds harassing people after dark. I | |
| would have chalked it up as a prank similarly to how Merger had | |
| done so with his… uh… ‘bunny | |
| situation’,” another fit of laughter from Diligence, | |
| “but ours was different. When we investigated, I got | |
| reports from my guards that detailed how some of the dogs | |
| appeared to be… Inside the walls of the buildings around | |
| the market. Half of the dogs were melded into the building while | |
| the other half were, well… you know. This made us assume | |
| someone had used magic to teleport the dogs but had been off | |
| target.” | |
| The conversation stalled long enough for Diligence to catch her | |
| breath, Gleam finishing the scroll and setting it aside and | |
| impatiently clearing his throat. Diligence paid no mind. | |
| “Hahaha! Aha! Ah… Hah… Oh… Okay… | |
| So… After they dealt with their dumb harmless | |
| nonsense,” Diligence finally managed to form words, much | |
| to the chagrin of Merger and Visionary, “I was hit with | |
| timber wolves.” | |
| Diligence’s voice dropped to a sudden grave tone that | |
| Gleam hadn’t expected from the previously laughing mare. | |
| “They appeared closer to Perticity’s castle than in | |
| Greenswill and Noble, I might add, managed to do more damage | |
| than their stupid bunnies and dogs. Several ponies were mauled | |
| before my guards were able to get things under control, so maybe | |
| you two should stop friggin complain about the inconvenience of | |
| having mild woodland creatures show up to momentarily interrupt | |
| otherwise normal events!” | |
| Merger and Visionary went on to start shouting some pointless | |
| defense that Gleam didn’t care about. He ignored the | |
| brewing argument while he went over in his head what the scroll | |
| had informed him one more time. | |
| Several occurrences of seemingly random teleportation that | |
| involved animals of increasing threat classifications. First | |
| bunnies, then dogs and timber wolves. The report mentioned | |
| manticores coming next which Gleam assumed one of the mayors | |
| present would go into detail over soon enough, but he rolled the | |
| idea around regardless in hopes of ideas coming to him before | |
| this train wreck of a briefing was through. | |
| “Stop!” Lion again attempted to regain control of | |
| the conversation, his tone making it clear that his tolerance of | |
| these ponies and their rivalries was wearing extremely thin, | |
| “Your people are being attacked by wild animals and | |
| monsters from the Everfree, and you think this the time to argue | |
| and fight amongst ourselves? Reign it in! This is | |
| serious!” Lion took a second to let loose another sigh and | |
| shake his head at the others. | |
| “My city was next,” He turned his attention to | |
| Gleam, shooting the others quick stabbing glances as he spoke to | |
| keep them quiet, “and I think it’s fair to say that | |
| mine was the worst. Gleam, I noticed you rolled up the scroll I | |
| gave you, so I assume you read about the manticores? They hit | |
| Corona, right in the center of my castle’s square, and | |
| they did quite a bit of damage before my Cortoza were able to | |
| put them down.” | |
| Ah, yes, the Cortoza. Gleam almost rolled his eyes at the | |
| mention of Lion Heart’s pet project. A corps of battle | |
| mages intended to outperform and possibly replace the royal | |
| guard? He’d found the idea amusing a few decades ago when | |
| he’d had the honor of helping to found its original | |
| incarnation, but now it seemed like a rather desperate attempt | |
| to impress the royal sisters and make a name for himself. He | |
| didn’t bother hiding his distaste for Lion’s | |
| mentioning of the Cortoza as he never felt a need to and thought | |
| Lion’s defending of the resurrection of his retired corps | |
| to be sad. | |
| “They took control of the situation,” Lion continued | |
| with emphasis placed on the Cortoza’s efforts, | |
| “after putting them down and calming the civilians they | |
| cleaned up the mess. Immediately after I set them to investigate | |
| the situation I contacted the others here and learned of their | |
| experiences.” | |
| “what did Captain Willows find?” Gleam asked, | |
| speaking for the first time in what he felt was forever. | |
| “Willows wasn’t consult-“ | |
| “What did Captain Willows find?” Gleam repeated, his | |
| tone demanding in his desire to know what the captain of | |
| Corona’s guard had discovered. | |
| “Willows. Was. Not. Consulted,” Lion repeated with a | |
| blunt stop and start cadence, “My Cortoza were assigned to | |
| investigate the phenomena and found little to go on.” | |
| “You’re toy soldiers failed to pick up on any leads | |
| then?” Gleam chuckled, directing his attention to the | |
| table in front of him as Lion huffed from his corner, | |
| “I’m shocked. Truly. What’s this all about | |
| then? This map has markers over several towns and cities that | |
| none of you mentioned. What’s their significance?” | |
| “We’ve been trying to discern a pattern,” | |
| Visionary spoke up to explain, “There’s no concrete | |
| rhythm to the appearances that we’ve been able to | |
| decipher, but we’ve noted several possible targets that | |
| might be hit next according to the locations that have already | |
| fell victim to these attacks.” | |
| “Attacks!?” Diligence nearly fell over, clutching at | |
| her sides as she howled with laughter, | |
| “’Attacks’ she says! Dogs and bunnies! | |
| Ahahahaha!” | |
| “… These are the most likely targets according to | |
| our estimations,” Visionary tried to ignore the raucous | |
| cackling of Diligence, “We can’t tell for sure where | |
| it might happen next, of course, but we’re pretty | |
| confident that it will be in one of these two locations.” | |
| “Berylsburg,” Gleam named off one of the marked | |
| locations, a sizable city some distance away. He shot Matrix a | |
| glance at the mention as he realized why the pony had been | |
| present this whole time. | |
| “And… what is that… Weaver? Why is Weaver | |
| marked on here?” | |
| “Weaver is going to be holding a festival within the next | |
| few days,” Matrix mentioned while scrutinizing his left | |
| hoof’s most recent manicure, “Some locally run | |
| square dance or whatever they do out in the boonies. Lion | |
| think’s that might make it a target but I don’t get | |
| why. It’s just some backwater where everyone sleeps all | |
| day, I think.” | |
| “It’s the nap capitol of the world, actually,” | |
| Diligence tapped near Weaver’s position on the map and | |
| whispered as if letting everyone in on a secret, “They | |
| make blankets.” | |
| “Every attack has happened either in a center of a | |
| congregation of ponies or near the cities administration,” | |
| Lion stepped in again, “and a festival falls in line with | |
| the former. However, I agree that it’s an unlikely target. | |
| Berylsburg is a much stronger candidate what with its upcoming | |
| gem exchange.” | |
| “Yeah,” Matrix, “we get tons of tourism this | |
| time of year since a bunch of collectors show up and show off | |
| their rare gems. It does wonders for the economy, I tell you | |
| what. Those nerds love to flaunt their shiny rocks.” | |
| Gleam looked over the map and weighed the options. He’d | |
| heard of Weaver but never been there personally. The festival | |
| coming up was unknown to him, and as such he could only assume | |
| it was more of a local event than Berylsburg’s well known | |
| gem exchange that reliably attracted thousands of ponies every | |
| year. As a “nerd” – according to Matrix at | |
| least – he found himself in agreement with the arrogant | |
| mayor. Especially when considering that, in this heatwave, most | |
| of the exchange would probably be taking place indoors to get | |
| out of the sun. More concentrated targets. More potential for | |
| damage. | |
| There was, however, one question that had been bothering Gleam | |
| ever since he’d received that scroll from Lion Heart. | |
| “Why haven’t you told the royal sisters?” | |
| Gleam was blunt, staring Lion in the eye as he asked this. | |
| Lion was hesitant to answer, but Diligence started to snicker as | |
| had become common behavior for her when it came to the other | |
| mayors’ missteps. | |
| “Well?” she asked halfway through a breath, | |
| “Why haven’t you told the princess? Please, | |
| enlighten us.” | |
| Lion avoided eye contact with the others. He glanced back at his | |
| bodyguard, Gleam only now noticing the insignia on the | |
| guards’ armor and scoffing while Lion turned back to | |
| finally answer. | |
| “The Cortoza can handle this,” He claimed, the other | |
| mayors either groaning or chuckling at the idea, “All they | |
| need is to be told where to go and we can stop it. One lead and | |
| this problem is solved.” | |
| “You want me to trust your toy soldiers with what could | |
| potentially be a burgeoning crisis?” Gleam’s words | |
| cut like a knife, Lion flinching slightly while the other mayors | |
| only took pleasure in it, “Have you gone insane? | |
| This needs to be brought to Celestia or Luna immediately.” | |
| “No!” Lion pleaded, Diligence cackling away in the | |
| background, “Gleam, I know you don’t think much of | |
| me, but I implore you, give my Cortoza this chance! I’ve | |
| already gone through the trouble to organize this meeting, | |
| Corona is far closer to both of the next potential targets than | |
| Canterlot and I have a number of prepped teams on stand-by just | |
| waiting for me to say the word-” | |
| “Sorry, you’re going to have to repeat that,” | |
| Gleam said after loudly shushing Lion down, “You’ll | |
| have to forgive me, I’m getting up there in years so | |
| it’s getting a tad difficult to be sure, but it sounded | |
| like the words that just came out of your mouth weren’t: | |
