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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: Angel. Date: January 30, 2018, 8:35 pm
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<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
his story is
a bit of a fictional remake of the turkish show Kara Para Ask.
I�m sure a lot of people have watched this show or at least the
first episode. I wouldn�t worry about any spoilers, the only
thing that\'s mentioned is really the main plot of the show that
one would find in a summary of the show anyways. One more note,
the dialogue can get a bit confusing but sometimes instead of
putting a character talking in quotations and in sentences, I
put some dialogue parts like the characters name and a colon�
(Example� Omer:) Hopefully it�s understandable once one starts
to read. I hope everyone enjoys the story!
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
u>SWITCHING DIAMONDS</u>
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
DAYS AFTER
THE INCIDENT
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer is in the office, pacing
and thinking and frustrated because it�s taking him a long time
to find the murderer. He can�t take anymore, the pain inside his
heart for losing his fiance, the girl he loves. He looks towards
the table and sees the 2 diamonds he found the day before. He
picks up the diamonds and looks very closely at them and
realized that he has to zoom into them. He picks up his
detective magnifying glass and takes a look way within them and
sees that there are words written. In the first diamond he sees
the word switch inscribed and in the second diamond, he sees the
word diamond. Omer puts it together and realized that it says
switch diamond. He is super confused as to what this message
could possible mean.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
HE NEXT DAY
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer hasn�t investigated one
more spot yet and it would be Elif�s house where her father
lived for a long time. He found himself right in front of the
gates to her house and had to find a way he can go in. He hides
himself behind the walls as he sees Elif coming out. The gates
open and Elif comes out, but being as paranoid as she was after
what had happened to her and her sister, Elif keeps looking
around. She sees a scarf blowing in the wind from behind the
wall and she checks to see what it could be. She walks all the
way up to the spot Omer was in and before he can make a dash for
it she grabs his scarf and pulls him right out.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif: What are you doing
here! Are you spying on my family.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: No! I just need to
investigate your house, I need more clues.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif: Well that�s just not
going to happen, you better leave.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
efore Omer can reply back
Elif gets a call from Metin the person who has her sister
hostage. Metin was still watching Elif�s every move and asks her
who she�s standing next to. Elif is unsure of how to reply but
she tells Metin that Omer is her lover. In order to make Metin
believe her, Elif grabs Omer and gives him a kiss then pulls him
into her house. Omer was confused about what just happened but
he went along with it because he was in luck and got inside the
house.
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif: Now what
do you want. You�re inside now, what do you want to investigate.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Since
you let me in, and this is your house I guess I must tell you.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer brings
out the diamonds and Elif is in shock. She�s been looking for
those diamonds everywhere since that\'s what the bad guys want.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif: Where
did you find those?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Why? Have you been
looking for them.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif�s eyes wander and she
replies �maybe.�
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Look maybe I�ll give
them to you, but you need to get me into your father study. I
need to know everything.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif points to the door to
her Father\'s study so they walk over and get inside.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer looks around the room
and the first thing he walks up to is her father\'s desk. He
opens the desks drawers and little closets. He sees a bunch of
books and files that don�t have much meaning. But then, right on
the very inside of the closet, he finds a suspicious little
drawer hidden and embedded into the desk. He opens this up and
inside of the small drawer he finds a book. The title on the
book says �Switching Diamonds.� Omer is in shock at this
discovery.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: This is it! This will
help me uncover the mystery.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer stands on his feet to
see Elif sitting down on chair very distressed. Her head rests
on her arms and she starts to tear up. Omer starts to realize
that this girl isn�t so harmless and that she must be going
