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| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: Angel. Date: July 15, 2017, 8:12 am | |
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| <span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">It\'s already late.�<span | |
| title=\"Mi-a v?zut cineva pantofii?\">Did anyone see my | |
| shoes?�<span title=\"Mam?, m�ncarea e preg?tit?, s? nu o la?i pe | |
| Deniz prea mult la soare.\">Mom, the food is ready, do not let | |
| Deniz stay too much in the sun.�<span title=\"Dac? e vreo | |
| problem?, m? suni.\">If there\'s a problem, call me.<br><span | |
| title=\"Nihan, stai lini?tit?.\">Nihan, don<span lang=\"en-us\" | |
| xml:lang=\"en-us\">�t worry<span lang=\"en\" | |
| xml:lang=\"en\">.�<span title=\"Voi avea mare grij? de nepoata | |
| mea.\">I will take good care of my granddaughter.<br><span | |
| title=\"Nihan iese gr?bit? ?i fuge spre ma?in?.\">Nihan hurries | |
| and runs to the car.�<span title=\"Traficul e infernal la ora | |
| asta ?i trebuie s? ajung? la ?coal?.\">The traffic is infernal | |
| and she has to get to school.�<span title=\"A reu?it s? devin? | |
| ce ?i-a propus.\">She managed to become what she wanted.�<span | |
| title=\"Profesoara de arte Nihan Sezin Soydere, so?ia | |
| inginerului Kemal Soydere, mama...unui copil, Deniz.\">The arts | |
| teacher Nihan Sezin Soydere, wife of engineer Kemal Soydere, | |
| mother of � one child, Deniz. | |
| i><span title=\"�n cealalt? | |
| parte a Istanbulului...\">On the other side of Istanbul ...</i> | |
| <span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">At Kesan Automobile | |
| Workshop.<br><span title=\"Bun? ziua, m? poate ajuta | |
| cineva?\">Hello, can somebody help me, please?�<span title=\"Am | |
| ni?te probleme cu ma?ina.\">I have some problems with my | |
| car.�<span title=\"A? vrea s? face?i o revizie.\">I\'d like you | |
| to revise it.�<br><span title=\"Sigur, dar pentru asta trebuie | |
| s? o l?sa?i c�teva zile aici.\">Sure, no problem, but for that | |
| you have to leave it here for a few days. Murat�<span | |
| title=\"Murat!\">!�<span title=\"Murat, vino aici!\">Murat, come | |
| here!<br><span title=\"Dintr-un birou din fa?? apare un t�n?r | |
| �nalt, brunet, cu ochi p?trunz?tori.\">From a front office, a | |
| tall, dark-eyed young man appears.<br><span title=\"M-ai chemat, | |
| Omer?\">Did you call me, Omer?<br><span title=\"Da, te rog s? te | |
| ocupi tu de ma?ina aceasta ?i s? o faci ca nou?.\">Yes, please | |
| take care of this car and make it as new.<br><span title=\"Bine, | |
| spuse b?rbatul dup? care se �ntoarce �n birou.\">All right, said | |
| the man, returning to the office.<br><span title=\"Omer �l | |
| urmeaz?.\">Omer follows him immediately.�<br><span title=\"Ce se | |
| �nt�mpl? cu tine, Murat?\">What\'s wrong with you, | |
| Murat?<br><span title=\"Visul...iar am avut acela?i vis.\">The | |
| dream ... I had the same dream again.�<span title=\"O femeie cu | |
| ochi verzi ?i z�mbet ce lumineaz? totul �n jur.\">A woman with | |
| green eyes and a beautiful smile that lights everything | |
| around.�<span title=\"Nu pot s? �i v?d clar fa?a, dar are o | |
| feti?? �n bra?e ?i vine spre mine.\">I cannot see her face | |
| clearly, but she has a little girl in her arms and comes towards | |
| me. I wake up scared everytime.�<span title=\"Acela?i vis de 4 | |
| ani ?i nu reu?esc s? �l deslu?esc.\">The same dream for 4 years | |
| and I cannot figure it out.<br><span title=\"�mi pare r?u, | |