| ‘Yes, Head Instructor, I apologize for being a selfish | |
| child that values his project over the security of my people and | |
| will alert both Celestia and Luna immediately’. Am I | |
| wrong? Someone correct me because I swear it sounded like | |
| something completely different!” | |
| Lion was silent then straightened himself out and looked Gleam | |
| in the eye. | |
| “I’ve done my research, Head Instructor. I know | |
| about the Cortoza. Their past, their history, what they did and | |
| what they were capable of. I also know that you’ve doubted | |
| my reincarnation of the corps since its inception. But please, | |
| just give them a chance. I have overseen their training, taken | |
| great pains to ensure that they are the best of the best, all so | |
| I can prove that their corps not only is needed but has a place | |
| in today’s military that none can deny. | |
| “I grew up with stories of what you and your friends | |
| managed to do,” Lion continued, his gaze dropping to the | |
| floor beneath him, “My library is one of the few to still | |
| have surviving evidence of these events. Gigatrax, The Cloven | |
| March, Surmount…” | |
| Lion sighed, the stallion sitting down where he was and focusing | |
| on the map in front of him as he ran a hoof across his forehead | |
| to wipe away a few beads of sweat. | |
| “I know that the Cortoza are exactly what we need in this | |
| day and age. All they need is one opportunity to prove | |
| themselves. This is that opportunity, I‘m sure of | |
| it.” | |
| There was silence. | |
| Then Matrix spoke up. | |
| “I say let it blow up in his face,” Diligence loved | |
| this idea and expressed it in a way that I’m sure you can | |
| assume, “I mean, his joke of a guard reformation guided by | |
| a selfish desire to be at the head is primed to become a | |
| hilarious disaster already. Why not go full throttle?” | |
| Lion glared daggers at Matrix while Merger contributed with: | |
| “I honestly don’t care either way. Whatever shows up | |
| will be an issue for you all to deal with anyway so I | |
| don’t really give a flying fudge what you decide. I | |
| don’t even know why I’m here. Did I mention that my | |
| city only had to deal with a sudden explosion in it’s | |
| rabbit population? Can I leave now? I don’t think | |
| I’m really relevant to this discussion.” | |
| “Sit down!” Lion barked, bringing Merger’s | |
| butt back to the ground. | |
| “So long as someone looks into it, I’m happy,” | |
| Visionary sounded urgently, “Just so long as maybe it | |
| happens right now? We’ve spent all this time talking but | |
| we’ve decide on almost nothing. Can we get a move | |
| on?” | |
| The group looked in Diligence’s direction but were left | |
| with no insight as she just slapped on a smirk and shrugged. | |
| Gleam passed his gaze between each of the ponies. He gave each a | |
| full scan before moving on, focusing on the eyes and body | |
| language before moving on to the next. Eventually he reached | |
| Lion and narrowed his own watery gray eyes. After a few seconds, | |
| he looked back down at the map scrawled out in front of him. | |
| “… I’ll see what I can do to send a few guards | |
| over to Berylsburg,” Gleam assured the congregation after | |
| heaving a deep breath, “I can call in some favors and pull | |
| some people. They can show up under cover and keep an eye on | |
| things. If anything suspicious comes up they can send word to | |
| Corona then Canterlot and we can decide what to do from there. | |
| “but know this, Lion,” Gleam growled, leaning over | |
| the table and appearing somehow larger than he had before, | |
| “If these wannabes that you’ve scrounged together | |
| fail to provide results, they’re finished. I will | |
| personally come to Corona and fire each pony one by one and turn | |
| their little headquarters into a bakery.” | |
| Lion didn’t flinch, but Gleam felt he’d gotten the | |
| message. | |
| “What of Weaver?” Visionary asked, thrusting a hoof | |
| in the town’s respective position on the map. | |
| Gleam backed off the table and looked towards Weaver on the map. | |
| After some thought, he waved a dismissive hoof at the town. | |
| “I know a couple of ponies that can look into | |
| Weaver...” | |
| --- | |
| Characters would either be attending the festival at Weaver or | |
| would be assigned to investigate depending on who they are. This | |
| opening may be tweaked depending on if the arc starts in a | |
| manner that would require it. | |
| #Post#: 3566-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: March 18, 2018, 11:44 am | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| TL;DR: Updating the canon of the forum is ultimately meaningless | |
| because most people here don't follow it anyway. Easy example is | |
| all the modern warfare stuff that would remain regardless. Also, | |
| I'm going to be posting ideas I've been having regarding other | |
| countries and races in the world that may or may not be | |
| important to my arc and any stories I am at the helm of in the | |
| future. I am NOT forcing others to accept any of it as overall | |
| canon for the forum unless it's good enough to be. I just want | |
| to share ideas and going in depth about the details of a race or | |
| country is fun for me. | |
| -- | |
| As I've mentioned before, when I get bored I think about ideas | |
| and stuff for stories and settings. So over the last couple | |
| months I've been brainstorming ideas regarding world building | |
| for the places outside of Equestria that I think would be neat | |
| and flesh out the world. I mention this because starting two or | |
| three weeks ago I began writing things down to get these ideas | |
| on paper so I could share them with everyone both for fun and to | |
| help the forum understand where I come from when it comes to | |
| things like the arc that is being run. These posts would include | |
| descriptions of races - both seen in the series and ones I think | |
| could reasonably exist - their countries, leadership, culture, | |
| politics and opinions of each other. Basically I will be | |
| overthinking the setting of a show intended for small children | |
| as everyone on the internet with nothing else to do should. | |
| Now there are two reasons why I bring this up. One is the fact | |
| that talks have begun regarding updating this forum's official | |
| canon to that of the movie and such which I wanted this post to | |
| contain my opinion on, and the other is so I can very clearly | |
| state that I am NOT trying to force these ideas as canon onto | |
| anyone's character or stories. However! When it comes to stories | |
| I myself am writing, such as the arc or characters I come up | |
| with, this world building is what I will most likely be | |
| referring to for backstory and noteworthy details when | |
| discussing the world in character. I do my best not to | |
| contradict the official canon, and I will happily work to fix | |
| any mistakes that are pointed out. Other than that I expect | |
| nothing to be official outside my own little plot lines unless | |
| somehow everyone else likes it enough to make it so. | |
| Continuing from that thought and moving on to discussing the | |
| update - and assuming that my opinion carries any weight after I | |
| explain where I'm coming from - I find the process of doing so | |
| to be easy and ultimately inconsequential. The reason I say this | |
| is because even if you do update the canon it's not really going | |
| to change much when it comes to how we all operate outside of it | |
| already. This forum doesn't hug what's been established all that | |
| closely and as I was recently skimming through the factions and | |
| character bio's I found that there is a decent focus on military | |
| groups and modern technological weaponry and devices. Now I'm | |
| not going to sit here and pretend that it's impossible for there | |
| to be any kind of military force in the series since we've seen | |
| magic used offensively and I think the movie's inciting event is | |
| that of an invading hostile force - not to mention one of the | |
| countries I've been world building practices mandatory military | |
| service - but I'm going to go out on a limb here and assume that | |
| this force didn't role up in tanks with AR-15s and helicopter | |
| support. Pretty sure that isn't canon and more likely than not | |
| would punch some pretty big plot holes as to how the kid | |
| friendly story of a group of friends saving the day wasn't | |
| riddled with bullets and left to bleed out. | |
| I really don't want to sound like a jerk, but I can't really | |
| think of a better term than "cherry-picking" when it comes to | |
| fan forum's in general and what they decide to keep from the | |
| official material and what they just ignore. Someone else | |
| mentioned the idea of only accepting pieces of the movie's canon | |
| into the forum which falls in line with this but at the same | |
| time I don't really see any other way of doing it because that's | |
| whats going to happen regardless of if you take just the races, | |
| one location or the whole package. This is because once its in | |
| it will start being sliced up with the things that people liked | |
| - and are conveniently not in the way of headcanon - being kept | |
| front and center while stuff that raises questions gets shoved | |
| aside. This is what fanfiction does. | |
| I haven't seen the movie. I've read reviews, listened to | |
| critiques, watched clips, heard bits of the music, seen some of | |
| the new characters and locations and gone through the synopsis. | |
| I know what happens in it, and overall it comes off as a weak | |
| film to me that I'm happy to have not spent any money on. I also | |