through the same pain he was going through all this time. His
heart softens towards this girl and he goes up to her and in the
most optimistic tone that he can find, he tells Elif that he is
going to fix everything and solve this horrible mystery. Elif
was just about to say something, but Omer went ahead and opened
the book and suddenly Elif paused as if someone had just taken a
remote and froze the TV screen. Omer looked up from the book and
saw that everything around him was still, even the ticker on his
watch stopped ticking. Omer stumbled and was freaked out from
this so he closed the book quickly and everything went back to
normal. Elif continued saying �What�s that book that you�re
holding?� Omer questioned �Did you notice what just happened?�
Elif was very confused but she was getting sad and frustrated
again thinking of her sister Nilufer. Elif went off on him again
�Look this is too much, I don�t think you will be able to fix
anything. Just forget it, give me this book and--. Omer cut her
off by opening the book again, and time was frozen. He needed
time to think so he started reading the book. As Omer read the
book he noticed that everything that was written inside of it
was all the events that has happened to him up to date. It
started up with his experience of finding the hidden kids to
winning an award from the police department. It was unbelievable
the book had every little detail of Omer�s life and he didn�t
understand why. Elif�s dad doesn�t know Omer at all so how could
he have a book that was all about him which was called
�Switching Diamonds.� Omer looks closely at the back of the book
where there was a �Summary� written. It was written in very
small print so he brings out his magnifying glass and he reads
the summary of the book.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
ummary
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
n the hands in which this
lies, their lives will uncover from the inside.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
ook towards the bottom of
the pages, where the page numbers are inscribed
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
n a diamond form.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
hoose wisely a page of
your choice
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
witch the diamonds at the
page number below
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
ith ones that shine
bright.
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
eware of
the consequences and the visions you will take on.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
ife is written from the
start
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
witching
diamonds is easy
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:center\">
ut realizing truth is much
harder.
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer closes
the book and Elif continues on yelling at Omer and saying �and
leave!�
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Elif I
need you to calm down and take this book, open it, read what\'s
inside and then close it.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer was taking the risk, if
Elif realizes what going on around her as she opens the book,
she may run away with it and figure out the message on her own.
However, Omer had to do this, he had to test the instructions.
Elif takes the book and starts to question Omer �What do you
mean, I think I�m going to take this book and leave because I
have more important things to worry about.�
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Elif you have to trust
me for just a moment, I�m the detective here and I must find the
reasons for your father and my fiance\'s death. Please give me a
chance.
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif looked at
Omer and felt a comfort being near him and hearing him talk so
sincerely so she goes along with it. Elif opens the book and
everything around her freezes even Omer. She doesn�t notice this
because she immediately starts reading the book and sees that
what\'s written is everything that\'s happened to her in her
life. All her memories with her father, her family, her trips
and work and everything that happened to her all the way up
until the incident of her father\'s murder. She slams the book
shut and Omer is back in action asking her what happened. Elif
tells him that everything written in the book is about her life.
Omer starts to ponder and asks Elif for the book. Elif easily
hands it over to him since she\'s so surprised at what she had
read. Omer opens the book to pause time and flips the book to
the summary again. The first part of summary says that In the
hands in which this lies, their lives will uncover from the
inside. Omer realizes that his theory was correct. He figures
that if this line was true that means that if Elif got a hold of
the book, her life would be written all throughout it instead of
his. Now the book returned back to having all the information
about Omers life since it was in his hands. Omer thinks �that
means that whoever holds this book, then their life will be
projected all throughout it.�
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer starts talking to
himself, �ok ok, let me take a look at the next few lines of the
summary.�
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