| frate.\">I\'m sorry, my brother.�<span title=\"Nu pot s? te ajut | |
| cu nimic.\">I cannot help you with that.�<span title=\"Bunicul | |
| te-a g?sit grav r?nit la marginea unui drum ?i bunica te-a | |
| vindecat cu leacurile ei.\">The only thing I know is that my | |
| grandfather found you badly wounded at the side of a road, and | |
| my grandmother cured you with her remedies.�<span title=\"C�nd | |
| ?i-ai revenit ai spus c? nu �?i aminte?ti nimic ?i nu vrei s? | |
| mergi la poli?ie p�n? nu afli ce e cu tine.\">When you came to | |
| your senses, you said you don�t remember anything, and you don�t | |
| want to go to the police until you find out what\'s wrong with | |
| you.�<span title=\"Apoi te-ai obi?nuit cu noi ?i de atunci e?ti | |
| parte din familia noastr?.\">Then you got used to us and since | |
| then you\'re part of our family.<br><span title=\"Mul?umesc, | |
| frate.\">Thank you, my brother.�<span title=\"Nu voi uita | |
| niciodat? ce a?i f?cut pentru mine.\">I will never forget what | |
| you did for me. | |
| i><span title=\"Cealalt? parte a | |
| Istanbulului, ora 18.\">On the other side of Istanbul, 18 | |
| o\'clock�</i> | |
| span title=\"Mami, mami, ce bine c? ai | |
| venit!\">Mommy, mommy, I�m so glad you came!<br><span | |
| title=\"Draga mea, ce dor mi-a fost de tine!\">My dear, I�ve | |
| missed you so much!�<span title=\"Ai fost cuminte?\">You didn�t | |
| upset your grandmother, right?<br><span title=\"Nihan, nepoata | |
| mea nu m? sup?r? niciodat?.\">Nihan, my granddaughter can never | |
| upset me. Let�s have dinner.�<span title=\"Trebuie s? �?i fie | |
| foame.\">You must be hungry.<br><span title=\"Masa a fost | |
| delicioas?, mam?.\">Everything was delicious, mom.�<span | |
| title=\"Deniz a adormit.\">Deniz has fallen asleep | |
| already.�<span title=\"Eu voi ie?i pu?in s? iau aer.\">I�ll go | |
| out to get some fresh air.<br><span title=\"Nihan, mergi �n port | |
| de 4 ani �n fiecare sear?.\">Nihan, you go at the harbor every | |
| night for 4 years.�<span title=\"Nu e momentul s? mergi mai | |
| departe?\">Isn�t the time to move on? | |
| span lang=\"en\" | |
| xml:lang=\"en\">I cannot do that, mom. My soul is there. I feel | |
| closer to Kemal. Come on, go have some rest too. I\'m coming | |
| back quickly. Mom ... thanks for everything. I would not have | |
| succeeded without you.<br> | |
| he two embrace and Nihan | |
| leaves.<br> | |
| i><span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">On the | |
| other side of Istanbul�</i> | |
| span lang=\"en\" | |
| xml:lang=\"en\">Murat, you�re absent again and you didn�t eat | |
| anything.<br> | |
| cannot, my brother. I can�t find my peace. | |
| Something\'s happening to me tonight. I have the feeling that I | |
| will be faced with destiny. Don�t listen to me, I have no idea | |
| what I\'m talking about. I�ll go out for a walk. | |
| span | |
| lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">Nihan walks on the pontoon, takes | |
| Kemal\'s letter out of her pocket, reads it again and tears | |
| start to fall down on her face.<br> | |
| y love, I miss you so much! | |
| Deniz is growing more and more each day and looks so much like | |
| you. Why? Why did you leave me alone? I will never get over your | |
| loss.<br> | |
| ihan wants to get up and leave, but she stumbles over | |
| and falls into the water. Panicked, she begins to struggle and | |
| swallow water. She doesn�t have the power to come out, but | |