| haven't watched the 6th season, or the 5th, I don't remember the | |
| slog I went through with the fourth and I didn't like half of | |
| the third. Assuming you're still reading after that I'll | |
| continue. I'm the kind of person who thinks things would have | |
| been far better if both Twilight and Cadence had remained or | |
| simply been unicorns from the start. To be dramatic, the show's | |
| world would have been better off, and I know people's usual | |
| argument is to not take it so seriously and that its just a | |
| cartoon but I don't look at media as mindless colors and shapes | |
| that you're supposed to just appreciate for existing. | |
| Allow me a moment to vent about this a bit. | |
| The Secret of NIMH - not the second one - is my favorite go to | |
| example for entertainment intended for younger audiences that I, | |
| as an adult, watched and found to be quite enjoyable as it | |
| wasn't contradictory nonsense at every turn, had a consistent | |
| story to follow, was beautiful to watch and even got dark in | |
| some parts that probably would have been spooky for kids. Now | |
| that was a movie, so it had one single story to tell from start | |
| to finish with nothing in the way of it whereas this is a show | |
| that releases multiple stories per season and is required to try | |
| and keep fresh ideas coming. One could argue that its far more | |
| difficult to stay consistent when trying to come up with new | |
| episodes every season, but I argue that its just as easy. Every | |
| episode is there to be reviewed and fact checked which leaves no | |
| room for "accidental" contradictions. Sometimes it feels like | |
| the people writing the episodes haven't even watched the rest of | |
| the show which if I were magically in charge I would force my | |
| writers to do before ever letting them pen a single idea for an | |
| official continuation of the series. The only reason it's gotten | |
| as bad as it has is because of so many people meddling with the | |
| show for the sole purpose of slapping their name onto and being | |
| associated with something that was wildly popular a few years | |
| ago. | |
| Back in MY day: the Main 6 had story arcs and life goals, the | |
| alicorns were royalty/demigods/gods, the unicorns casted magic, | |
| the pegasi controlled the weather and the earth ponies worked to | |
| supply the superior races with the bounty of their fields! | |
| (Disclaimer: Applejack is my favorite.) Now alicorns are just | |
| made - I wonder what trials and lessons Cadence supposedly went | |
| through to become one - presumably from unicorns, further | |
| cementing their place as the master race and I wont get super | |
| into the Mane 6 but it feels like they're just given everything | |
| they ever wanted now with no sense of responsibility or | |
| commitment to it. | |
| Because of all of this I fell out of love of watching anything | |
| new for the series a long time ago. I do, however, still quite | |
| enjoy the first couple seasons and I think the setting itself, | |
| while cutesy and silly, can be a lot of fun and a good base for | |
| writing fantasy adventures. If I didn't I wouldn't be checking | |
| the forum every day to see if anyone's posted so I can start | |
| working out the details for the next step in the arc's thread. | |
| But, I think its clear that the canon of the show hasn't been | |
| important to forum's, or even really itself, in a long time. | |
| Were it actually an issue we'd be seeing a lot more swords and | |
| spells with simple or one off gag examples of technology - | |
| except for stages I guess? It seems music is given multiple | |
| examples of modern mix tables, microphones and sound set ups? - | |
| and a lot less oorah soldiering, advanced computers and weaponry | |
| with a lack of horror towards death even though the ponies of | |
| Equestria seem mostly peaceful and harmless. I've made it | |
| obvious in the past that I would personally prefer the former | |
| since its closer to what the show was when it was starting out | |
| but that's another - irrelevant at this point in time - | |
| discussion about canon entirely as it would revolve around how | |
| much change to the official stuff is reasonable. | |
| Anyway, that's my two cents. I know I haven't been here as long | |
| as everyone else and that most of the stuff I pointed out has | |
| been around since the beginning of the forum, but that's how I | |
| feel when it comes to the question over updating the forum's | |
| canon. That being that it probably wouldn't change much anyway. | |
| I sort rambled a lot in this like I always do so I wouldn't | |
| blame anyone for seeing the wall of text and noping the hell | |
| away from it. I just wanted to make it clear that I wanted to be | |
| honest not mean and that this isn't me ranting, just trying to | |
| explain how I see the show, where I was with it, my reason why | |
| and the topic of incorporating the canon. | |
| [spoiler]If you do go with the races from the movie, I would beg | |
| of you not to include the dumb anthro cats. I hate anthro cat | |
| people in everything I see them in. Why couldn't they have just | |
| been lions, or tigers, or just big cats? Feels like a gateway | |
| for arguments revolving around "but I like this animal and we | |
| already saw anthro cats so why can't there be anthro this?", | |
| which is fine if you're a furry, but that's not what I thought | |
| this forum was when I joined.[/spoiler] | |
| #Post#: 3569-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: March 19, 2018, 1:11 am | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| To show that I am in no way innocent when it comes to never | |
| breaking from canon, I'mma throw up a piece of the world | |
| building I've been brewing out of boredom the last few weeks. | |
| Again, I am not forcing this to be canon and wont be forcing it | |
| into stories or arcs outside of my own. I just think its fun to | |
| share ideas. | |
| THE GRIFFON KINGDOM | |
| CULTURE� | |
| Griffon culture is strict, harsh and cold but ultimately fair as | |
| it merely expects the best from each of its citizens. The | |
| average griffon�s personality often reflects their homeland in | |
| that they are difficult to learn and work around but is | |
| something you can come to appreciate and rely on once you�ve | |
| gotten used to it. Their often blunt and critical observations | |
| and interactions can easily come off as the behavior of a bully | |
| and overall negative person to the uninitiated which has given | |
| them a reputation across the world for being callous and | |
| difficult to please. | |
| In the Griffon Kingdom all citizens native to the country are | |
| provided with a full education up until they reach adulthood | |
| where each take part in mandatory military service. While in the | |
| service each are given ample opportunity and encouragement to | |
| choose what jobs best suit their talents and interests so long | |
| as it ultimately is a benefit to the Kingdom. Training and some | |
| higher education is provided on the Kingdom�s dime while serving | |
| but once an individual reaches the end of their service they are | |
| given a simple choice to either remain in the service or strike | |
| out using everything they�d learned to build a new life. | |
| Once outside of the service the Kingdom no longer holds their | |
| hand. Everyone is expected to either sink or swim with little | |
| sympathy being paid to those who fail as everyone is left on | |
| equal footing when starting out. Handouts from the crown are | |
| unheard of and there are few government programs in place to | |
| assist people struggling beyond providing basic necessities to | |
| keep them alive. The only exception to this way of life comes in | |
| the form of the Eagles whom are known to help where they think | |
| it necessary to maintain a fair environment for all. | |
| While seen as harsh when viewing it from the outside, the | |
| Griffons of the Kingdom view it as a lifelong trial by fire. | |
| Shared service and mutual struggle within this meritocracy | |
| encourages competition which each Griffon relishes while | |
| encouraging each other to rise above as they wish for only the | |
| worthiest of rivals and friends to test themselves against. The | |
| average Griffon expects the best from the rest and strives to | |
| meet this expectation themselves whether it be in solo endeavors | |
| or working as a team. Those who reach great heights are idolized | |
| as heroes who came from nothing, easy shining examples of this | |
| being the Eagles who watch over the Kingdom and earn adoration | |
| from the rest of the populace. | |
| Griffons often share a strong sense of brotherhood with the rest | |
| of their people forged through similar experiences growing up. | |
| This combined with their near constant rivalries encourages a | |
| respect that few of them take for granted. When engaged in | |
| friendly pastimes its easy for a group of griffons to quickly | |
| warm to each other and soon be chatting as if they�d known each | |
| other for years. Sports are a celebrated part of Griffon life as | |
| it feeds into their competitive spirits perfectly. Athletes are | |
| common subjects for conversation with an extra praise being paid | |
| to wrestlers and boxers as individual showings of strength and | |
| skill are widely approved of. | |
| Music among the griffons has a heavy emphasis on heavy or fast | |
| beats to move to. Whatever can get the blood pumping is popular | |
| among most of the Kingdom�s citizens with more calming music | |
| being viewed as boring and for children being put to bed. | |
| Musicians are a common choice for younger griffons planning out | |
| their lives as their claws allow for the use of most known | |