e flips open to a page and
looks towards the bottom of the pages and sees that the page
numbers are in diamond shapes. The next line says to choose
wisely a page of his choice, so he flips to a page that has
written what happened to him just a few moments ago with Elif.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: The
summary says to switch the diamonds on the bottom. That makes no
sense, it�s a paper diamond. So I choose this page--
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
s Omer says his choice of
page, suddenly the page number starts to bulge out in a diamond
form. Omer�s eyes widen as he sees the magic happening. The next
part of the summary tells Omer that he must switch the diamonds
with ones that shine bright. Omer quickly pulls out the real
diamonds that he has, takes out the ones that were bulging out
from the page. Then he sticks in the two diamonds in the bottom
corner of the two pages he has the book opened too.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
he world around Omer starts
to whirl round and round until he finds himself in front of
Elif�s gate again. Omer is very confused and worried and was
wondering how he got outside again. Then, he saw Elif walking
down the steps so he ran and hid behind the wall just like he
did last time. As he hid, he started moving around a lot looking
inside his jacket and his pocket for the book, but it wasn�t
with him so instead he looked at his watch and saw the time. His
watch was turned a half hour before he got inside Elifs house
and found the book. Omer was able to notice this change because
when he first opened the book, the ticker on his watch stopped
ticking. Once again, Elif grabs Omer by the scarf and asks what
he was doing there.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Weren�t we just in your
house? Did you hit me on the head or something?.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif was bewildered at his
accusations and felt so clueless.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
lif: What are you saying,
why would I do that.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer had to think fast, and
had to stop questioning everything and get back to that book he
found inside the fathers desk. Elif gets a phone call, the same
one Omer recognized before. The images started to flash in his
brain and once again Omer gets kissed by Elif and pulled into
her house. Omer didn�t want to believe it but he was slowly
discovering that he was reliving everything that had happen to
him in the past, but more like in another life or time line.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer thinks,
�There�s no way this is deja-vu, in the weirdest way, I have
time traveled!� Elif looks at him and asks if he was okay. Omer
runs straight for the book as Elif runs after him asking what
has gotten into him and that he was not allowed inside her
father\'s study. Omer finds the book in relief, opening it to
pause time so that he can figure out what\'s going on. Omer
reads the instructions over and over again, trying to remember
what had just happened to him and why. He grabs paper and a pen
to write down all his actions up until the time he actually
switched in time.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: If I really did just
time travel, then it must have happened by following these hints
written in the summary.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer reads through his book
again and again, trying to come up with some sort of idea, when
it finally clicked! Light Bulbs flashes all around in Omer�s
head and he thought of a brilliant plan.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: I can time travel back
to the day I went to the movies with Sibel. This is the same
night she got shot in the head. I will follow her around and
watch for the murderer so that I can grab him and prevent the
murder from ever occurring!
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer grabs the book flips to
the page where he had just finished seeing the movie with his
fiance. He commands �I CHOOSE THIS PAGE� and the diamonds at the
bottom of the page start coming out. Omer switches the diamonds
and his whole present world starts to whirl around his very
eyes, until he�s back in the past, his arm around Sibels
shoulders and walking out the movie theater. Sibel looks at Omer
and says �So, are you going to show me or not!�
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer was silent and still not
aware of his surroundings. Sibel gets concerned and shakes him
awake �Omer are you okay?� Omer is looking right at the alive
Sibel and he couldn�t believe it. He gives her the biggest hug
and with excitement and relief he exclaims �Sibel, oh Sibel,
You�re okay!� Sibel was very confused but happy that he was
hugging her all this much. Sibel start to laugh.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
ibel: yes, I�m fine Omer.
What\'s with all this excitement?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer had felt like he was in
a bad dream that he had just woken up from to find Sibel more
alive than ever. However, he couldn�t let this relief get to him
too much, he started to realize again that he had a task to
accomplish. Omer looks at Sibel again and gives her a big
smile.