| suddenly she feels some hands picking her up. She gets to the | |
| surface and can finally breathe.<br> | |
| re you ok?<br> | |
| hat voice | |
| was like a knife. She started to tremble and slowly opened her | |
| eyes. Her heart skipped a beat.<br> | |
| o! It cannot be true! Is | |
| that you? Is that really you?<br> | |
| he man seems | |
| surprised.<br> | |
| hese eyes. I know ... the eyes from the dream. | |
| But he can�t say more because Nihan faints in his arms. He | |
| quickly takes her out of the water and tries to wake her up. She | |
| slowly comes to her senses.<br> | |
| ho are you? You look just | |
| like...<br> | |
| \'m Murat. I saw you in the water and jumped after | |
| you.<br> | |
| urat? No! You are Kemal! My Kemal!<br> | |
| emal? I don�t | |
| know what are you talking about. I ... Your eyes ...<br> | |
| urat, | |
| tell me all about you. Who you are, what you do, about your | |
| family.<br> | |
| ... I have nothing to say. I don�t remember | |
| anything about my life. A family found me hurt 4��years ago, | |
| saved me and called me Murat. Since then I live with them. | |
| Almost every night I have a strange dream with some eyes, some | |
| eyes just like yours ...<br> | |
| t cannot be true! Kemal! My love! | |
| It\'s really you! You came back to me. It\'s not a dream, it\'s | |
| for real!<br> | |
| hat are you talking about?<br> | |
| know who you | |
| are. I know everything about you.<br> | |
| ou? Who are you?<br> | |
| am | |
| Nihan, your wife. | |
| i><span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">Two | |
| days later at the hospital�</i> | |
| span title=\"Kemal, a fost o | |
| minune c? ai sc?pat.\">Kemal, it�s a miracle you are | |
| alive.�<span title=\"Din p?cate ai avut o leziune puternic? la | |
| cap ce ?i-a cauzat amnezie.\">Unfortunately, you had a bad head | |
| injury that caused you amnesia.�<span title=\"Nu ?tim sigur dac? | |
| memoria va reveni par?ial, total sau niciodat?, dar familia te | |
| va ajuta cu siguran??.\">We don�t know for sure whether the | |
| memory will come back partially, totally or never again, but | |
| your family will certainly help you get over this.�<br><span | |
| title=\"Iubitule, haide s? mergem acas?.\">Honey, let\'s go | |
| home.�<span title=\"Eu voi avea grij? de tine.\">I\'ll take care | |
| of you, says Nihan.<br><span title=\"Nihan ?i Kemal intr? �n | |
| cas?.\">Nihan and Kemal enter the house.�<span title=\"L�ng? | |
| sc?ri st? timid? o feti??.\">There is a little girl sitting near | |
| the stairs.<br><span title=\"Tati?\">Daddy? | |
| span | |
| lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">At hearing these words, Kemal starts | |
| to tremble and looks at Nihan. She whispers to him: Deniz ... I | |
| told her that daddy came back to us.<br><span title=\"Deniz fuge | |
| �nspre el ?i �l �mbr??i?eaz?.\">Deniz runs to him and hugs him | |
| tight.�<span title=\"Nihan �i �mbr??i?eaz? pe am�ndoi ?i �ncepe | |
| s? pl�ng?.\">Nihan embraces both of them and begins to | |
| cry.�<span title=\"Kemal nu �?i aminte?te nimic, dar simte c? | |
| acolo e locul lui.\">Kemal doesn\'t remember anything, but he | |
| feels like home.�<br><span title=\"Deniz a adormit | |
| fericit?.\">Deniz is so happy she couldn\'t fall asleep. How are | |
| you feeling?<br><span title=\"Cople?it.\">Overwhelmed.�<span | |
| title=\"?tii, mintea mea nu �?i aminte?te, dar inima mea | |
| da.\">You know, my mind does not remember, but my heart | |