| instruments that don�t outright require magic to play. Several | |
| genres and sub-genres of music have been innovated over the last | |
| few generations especially with unique vocals and kicked up | |
| tempos catching on with the youth of today. The elderly describe | |
| it as screechy noise with the dancing that often accompanies it | |
| being a �wild flailing that will probably get someone hurt.� | |
| Aside from music, art amongst the griffons usually includes | |
| pieces described as �spontaneous� by critics of their homeland. | |
| Their claws allow for above average �real� sculpting and | |
| paintings often incorporating high varieties of colors. | |
| Splatters and erratic strokes decorate the more prized examples | |
| of painted Griffon works while the most revered sculpture from | |
| the Kingdom is a statue depicting their lost deity Aeolus that | |
| is currently and proudly displayed in the foyer of the Griffon | |
| Royal Palace. | |
| POLITICS - | |
| MERITOCRACY - The Griffon Kingdom operates off a meritocracy for | |
| most positions of power in both government and civilian life. | |
| Family connections and wealth mean little when it comes to who | |
| is selected for each job and corruption is surprisingly low due | |
| to the vigilance of the Eagles. A griffon�s skills and talent is | |
| what gets them places in the Kingdom, and each are expected to | |
| give every effort their all as should they fail to live up to | |
| expectations they will be quickly replaced with someone who can. | |
| ELECTED MONARCH - The Kingdom itself is ruled by an elected | |
| monarch upon the current leader�s death, inability to continue | |
| ruling or ejection from the throne should the Eagles deem it | |
| necessary. A worthy monarch is granted all the powers and | |
| privileges as to be expected for any ruler of a major power once | |
| elected and is responsible for the management of the state. | |
| Currently the Kingdom is ruled by Ol� Wren, a veteran of several | |
| campaigns within The Basin whom was able to take and hold the | |
| Crescent�s Shan Fortress for three days and survive an encounter | |
| with the Orchid before having his forces driven off. | |
| The elections that led to Wren�s office were held shortly after | |
| the inevitable white peace that followed a few months later, the | |
| previous griffon Queen suffering from a fatal heart attack a | |
| week after signing the treaty and fueling a slew of conspiracy | |
| theories as a result. The results were near unanimous as was to | |
| be expected considering the fresh anti-Crescent sentiment | |
| amongst the populace and the candidate�s feats made against | |
| them. Popular then and now, Wren boasts the near universal | |
| support of the Eagles and the people. With his stances on their | |
| neighbors, confidence in dealing with the crescent and intent on | |
| taming the mountains to the north, Wren is viewed as a capable | |
| leader who is expected to lead his country to an era of | |
| prosperity. | |
| EAGLES - The Eagles are an elite class of citizens who have been | |
| recognized as examples of what every griffon should strive to | |
| be. To become an Eagle one must either show extreme physical | |
| talent, high intelligence and a strong potential for leadership | |
| while serving out their mandatory years in the military or later | |
| achieve a multitude of great achievements that puts them head | |
| and shoulders above their peers. Upon being recruited, aspirants | |
| are granted specialized training and higher education � if | |
| lacking - to prepare them for their roles and responsibilities | |
| in society. | |
| An Eagle is expected to be everything that a Griffon can be in | |
| the Kingdom and is expected to be prepared for and useful in | |
| every situation. In peace they are mentors and enforce the law | |
| while watching the throne and keeping the Ravens and Elected | |
| Monarch in check. In court they are both judge and jury and can | |
| carry out sentences as they see fit with only another eagle | |
| having the ability to step in should they deem it necessary. In | |
| war they are commanders and elite commandos that can potentially | |
| change the tide of a battle both on the front line and beyond | |
| it. | |
| Eagles carry similar influence to that of the Elected Monarch | |
| and are the sole owners of the privilege to eject the monarch | |
| from their throne should they prove to be either a danger to the | |
| country or too incompetent to rule. This privilege comes at the | |
| price of removing their ability to vote and disqualifies them | |
| from the election themselves. No one Eagle commands the rest, | |
| but respect is important to them and it isn�t uncommon for | |
| unofficial leaders to rise amongst them based on merit and | |
| experience. | |
| RAVENS - In the Kingdom, the Ravens are the strange and shadowy | |
| figures in the corners of the bar and hunched in cloaks over the | |
| armrest of the throne whispering in the Elected Monarch�s ear. | |
| Acting as spies and saboteurs, the Ravens are the dirty secret | |
| of the Kingdom that they claim don�t even exist. Many a coup | |
| have been foiled before being able to even take root thanks to | |
| these dark figures constantly watching for signs of trouble. | |
| Several engagements with the Crescent have been either negated | |
| or won thanks to the unsung work that these griffons carry out. | |
| The Ravens monitor all, including the Eagles and the Elected | |
| Monarch, their one loyalty supposedly being to the throne itself | |
| and the country it is at the head of. | |
| DIPLOMACY - | |
| TRADE � Within the canyons that form the majority of their | |
| homeland the Kingdom has established a number of mines that dig | |
| into the sides of cliff faces and crevices where they�ve tapped | |
| into several rich veins of silver, Iron, and numerous deposits | |
| of common crystals and minerals such as quartz, calcite and | |
| feldspar. Silver is obviously valued the world over for it�s | |
| beauty, but the common crystals of their lands are no slouches | |
| when it comes to pulling their economic weight. Jewelers are | |
| always in need of such things to work their craft and the | |
| Mamlakat Khunfisa� are always offering high sums for the | |
| minerals they consider �quaint� to craft special jewelry for | |
| their pharaoh. | |
| Aside from the mines, the Griffon Kingdom has unique access to | |
| the ancient Greatwood Trees around which they often center their | |
| towns and cities. Made from a special type of greatwood | |
| possessing unusual properties of regeneration and strong | |
| elemental resistances, this lumber forms the materials used to | |
| craft special armors worn by the Eagles and is in high demand by | |
| the Equestrians as their qualities prove quite valuable to the | |
| countries expansion south. The Mamlakat Khunfisa and Saddle | |
| Arabian royalty and nobility prove to be in consistent demand | |
| for the lumber as well as the former uses it to craft fresh | |
| litters for their pharaoh and the latter value it�s heat | |
| resistance to help shade markets and palace grounds from the | |
| desert sun. The regenerative properties of the Greatwood Trees | |
| allow for this to be an ever-renewable resource so long as the | |
| griffons harvesting it remain responsible and take care to not | |
| over do it. | |
| The final major export of the Kingdom is that of swords and | |
| metal armors. The griffon�s supply of raw iron, strong military | |
| and near constant threat of conflict with the Crescent Empire | |
| often leads them to forge a large stockpile of weapons and armor | |
| that they end up not using. A history of conflict has lead to | |
| rather advanced techniques in weapon smithing amongst the | |
| griffons and while the rank and file examples are usually sold | |
| in bulk when their trade partners require it the more | |
| prestigious swords and suits of armor forged by masters often | |
| fetch high prices in auctions. | |
| EQUESTRIAN ALLIES � The Equestrians are one of the Kingdom�s | |
| nearest neighbors, Equestria being just across the sea off the | |
| Kingdom�s west coast, and they have been recognized as an | |
| official ally of each monarch to take the throne for the last | |
| century. Relations between the two powers are usually cordial | |
| with at least one dignitary belonging to each maintaining a | |
| permanent residence within their capitol cities to keep contact | |
| strong. Interests are often mutual with a heavy focus on trade, | |
| the sea between the two being a major asset for both as it acts | |
| as a stage for multiple high value routes both between the two | |
| and towards the south to the Caravaneers port city of Shilling. | |
| Beyond trade the Griffons usually prefer to solve their own | |
| problems - as their culture expects of them - and are reluctant | |
| to drag Equestria into their affairs unless in dire need. | |
| CRESCENT RIVALS - While friendly towards the Equestrian�s, the | |
| same can�t be said when it comes to the Crescent and their | |
| empire whom share a border with the Griffons to the East and | |
| constantly battle over the ownership of The Basin located there. | |
| Hostile relations are frustratingly common between the Griffons | |
| and the Crescent�s emperor Tanxin Zhu with everything from near | |
| constant espionage and sabotage to armed conflict breaking out | |
| every other decade. Both are openly intolerant of the other with | |
| each viewing the opposite side as something to eventually | |
| conquer. Trade is banned with the Crescent resulting in the | |
| reliance on the Griffon�s sea trade with the Equestrian�s to the | |
| west and the Caravaneers of the south. | |
| WARM TO THE CARAVANEERS - The Kingdom appreciates the | |