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: I�m just
happy to be with you all the time.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer brings Sibel in for
another hug and they walk their way to her house. They reach
Sibel�s house and Omer tells Sibel that he must leave at once,
for he forgot that he promised Arda (his friend from the police
station) that he would help him with a small case. Sibel noticed
how strange Omer was acting at this moment but she let it go,
gave him a goodbye kiss and left. When Sibel gave Omer that
kiss, he remembers Elif for some reason and 2 kisses she had
already given him. Somehow Elif�s kisses were much more
comforting than the one Sibel had just given him. Omer leaves at
once to the police station so that he can meet up with Pelin and
Arda and get their help with his plan.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer enters the room hearing
the voices of Arda and Pelin bickering like they usually do.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
elin: Oh
Arda, you think you�re so funny don�t you
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
rda: I know that I�m
reallyyy funny
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
elin rolls her eyes and they
notice Omer approaching them.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
rda: Omer! What�s up buddy,
why are you here, didn�t you say you would stop by a little
later
p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: yes I
may have say that
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
elin: Well, it�s okay. It�s
good you are here Omer. Come eat with us.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: No, thank you
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer was busy thinking about
what he should tell Arda and Pelin and how much he should begin
with. Omer was silent for a while so Arda and Pelin become very
concerned.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
rda: Omerr, hellooo where is
your mind off to?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer looks up at them and
realizes that he shouldn�t tell them about the phenomenon he had
discovered. It would take a lot of persuading in order for them
to believe him.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Look guys, I need your
help but I�d really love that there be no questions asked,
because even I don�t know all the answers.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
elin: You�re scaring us Omer
what\'s going on?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Look, all I need to
know is if you two are willing to help me or not, I have a
dangerous mission that only two police officers like you two can
help me with.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
rda and Pelin look at each
other but they know they can trust Omer for they have been his
friend for a long time.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
rda: I think we trust your
instincts Omer, what�s the plan.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: I have a gut feeling
that Sibel is going to be in big trouble tonight, and I had
recently found a note in her pocket telling her to meet someone
in a specific location
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
NE HOUR LATER
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer, Arda and Pelin are all
hidden in different spots in the same location that Sibel would
be coming to, to meet with Elif�s father. Then finally Omer sees
the car Sibel would be found dead in drive right to the spot it
was in the night of the murder. Omer gives Arda and Pelin his
singal for �that�s the car they have been waiting for.� Sibel is
then shortly found walking towards that car. Omer gets a pain in
his chest seeing Sibel walk right towards her death, and this
moment he wishes to just run right to Sibel and question why she
is even there. Before Omer can uncover his hiding spot and blow
apart his plan, he hears a gigantic crash. His protective
instincts had woken up to this sound, and he felt that he had to
go save people who were in trouble. Arda and Pelin felt the same
way, so the group of 3 leave Sibel and the car to the loud and
piercing sound they had all heard just about a mile away. The
crash was actually much farther than that and the group found
that the crash had come from a big fire spreading throughout a
large apartment building in a nearby town. It was a horrid
scene, with families holding each other outside and watching
their homes collapsing from the blazing fire. Omer, Pelin and
Arda help wrap everyone up and bring them farther away from the
fire. The firefighters were there and doing all they can to put
out the fire. Omer found some people stuck in some places where
parts of the building had fallen and he helped them out with the
rest of the team. After a long while of this unfortunate event,
things had started to calm down and the injured people were
rushed to the hospital. Omer had not noticed the time, soon
after Arda got a message from the department telling him about a
recent murder that he had to go investigate. Arda told Omer and
Pelin that they had to get going and it hit Omer that they were
going to the exact same place Sibel and Elif�s father would be
murdered. Instead of going ahead with Arda and Pelin, Omer ran
away from the tragedy and off to Elif�s house he went to find
the book �Switching Diamonds� and time travel yet once again.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
s Omer makes
his way to the house, he finds a grandfather blocking his way
holding the hand of his granddaughter. The grandfather stops
Omer and thanks him for helping them out and that Omer had saved
his granddaughter from being crushed under the rubble. In a
rushed tone, Omer says, �it was really no problem, I�m glad to
help, but now I must leave.� The grandfather didn�t stop at that
though and he went on telling Omer how grateful he was.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
he Grandfather: My girl
here, is everything I have. We are everything to each other and
if I had lost her I don�t know what I would have done.
p
dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: What about your other
family members?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
he Grandfather: Her parents
had died in an accident, and it was hard realizing the truth.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
hen Omer had
hear the word truth he had remembered another part of the
summary in the back of the time traveling book he paid little
attention to.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: Repeat that sir. What
truth are you talking about?