| does.�<span title=\"Spune-mi povestea noastr?.\">I feel that I | |
| belong here. Please, tell me our story. I want to know. I need | |
| to know.�<br><span title=\"Eram tineri ?i inocen?i, ne-am | |
| �ndr?gostit ?i chiar dac? toat? lumea a fost �mpotriva noastr? | |
| am �nvins.\">We met on a bus. We were young and innocent. Then | |
| you rescued me just like a few days ago and we fell helplessly | |
| in love. We faced so many obstacles, but we managed to be | |
| together in the end. Until life took you away from me.�<span | |
| title=\"Dar din fericire e?ti din nou aici.\">But fortunately | |
| you are here again.�<span title=\"Pentru totdeauna.\">Forever. | |
| <i><span title=\"?ase luni mai t�rziu...\">Six months later | |
| ...</i> | |
| span title=\"Ce faci, Kemal?\">What are you doing, | |
| Kemal?<br><span title=\"M? uitam din nou la poze.\">I�m looking | |
| at our pictures again.�<span title=\"�mi amintesc fragmente, dar | |
| nu totul.\">I remember moments, but not everything.<br><span | |
| title=\"Ai r?bdare, iubitule.\">Have patience, sweetheart.�<span | |
| title=\"Dragostea mea ?i a lui Deniz te vor vindeca.\">Deniz and | |
| I will heal you.<br><span title=\"Chiar dac? nu �mi voi aminti | |
| trecutul, voi crea noi amintiri.\">Even if I don�t remember the | |
| past, I will create new memories.�<span title=\"Sufletul meu nu | |
| te-a uitat ?i chiar dac? a? avea 10 vie?i, m-a? re�ndr?gosti de | |
| tine mereu.\">My soul has not forgotten you, and even if I had | |
| 10 lives, I would fall in love with you all over | |
| again.�<br><span title=\"El o �mbr??i?eaz? tandru, dar dintr-o | |
| dat? privirea i se �ntunec?.\">He hugs her tenderly, but | |
| suddenly his eyes change.<br><span title=\"Nihan, m? doare r?u | |
| capul.\">Nihan, my head is hurting really bad.�<span | |
| title=\"Nihan...\">Nihan ...<br><span title=\"Kemal se | |
| pr?bu?e?te la p?m�nt.\">Kemal collapses to the ground.<br><span | |
| title=\"Iubitule, r?spunde-mi.\">Honey, answer me!�<span | |
| title=\"Te rog!\">Please!�<span title=\"Kemal!\">Kemal! | |
| <i><span title=\"Dou? ore mai t�rziu, la spital.\">Two hours | |
| later at the hospital�</i> | |
| span title=\"Domnule doctor, cum | |
| se simte so?ul meu?\">Doctor, how does my husband feel?<br><span | |
| title=\"Pute?i intra.\">You can come in.�<span title=\"Vrea s? | |
| v? vad?.\">He wants to see you.<br><span title=\"Nihan intr? | |
| speriat?.\">Nihan is really nervous.�<br><span | |
| title=\"Kemal?\">Kemal?<br><span title=\"Vino!\">Come!�<span | |
| title=\"Apropie-te!\">Come here!<br><span title=\"Te sim?i | |
| bine?\">Are you feeling alright?<br><span title=\"Mai bine ca | |
| niciodat?.\">Better than ever.�<span title=\"Nihan, so?ia mea, | |
| via?a mea, sufletul meu.\">Nihan, my wife, my life, my | |
| soul.�<span title=\"�mi amintesc totul.\">I remember | |
| everything.�<span title=\"Totul...\">Everything...<br><span | |
| title=\"Kemal, vorbe?ti serios?\">Kemal, are you serious?�<span | |
| title=\"Nu pot s? cred.\">I cannot believe it. I knew our love | |
| is stronger than anything. Nothing can separate us now. We are | |
| going to be together. Forever. | |
| i><span title=\"Opt luni mai | |
| t�rziu...\">Eight months later ...</i> | |
| span | |
| title=\"Kemal?\">Kemal?�<span title=\"Kemal, e gata | |
| gr?tarul?\">Kemal, is the barbecue ready?<br><span title=\"Nihan | |
| iese �n curte ?i �i vede pe Kemal ?i Deniz juc�ndu-se.\">Nihan | |
| goes out in the yard and sees Kemal and Deniz playing.<br><span | |