| Caravaneers of Sidon as they act as valuable assets in moving | |
| goods both to and from the southern powers. The Crescent | |
| Empire�s proximity to the Kingdom makes travel south difficult | |
| to manage for the griffons, but this is not the case for the | |
| Caravaneers and they regularly carry the burden of bringing | |
| money to the Kingdom from the south for a price the Griffons are | |
| happy to pay. | |
| WARY OF THE ARABIANS � The notorious Cabals of the Saddle | |
| Arabians leaves the Griffon Kingdom on their guard whenever | |
| dealing with them. The idea of not being able to trust the words | |
| of ambassadors supposedly sent on behalf of the sultans is | |
| something the Griffons find unsettling in deeper ways than the | |
| obvious. To them, loyalty Is important, and to play to loosely | |
| with the concept is to lower yourself to a level unbefitting of | |
| a power carrying the amount of influence that the Arabians do in | |
| their lands. Still, the Arabians are a consistent customer when | |
| it comes to the griffon�s greatwood and have yet to come short | |
| in paying up, so relations remain. | |
| BEETLE BUDDIES � The Mamlakat Khunfisa� is ignored by the common | |
| griffon, but those in charge understand the worth in maintaining | |
| relations. The Khunfisa�s pharaoh is a huge fan of not only | |
| their common stones but also the greatwood that forms the | |
| backbone of the griffon�s trade. Not only are they always in | |
| demand, but the Khunfisa are so small that ordering anything | |
| other than tiny shipments would be a threat to their pharaoh�s | |
| ego as leaving it out in the open would allow thieves and | |
| bandits the opportunity to swoop in and steal it away. As such | |
| the orders are always fitting to their size but not their prices | |
| as each order is specially made and handsomely compensated by | |
| the pharaoh�s personal agents themselves. | |
| DEITY - | |
| Celestia and Luna manipulate the celestial bodies, Tanxin Zhu | |
| plays with the earth as if he were an artist with clay, the | |
| Mamlakat Khunfisa and Kiroho Tribes claim a bond with the | |
| spirits and undeath, experts suspect the Ouroboros of the | |
| Wildland Serpientes possesses a power we have yet to understand, | |
| and the Arabians have their poor Djinni who remains ever | |
| frustrated with their meddling. | |
| For the griffons, none of them could compare to the mighty | |
| Aeolus, progenitor of their people, planter of the Greatwoods | |
| and master of the winds. Their first king who trekked to the | |
| north with unknown intent and was lost to them, Aeolus is the | |
| example to which each monarch and Eagle is compared so that the | |
| griffon people could hope to have something even remotely | |
| nearing his greatness until he someday returns home to reclaim | |
| his throne and lead them forever after. | |
| The Griffons claim a connection to the winds that whip through | |
| their canyons and test their resolve daily. Difficult for them | |
| but near impossible for others without the right conditioning, | |
| the winds explain the strength of the average griffon�s wings | |
| and their common skill in flight as they happily carry out their | |
| day to day routines under even the most violent of storms and | |
| hazardous gusts. Common belief among the griffons is that each | |
| gust within their homeland is sent to them directly via the will | |
| of Aeolus himself from wherever he is now to keep his people | |
| strong. While most are skeptical, they do find it odd that the | |
| winds of the Kingdom tend to take on some strange behaviors | |
| whenever the Crescent manage to breach their border, easing up | |
| on the griffon forces and blasting away at the Terracotta of Zhu | |
| as if angered by their trespass. | |
| #Post#: 3571-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: March 19, 2018, 11:09 pm | |
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| More. Same as before. Not canon unless people think its neat. | |
| THE CRESCENT EMPIRE | |
| GEOGRAPHY – | |
| The Empire enjoys a large variety to their surroundings with | |
| everything from snowy mountains in the north to the edges of the | |
| deserts to the south. In the east they reach nearly up to the | |
| coast while the west is buffered with a great basin that divides | |
| the land between themselves and their griffon neighbors. The | |
| Empire’s sole city of Y� is found in the great plains at | |
| the heart of their territory. | |
| CULTURE – | |
| The Crescent Empire is decadent and rich. The natives, a breed | |
| of unicorns who’s horns curve unlike those of the average | |
| Equestrian variety, are pampered and cared for by an army of | |
| clay terracotta servants in exchange for a constant taxation of | |
| their magical energy. While crippling the average crescent when | |
| it comes to casting any advanced magic, the exchange leaves them | |
| cared for when it comes to most needs purely for remaining a | |
| citizen and partaking in The Tax. The average crescent needs not | |
| even work and is supplied with an allowance that makes it easy | |
| for them to each pursue whatever entertainment or hobbies they | |
| desire. The above average Crescent are recruited by the Emperor | |
| to become Craftsmen, Overseers and Commanders each of whom are | |
| exempt from the Tax in exchange for their service. | |
| With little else to do but pursue their dreams and make use of a | |
| readily available, free and high-quality education available to | |
| them, Crescent unicorns often become incredible experts in their | |
| fields of study or masters of their chosen crafts. | |
| Unfortunately, their easy lives and dedication to their ruler | |
| heavily discourages emigration or travel and usually leads to | |
| these experts remaining within and working solely for the | |
| Empire. | |
| How can the Empire afford to pay for the lives of an entire | |
| population? The goods crafted within it’s city walls are | |
| of unmatched quality and extremely exotic design. Everything | |
| from their art to their exported rugs and pots are highly sought | |
| after by the richest collectors and nobility the world ever. | |
| Each piece fetches exorbitant prices to prey on the wallets and | |
| egos of those hoping to show it off as a display of wealth and | |
| power, and with most of the Empire’s menial labor being | |
| handled by mindless servants that require minimal maintenance | |
| and no fuel, all this money is used to fund the Crescent’s | |
| lifestyle. Going further, most shops are also run by terracotta | |
| and are government owned as a result, meaning the money spent | |
| goes right back to the Empire’s treasury which is then | |
| sent back out to the people in the next grant of allowance. | |
| Entertainment within the Empire’s singular city of Y� is | |
| the envy of the world. Ancient awe-inspiring theatres, opera | |
| houses, symphonies practiced to perfection, stadiums for live | |
| practice battles between Commanders, and prestigious art | |
| galleries filled with one of a kind masterpiece. Even taking a | |
| simple walk through the streets of Y� can consume an entire day | |
| as the city’s size, aesthetic, and blocks teeming with | |
| attractions can feel like an adventure to explore as there is | |
| always something new to experience and enjoy. | |
| Life is easy for the Crescent and is often made easy for most | |
| unicorns or otherwise magically adept foreigners immigrating to | |
| the Empire, but the same cannot be said for the rest of the | |
| races. If you can’t cast magic and do not possess | |
| something that can be siphoned via The Tax to feed the Emperor, | |
| you are treated worse than dirt. The allowance afforded to the | |
| crescent is absent for the magic handicapped races with each | |
| being forced to accept the only work available to them. | |
| Mining, logging, farming, cleaning, building, retail and | |
| soldiering are all handled by the clay terracotta headed by a | |
| qualified Overseer or Commander. Factories however are still | |
| very necessary for creating the terracotta themselves that | |
| protect and care for the crescent, and while an Overseer and his | |
| team of Craftsmen are required to run each location and weave | |
| the needed spells to make them function, the pieces needed to | |
| build them are simply mundane materials that still require | |
| manufacturing and assembly. As such this is where the lesser | |
| races are relegated with some sequestered slums often being | |
| built nearby to prevent them from making appearances in the | |
| better parts of the city and dirty up the Crescent’s image | |
| of perfection. The question of why this isn’t merely | |
| handled by yet more terracotta is often shrugged off by Zhu and | |
| his court with the simple response of this being the lesser | |
| races way of earning their place in their great empire. | |
| POLITICS – | |
| IMMORTAL EMPEROR – The Empire is forever ruled by an | |
| immortal and powerful dragon known as Tānxīn Zhu whom | |
| feeds off his people’s magical energies through The Tax | |
| and uses it to fuel and continuously grow his own strength. | |
| Serpentine and wingless, Zhu does not resemble the dragons that | |
| come to most people’s minds, instead possessing a more | |
| mystical aura as opposed to their powerful and frightening | |
| presence. | |
| Tānxīn Zhu is a master of the element of earth - being | |
| born from and swimming through it long before he ever learned to | |
| fly - and is the one who invented the magic that goes into | |
| fueling the Empire’s clay soldiers. Zhu is the sole being | |
| capable of creating terracotta servants in mere minutes from | |
| nothing more than dirt while those made by the Craftsmen in the | |
| Empire’s factories require more tempering and time. Zhu is | |