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
he Grandfather: When you
lose the people love, it�s hard to realize that there is no way
you can bring them back to life, but you can appreciate what you
have in the present, the people who will also love you and
support you all the way through.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer had learned a lot from
hearing the grandfather�s few words of wisdom and he felt like a
new person with new goals that he should be longing to achieve.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
e reaches
Elif�s house and finds that no one is home. Omer speaks to the
person who guards the gate when no one is home and gives the guy
a good explanation for why he has to inspect that house. The
guard has no choice but to allow Omer in after seeing his ID.
Omer gets inside, walks over to the desk and finds the book that
has been waiting for him. Omer pauses time yet again and flips
back to the summary of the book to read and pay attention to the
very last details of it. The last few lines of the summary tells
Omer that Life is written from the start , Switching diamonds is
easy, But realizing truth is much harder..
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: It�s like the
grandfather said, realizing the truth is very hard. I can return
to the past in a flash, and with many continuous trials as well,
but �Life is written from the start� so there\'s no way I can
change the past as much as I try to. Sibel was destined to die
this day and I have to face this reality with everything that
I�ve got to support me.
p dir=\"ltr\"
style=\"background-color:transparent; color:#000000;
font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer had to get out this
past, and he wondered what page he should actually switch back
into. So he looked through the days after this and decided to
just choose a page that comes right after, a new blank page,
where he can start in the place that fate would choose for him.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer: I choose
this fresh, blank page, for another chance to make things right.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer chooses a
blank page that comes after all the events he had lived through.
In this moment, a couple moments of his future life started to
flash in front of his eyes and he felt completely new feelings,
the feelings that the Omer of the future would begin to feel. He
felt happiness, strength and love and he felt a tremendous
amount of comfort from seeing visions of Elif in front of his
eyes. As his life whirls around him, he sees the truth that was
so hard for him to see in the beginning. The fact that he will
find some closure when he works for it and he will find love
much greater than what he had before, of course with some
difficulties along the way but he realizes that he has to be
grateful for these hardships and live through them one by one
because in the end perhaps he will get what he deserves in life.
<p dir=\"ltr\" style=\"background-color:transparent;
color:#000000; font-size:16px; text-align:left\">
mer finds
himself in front of the gates to Elif�s house for the third
time. He looks at his watch and he�s back to the same exact time
he wants to be at. However, he doesn�t want that book anymore,
he wants to work hard and to do all he can to help Elif with her
worries so that they can find the murderer. Omer see�s Elif
approaching so he runs to hide behind the wall like he had done
two times before. Omer hides behind the wall and awaits for that
special girl to pull him right out from his spot and in a few
moments to come, he will get that special kiss from her for a
third time.
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: etme Date: February 5, 2018, 12:13 am
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Nice job! Good luck C1!
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: Mer (Abla) Date: February 5, 2018, 11:00 am
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It was a bit too long but nice effort contestant.
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: QueenLola Date: February 7, 2018, 4:14 am
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Hahaha, what a nice twist...time travel and all
ery good
imagination contestant 1. Well done.
just wished Omer had
waited a little to see his brother shoot Sibel. That would have
been the shortest dizi in history...shorter than even Yuz Yuze�
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: shane Date: February 9, 2018, 1:49 pm
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Well done
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: Def Leppard Date: February 11, 2018, 2:45 am
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Not all who wander are lost!! Omer is one of them ;-)
ood
writing
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: Eliso Date: February 11, 2018, 11:22 am
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Very nice! Good luck C1!
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: QueenLola Date: February 12, 2018, 3:33 am
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@nmjtubz/Nour�well done. I love your imagination and bringing in
time travel and time loop was an interesting angle.�
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Writing Competition I Contestant 1
By: nmjtubz/Nour Date: February 14, 2018, 7:39 pm
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Thank you everyone! Glad some people enjoyed it!�
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