| also the one to have sculpted the great palace guardians that | |
| protect his home as the effort and power required to do so is | |
| nearly impossible for anyone else to expend or achieve. | |
| Zhu is massive in size, intimidating in person, sickeningly | |
| greedy, and incredibly arrogant, but even still his people | |
| nearly worship him like the god he claims to be. He can | |
| sometimes be seen flying over and observing his domain much to | |
| the delight of the Crescent with such nights being celebrated | |
| with impromptu feasts and parties springing up on very short | |
| notice. Most of the time however he keeps himself hidden away in | |
| his opulent palace where he invites those he finds interesting, | |
| consults his court and plots against his neighbors. | |
| THE COURT – Zhu’s Court is a group of advisors | |
| composed of five leading masters arising from his government | |
| workers and the Orchid. These masters are as follows: Apprentice | |
| Chu�zi, Taskmaster Biānzi, Y�ngb� of Trade, Steel Laoji�ng, | |
| and Qi�nx�ng the Shaded. | |
| Apprentice Chu�zi is named such due to his direct tutelage | |
| beneath the emperor himself when it comes to practicing the | |
| magics that go into crafting the terracotta. While called an | |
| apprentice, Chu�zi is in fact a master unrivaled by the rest of | |
| the Crescent in his field and is kept by the emperor to help | |
| develop new techniques and prototypes as well as work on | |
| updating current designs in pursuit of perfection. Chu�zi earned | |
| his apprenticeship when word started getting around that his | |
| experiments and personal projects had started to show results | |
| including but not limited to the increasing of terracotta | |
| multitasking and problem-solving skills without direct | |
| supervision by a respectable 2%. | |
| Taskmaster Biānzi is responsible for the management of the | |
| Overseers through-out the empire. Each factory, farm, | |
| congregation of servants and labor camp is run by an Overseer | |
| and the Taskmaster is one of the most experienced of the bunch | |
| chosen based on, of all things, the submission of an application | |
| which is reviewed by Zhu should he require a replacement. | |
| Biānzi was chosen due to his managerial skills and | |
| respectable experience and performance when working in | |
| “The Block” – a cluster of factories dedicated | |
| towards replacing high end security and soldier terracotta | |
| models during times of conflict. | |
| Y�ngb� of Trade is the one the Caravaneers of Sidon deal with | |
| whenever they enter Crescent territory. As one could assume, the | |
| Empire’s trading with other countries is overseen by | |
| Y�ngb�, but she is also responsible for managing the populations | |
| allowances and acting as the lead accountant of the | |
| Empire’s treasury. Y�ngb�’s position is one of | |
| extreme danger and is often one that is viewed as a curse by | |
| anyone made to accept it. To be responsible for managing the | |
| wallet of the Emperor is to have everything you do be under | |
| never ending scrutiny and live in constant worry that even the | |
| smallest discrepancy could lead to extreme consequences. This | |
| position is given to the few that the Emperor feels he can | |
| trust, though this quickly changes once these individuals are in | |
| office. | |
| Steel Laoji�ng trains the Empire’s Commanders and is the | |
| Emperor’s war advisor whenever the Griffons start to get | |
| out of line. Laoji�ng has spent most of his life occupying The | |
| Basin in the Empire’s western territory and was a major | |
| reason why the last few engagements with the Griffons has led to | |
| resounding victories. His candidacy for a seat in Zhu’s | |
| court was never in question and when Laoji�ng began to grow too | |
| old to easily travel through The Basin’s demanding terrain | |
| he reluctantly accepted Zhu’s invitation. Whenever not | |
| running drills, one of both Laoji�ng and Zhu’s favorite | |
| pastimes is to get together and discuss hypothetical scenarios | |
| and plan contingencies for the next time they need to deal with | |
| one of their neighbors. | |
| Qi�nx�ng the Shaded inherited his place as his family has for | |
| generations. He makes sure the palace grounds have sufficient | |
| shade in the summer. It is strictly illegal to ask for details. | |
| THE ORCHID – The Orchid is ageless, powerful, and | |
| Zhu’s greatest asset. Serving as the Emperor’s right | |
| hand, The Orchid has been his agent for numerous centuries, his | |
| eternal youth being a gift from Zhu and fueled by a portion of | |
| The Tax as a showing of his appreciation. Vigilant when not | |
| needed, frighteningly effective when deployed, The Orchid | |
| carries out the will of Zhu with every fiber of his being as his | |
| loyalty is unshakeable and skill immense. | |
| For the Crescent he is a living legend whose feats are taught | |
| about in schools, but for the Crescent’s main rival the | |
| Griffons he is a nightmare that has troubled them for a very | |
| long time. The Orchid is the second most powerful Commander of | |
| the Terracotta under Zhu himself and when under his direct | |
| control they increase their effectiveness by a staggeringly | |
| large margin. Even alone he is capable of turning a tide when | |
| engaged with the griffons as his mastery of himself and the | |
| Crescent’s weaponry is all encompassing and perfect, his | |
| abilities beyond the scope of most other combatants. | |
| When not given a task to perform, The Orchid does nothing but | |
| train and act as a personal bodyguard to the Emperor. | |
| DIPLOMACY – | |
| TRADE – The Empire imports almost no raw materials as they | |
| have access to most things they could ever need and instead | |
| treats itself to the luxury goods of the neighboring powers with | |
| the strong exception of the Griffons due to trade between the | |
| two being strictly banned. Exports from the Empire mirror this | |
| as they are well known for their expensive but beautiful | |
| furniture, wines, tea, instruments, art and so on. Simply put, | |
| if you aren’t rich and looking to show it, you have no | |
| business buying Crescent goods. | |
| NEEDS NO ONE – The Empire has no need of allies as their | |
| terracotta armies are large, inexpensive, easy to replace and | |
| quite effective when under the guide of a competent Commander. | |
| Standing forces require little maintenance and no fuel making | |
| upkeep incredibly easy and cheap and defensive fortresses | |
| through out the land are built to last and are for all intents | |
| and purposes immune to a long term siege. On top of this the | |
| large amount of land and varied geography leads the Crescent to | |
| be almost entirely self sufficient as they are capable of | |
| producing most things a country needs to exist with absolutely | |
| no need for outside help. This all means that co-operative | |
| relations with other powers would only prove to be a drain on | |
| the Empire’s time and resources and Zhu has little | |
| interest in bothering with helping anyone other than his | |
| himself. | |
| GRIFFON RIVALS – Zhu is very old and has never been a | |
| friend of the Griffons. Their culture is a near antithesis of | |
| his Empire’s own and as a result makes their presence | |
| something that Zhu finds annoying at best and angering at worst. | |
| The Crescent’s population despises the griffons and | |
| believes them to be dirty, poor and uncivilized with popular | |
| opinion being a casual call for them to be driven off the | |
| continent and into the sea entirely so that the Empire can take | |
| ownership of their lands. The borders of the empire are strictly | |
| closed to the Griffons as this makes things more difficult for | |
| their rivals in the area of trade and travel southwards, this | |
| pleasing Zhu greatly and being a permanent decree. | |
| TOLERANT OF THE CARAVANEERS – The Caravaneers serve a | |
| purpose for the Crescent and as such are allowed to do business | |
| unimpeded within Crescent lands. Moving the Crescent’s | |
| high value goods around the powers is a respected role amongst | |
| the Court and helps to feed extra money into the Empire to | |
| further bloat their wealth. Because of their usefulness, a | |
| special force of terracotta under a Commander meets each Caravan | |
| at the border of the Empire’s lands on set dates to escort | |
| the Caravaneers through their lands, monitor their behavior and | |
| provide protection up until they leave. | |
| HE HATES SAND – The south has little to fear when it comes | |
| to the Emperor’s greedy desire to expand his domain. | |
| Saddle Arabia and the Kiroho Federation of Tribe’s | |
| territories are home to several deserts that takes up large | |
| swaths of land which acts as a deterrent to the Empire as the | |
| hassle of invading would be too slow and difficult to risk | |
| leaving themselves open to a bothersome invasion of Griffons. | |
| Sand is hard for the current incarnation of terracotta to | |
| traverse and the trouble they’d have making it through the | |
| deserts that the native forces have adapted to would only lead | |
| to a few embarrassing failures that Zhu simply cannot allow. As | |
| for the Mamlakat Khunfisa’, their borders encompass such a | |
| tiny blip on the map that the Emperor has absolutely no interest | |
| in wasting his time taking it from them. | |
| TERRACOTTA – | |
| The backbone of the Empire without which it could not operate in | |
| its current form, the terracotta are vitally important to the | |
| day to day life of Y� City and the defense of the Empire itself. | |
| Made from clay and then infused with special magics to bring | |
| them to life, each soldier, servant, laborer and guard is | |
| capable only of following simple commands and carrying out a | |
| basic purpose unless supervised by a capable Commmander or | |
| Overseer. When under supervision the effectiveness of each | |
| terracotta in performing their tasks increases based on their | |
| supervisor’s own aptitude which also effects how many | |
| terracotta they can control. | |
| For example, a terracotta soldier left to guard one of the many | |
| outposts within The Basin can only perform a simple guard duty | |
| protocol that recognizes none Crescent intruders and then moves | |
| them to engage with the skill of a green recruit. However, a | |
| commander’s presence allows them to receive and understand | |
| orders similarly to regular soldiers with their skill scaling | |
| accordingly. Someone like Steel Laoji�ng or The Orchid can | |
| command legions of terracotta at a time with each individual | |
| possessing the skill of a seasoned veteran. This same scaling | |
| applies to every type of terracotta with the numbers delegated | |
| to manual labor and servitude falling under the guide of the | |
| Overseers. | |
| #Post#: 3578-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Kabyl's Stuff and Things | |
| By: Haywire Date: March 25, 2018, 10:15 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| ayyyyyyyy | |
| THE CARAVANEERS OF SIDON | |
| BARREN HOMELAND – The homeland of the caravaneers is a | |
| stretch of land comprised almost entirely of harsh and sandy | |
| deserts. Natural resources within their official territory are | |
| extremely scarce with what little is readily available – | |
| usually found near the coast and its city of Shilling - being | |
| difficult to harvest due to the common sand storms and shifting | |
| dunes burying attempts to reach them. | |
| CULTURE/TRADE – Life as a camel of Sidon is one of | |
| constant travel and a careful understanding of money. Each | |
| newborn native to Sidon is brought into the world either on the | |
| road under one of the country’s caravans, as part of the | |
| Exchange’s ever relocating trading posts and rest stops | |
| within the shifting deserts, or as a resident of the | |
| camel’s port city of Shilling. | |
| Due to special accords recognized by the different powers, those | |
| born into a caravan need not stress over citizenship as each | |
| caravan acts as a sort of mobile piece of Sidon territory so | |
| long as they keep to the routes. Once born, they are under the | |
| protection and responsibility of each caravan’s master who | |
| serve as both a boss of business to the members and a sort of | |
| governor who is charged with the well being of each. The master | |
| must keep an accurate census of his people, a clear record of | |
| their travels, provide necessities to ensure survival including | |
| fare wages, see to the employment of qualified camels dedicated | |
| to providing a basic education to the young and so on. In | |
| exchange for this protection and assistance expectant parents | |
| sign into an agreement for themselves and their child to become | |
| indentured servants until the child comes of age with refusal | |
| leading to being expelled from the caravan to not slow them | |
| down. | |
| If born under the families of the Exchange young camels are | |
| assigned an allegiance and become a part of the crews that roll | |
| through the deserts setting up and tearing down the trading | |
| posts that act as artificial oases for the caravans. There tents | |
| are raised and services provided to allow passing caravans the | |
| opportunity to trade their goods amongst their own people for | |
| necessities and hard currency with what’s sold being sent | |
| back to Shilling to be prepped for the families perusal or | |
| shipped off in Sidon’s sea trade. Due to the nature of the | |
| desert these posts don’t stand in one place for long, | |
| regularly being torn down to be set up somewhere else depending | |
| on the weather and any incoming sandstorms. Those who manage the | |
| posts are experts in being able to read the desert and the spots | |
| used to establish the posts are often rotated to establish | |
| consistency. Caravans hoping to find a post are expected to be | |
| led by an experienced enough master to find one, but even if the | |
| opposite is the case the camel’s natural ability to last | |
| longer without food and water than most other races often buys | |
| them enough time to figure things out. | |
| Shilling behaves like most cities in the world and is the | |
| central hub when it comes to the importation of goods from the | |
| surrounding countries. Here the families of the Exchange center | |
| their power while paying tribute to Azurfa Zinariya. Seaward | |
| trade is carried out by a pieced together collection of ships | |
| not native to Sidon due to the camels preferring to simply | |
| purchase their vessels from others. Similarly, to walk the | |
| streets of the city or enter a home of a well-off camel would | |
| feel like entering a mish mash of different cultures due to the | |
| bits and pieces bought from around the world used to decorate | |
| them. Griffon greatwood tables decorated with Khunfisa’ | |
| statuettes and Crescent wine bottles placed over an Arabian rug | |
| is a combination commonly found in affluent households. | |
| Production of goods by the camels themselves is exceedingly rare | |
| and often of low quality as the skills to create such things | |
| themselves are not usually taught to nor pursued by their | |
| people. | |
| On the road the most important skill taught to every camel is | |
| the art of haggling as this has been a vital part of their | |
| culture since the earliest pieces of their recorded history. | |
| Back then, before they’d established their routes and | |
| relations with their neighbors, what little they could scrounge | |
| together from their homeland was traded amongst themselves | |
| extremely carefully with the need to learn negotiating skills | |
| and the appraisal of somethings worth being vital to ensure | |
| their individual survival. Today it’s the backbone of | |
| their entire nation with each camel being expected to represent | |
| their country accordingly. | |
| Outsiders are treated to the “hump”, a slang term | |
| used by Griffons and Saddle Arabians to refer to both the | |
| obvious physical features of the traders and the | |
| Caravaneer’s tendency to always try to come off as | |
| friendly to ease your defenses. For the uninitiated it is a | |
| highly effective strategy as the behavior is well practiced and | |
| easy for the average caravaneer to tailor to everyone’s | |
| personality. For those wary of such a ploy they find little | |
| comfort in it as its still difficult to undercut or trick a | |
| camel and their sense of economic value. Still, dealing with the | |
| Carvaneers has become unavoidable at this point in time due to | |
| the different powers coming to rely on them for some reason or | |
| another. This does not mean they are disliked however as most | |
| caravans are usually well received when they roll into town. | |
| Entertainment for the camels of Sidon is limited due to their | |
| nomadic nature. Most camels within the caravans entertain | |
| themselves and others through the regaling of travel tales and | |
| stories that they’ve picked up on the road. Songs are | |
| often sung to help pass the time and simple easy to carry | |
| instruments are sometimes carried to help break up the monotony. | |
| Art is not made in the same ways as the rest of the world as | |
| wasting the space to transport the materials and stopping to | |
| take the time to carve a statue or paint a picture is unheard | |
| of. Every wasted minute is a drain on a caravan’s coffers, | |
| and no responsible master would ever put his caravan in jeopardy | |
| long enough to entertain such a fancy. Instead, to make up for | |
| this, camels often decorate themselves by shaving their fur to | |
| depict complicated images that often times tell a story or keeps | |
| track of their own personal travels. All of this also helps to | |
| provide conversation starters which are always useful to someone | |
| in their trade. | |
| Amongst themselves camels often deal with rivalries and | |
| loyalties regarding either the families of the Exchange or their | |
| individual caravan masters. All camels rely on the success of | |
| these to determine their own wealth and value within Sidon | |
| society and treat those not of their own franchise as | |
| competition in most aspects of everyday life. Intense bidding | |
| wars over the smallest of things and shouted over the crowded | |
| market of Shilling is an everyday occurrence and bribery is such | |
| a common means of negotiating differences that its almost legal | |
| in Sidon lands. To gain influence in Sidon one must possess the | |
| coin to back it up and they are willing to do most anything to | |
| achieve it with the purchasing of high earning caravans being | |
| the ultimate means by which one can rise to power and ultimately | |
| name themselves Lords and possibly even the Sarkin Tafiyar. | |
| POLITICS – | |
| LORD – In Shilling there resides a unique Caravan Lord | |
| whom holds sway over the rest. Often incorrectly referred to by | |
| foreigners as simply their singular Lord, when in truth there | |
| are many, the actual official title for such a prestigious | |
| position is that of the Sarkin Tafiyar and they are often the | |
| owner of most of the best performing caravans Sidon has to | |
| offer. Adopting this title requires the purchasing of the Arziki | |
| Caravan, one of Sidon’s oldest and most expensive which | |
| holds significant meaning to the camels of the land, from the | |
| current Sarkin leading to their demotion from office and the new | |
| Lord’s rise. The wealth required to do this is immense and | |
| its been common in the past for the office to be juggled between | |
| multiple Lords whom jump at the opportunity to take it but then | |
| find themselves bankrupt and replaced shortly after. Eventually | |
| one comes along with the sense to have their finances in order | |
| before falling to their own ambition and the reign of these | |
| worthy camels are often long and lead to lasting dynasties as | |
| the ownership of the Arziki caravan remains hereditary until | |
| sold. | |
| The perks of the Sarkin Tafiyar position are many with the most | |
| important being influence over the Syndicate, tribute from the | |
| Exchange, permanent luxurious residence within Shilling and a | |
| lack of need to deal with traveling themselves beyond the | |
| occasional visit to the ruling powers of the surrounding | |
| countries to discuss opportunities. | |
| The current Sarkin Tafiyar of Sidon is Azurfa Zinariya, a | |
| second-generation inheritor of the Arziki and the complicated | |
| network of caravans built and purchased by his now deceased | |
| father Asali Ubangiji. Groomed to take over, Azurfa is no push | |
| over when it comes to business and has responsibly maintained | |
| his dynasty’s superiority within Sidon for decades. When | |
| foreign powers hope to alter or strike new deals of any serious | |
| consequence, Azurfa is the one it must be approved by. | |
| Similarly, any substantial offers sent beyond Sidon’s | |
| borders are penned by Azurfa or one of his representatives. | |
| THE SYNDICATE – The Syndicate refers to an organization | |
| formed to ensure that the caravans of Sidon operate with the | |
| best interests of their country and fellow masters in mind. Each | |
| master of every caravan is required to become a member with | |
| attempts to avoid this leading to steep penalties and a green | |
| light for the rest to not have to treat them fairly. The primary | |
| goals of the Syndicate are to ensure fair prices across every | |
| caravan, discourage the manipulation of foreign customers to | |
| foster favoritism, prevent meddling amongst each other that | |
| could potentially harm Sidon’s overall profit and to | |
| enforce each Master’s responsibility to his employees and | |
| indentured servants. | |
| The Syndicate is technically led by the Sarkin Tafiyar, who | |
| himself is a member and subject to its rules, but it is usually | |
| managed by the Caravan Lords beneath him. It is totally | |
| acceptable for a Lord to own several of the lesser caravans | |
| operating within the Syndicate so long as they adhere to its | |
| rules. | |
| THE EXCHANGE – While the caravans are out dealing with the | |
| surrounding countries and making a profit someone needs to stay | |
| back to hold down the fort and make sure they have a place to | |
| return to. Named after their primary service offered at the | |
| trading posts throughout Sidon, The Exchange is a collection of | |
| families who run Shilling and own and operate the posts that dot | |
| the deserts. Collecting tariffs, buying goods and selling | |
| resources to returning caravans, maintaining the sea trade to | |
| the west and keeping the infrastructure of Shilling intact all | |
| fall within the realm of the families within which is their own | |
| little hierarchy. At the top are the Jagora, Gina and Motsie | |
| families who run and collect tariffs from most of the trading | |
| posts, keep Shilling standing and manage the ports respectively. | |
| Beneath them are the Talakawa, Isasshen, Iafiya, Manta and Kyau | |
| families whom perform the same duties as the three above but in | |
| lesser ways with most efforts often needing to be run past them | |
| before any headway can be made. Even further down the totem pole | |
| are numerous families who are more or less irrelevant and | |
| replaceable as their compared wealth to those above is | |
| insignificant and ability to do much of worth equally as | |
| unlikely. | |
| The Exchange mostly governs themselves, but they do adhere to | |
| paying tribute to the Sarkin Tafiyar on a regular basis with how | |
| much each family pays being calculated based on their net worth. | |
| Reasons for why include the fact that the Sarkin Tafiyar owns | |
| most of the best performing caravans Sidon has to offer and as a | |
| result brings in a huge chunk of the country’s profit. On | |
| top of this the Sarkin Tafiyar is rich enough to basically take | |
| over the sea trade from the Exchange should he feel the need to. | |
| The Exchange have had to fight with overly greedy Sarakuna in | |
| the past with this usually leading to a rotation of inept | |
| hopefuls taking the title and have decided long ago that the | |
| tribute, and its pacifying of the Sarkin Tafiyar, is a much | |
| better deal in the long run. | |
| DIPLOMACY – | |
| MORE TRADE – Diplomacy for the Caravaneers is usually | |
| simple and straightforward. You let them do their business and | |
| they’ll help you make money. True neutrality is the norm | |
| and the camels have no interest when it comes to taking sides in | |
| any conflict as there would be no sense in dividing their | |
| routes. Each caravan acts as a mobile piece of Sidon territory | |
| and are therefore neutral zones so long as they keep to their | |
| routes. All sides prefer to avoid interfering with their travels | |
| for fear that they themselves would suffer for it in the form of | |
| steeper prices and less business. | |
| With their society built around materialist values, it should | |
| come as no surprise that the camels have established themselves | |
| as well respected and valued assets to the surrounding powers. | |
| Whether it be bypassing the Griffon-Crescent trade ban, helping | |
| to distribute water through Saddle Arabia, or merely securing | |
| the great Khunfisa’ Pharaoh’s next delivery of rare | |
| Kiroho spices the Caravaneers deliver and are well compensated | |
| for it. | |
| Despite their skills the Caravaneers have always struggled to | |
| implant themselves into the Kiroho Federation of Tribes’ | |
| the same way they have with the rest of their neighbors. The | |
| Kiroho are far less materialistic than the other races and | |
| therefore are lacking in the idea of trading with the rest, | |
| instead preferring to trade amongst themselves and be as | |
| self-sufficient as possible. | |
| UNTOUCHABLE – The Caravaneers were patient and smart when | |
| establishing their routes, their ability to make long steady | |
| treks on limited resources and talents for appraisal being put | |
| to good use through their history to install themselves into the | |
| societies of their neighbors. Today the surrounding powers rely | |
| on them a great deal to maintain their economies – the | |
| only major exception being the Kiroho Federation of Tribes - and | |
| as a result consider the security of the caravans to be of high | |
| priority. While each caravan keeps on staff several camel guards | |
| the other races tend to be far more capable when it comes to | |
| fending off threats resulting in the common rotation of hired | |
| guards and escorts depending on where the Caravaneers find | |
| themselves at the time. | |
| In the Griffon Kingdom mercenaries are readily available to be | |
| brought along for a price. The Crescent Empire and Saddle | |
| Arabian’s both assign special military escorts in the form | |
| of a Commander and their unit of Terracotta for the former and a | |
| team of janissaries sent on behalf of the individual sultanates | |
| within the latter. When in the lands of the Mamlakat | |
| Khunfisa’, the pharaoh needs only approve of their | |
| presence for most trouble to be avoided, though some Arabian | |
| bandits occasionally attempt to follow and harass the caravans | |
| before being made to regret it by the tiny kingdom’s | |
| population. | |
| The Kiroho Federation are unique however in that they’re | |
| tolerance of the caravans but lack of need for them leads to a | |
| mixed bag of security that often shifts depending on the | |
| political climate. At times the camels find themselves accepted | |
| by most of the tribes and have little to fear, but there are | |
| occasions where a freshly discovered changeling hive or rising | |
| tensions between tribes can cause paranoia and distrust to a | |
| point of deflecting the caravans entirely. Regardless, at least | |
| one member of the Wawindaji Tribe follows each caravans’ | |
| activities while in Kiroho lands – and whether they know | |
| it or not - to ensure that they are indeed Caravaneers and not | |
| up to any trouble. | |
| To attack, rob, hinder or slow down the caravans is to commit | |
| severe crimes against both the country of Sidon and their | |
| current hosts leading to serious consequences for the guilty. | |
| LACK OF GOD – Unlike the rest of the races surrounding | |
| them, the camels of Sidon do not believe themselves to have any | |
| sort of patron deity or god unique to them. In fact, most camels | |
| don’t believe that the rest of the countries do either. | |
| While careful to respect the views of their customers and keep | |
| relations warm, for them Celestia and Luna are simply powerful | |
| spellcasters who have found a way to reach out to the celestial | |
| bodies, Zhu is an ancient dragon who has had plenty of time to | |
| figure out how to manipulate the earth, and Aeolus is merely a | |
| myth. Hardcore materialists, the Caravaneers consider themselves | |
| to be a realistic and practical people who have no time to | |
| entertain the idea of divinity or higher powers watching over | |
| them when there’s real work to be done. | |
| Whether or not the camels are right about their lack of a deity | |
| or are simply ignorant is unknown. | |
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