| title=\"Haide?i la mas?.\">Come on now,��<span title=\"Mie ?i | |
| lui Ozan ne este foame.\">Ozan and I are hungry.<br><span | |
| title=\"Kemal o ia �n bra?e pe Deniz ?i merg spre Nihan.\">Kemal | |
| takes Deniz in his arms and goes to Nihan.�<span title=\"Cei | |
| trei se �mbr??i?eaz? ?i Kemal o m�ng�ie pe burtic?.\">The three | |
| embrace and Kemal caresses her belly. | |
| span lang=\"en\" | |
| xml:lang=\"en\">My son is as greedy as his beautiful | |
| mother?<br><span title=\"Kemal, �ntotdeauna m? | |
| tachinezi.\">Kemal, you always tease me.<br><span title=\"Nihan | |
| prive?te spre mare lini?tit?.\">Nihan looks calmly at the | |
| sea.�<span title=\"A realizat tot ce ?i-a propus.\">She became | |
| everything she wanted.�<span title=\"E profesoara de arte Nihan | |
| Sezin Soydere, so?ia inginerului Kemal Soydere, mama a...doi | |
| copii, Deniz ?i Ozan.\">She is the arts teacher Nihan Sezin | |
| Soydere, the wife of engineer Kemal Soydere, mother of ... two | |
| children, Deniz and Ozan. | |
| #Post#: 959221-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: QueenLola Date: July 23, 2017, 3:39 pm | |
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| @Sandy2604�. The memory loss angle.....something I haven\'t seen | |
| in a dizi yet (at least those I\'ve watched). Poor Kemal, living | |
| those years as Murat. Knowing there was something/someone out | |
| there for him. | |
| t was beautifully written. I loved it. | |
| Congratulations <em>canim</em> | |
| #Post#: 959232-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 3:49 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=QueenLola date=1500842395] | |
| memory loss angle.....something I haven\'t seen in a dizi yet | |
| (at least those I\'ve watched). Poor Kemal, living those years | |
| as Murat. Knowing there was something/someone out there for | |
| him. | |
| Congratulations <em>canim</em> | |
| /quote] | |
| hank you. Yours | |
| was great, just like a KS episode. They should\'ve hired us to | |
| write that freaking end together. Imagine the whole thread | |
| working on that. What an end would have been!� | |
| #Post#: 959243-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: NihKem Sonsuza Kadar Date: July 23, 2017, 3:54 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| @Sandy2604, I simply love this. This story was well written and | |
| I loved how you perfectly described Nihan and Kemal\'s encounter | |
| many years later. It was AMAZING.� | |
| #Post#: 959244-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: QueenLola Date: July 23, 2017, 3:54 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=Sandy2604 date=1500842990] | |
| was great, just like a KS episode. They should\'ve hired us to | |
| write that freaking end together. Imagine the whole thread | |
| working on that. <strong>What an end would have | |
| been!�</strong> | |
| /quote] | |
| hey said the end was legendary | |
| right? We would have shown then what legendary means� | |
| #Post#: 959250-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 3:59 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| @Sandy2604� | |
| reat idea,� while reading l thought \"why isn\'t | |
| it longer, l want more\" | |
| h if only they let us write the | |
| end... poor Asu can\'t even imagine our ideas for her... | |
| #Post#: 959252-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:01 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=NihKem Sonsuza Kadar | |
| date=1500843266] | |
| story was well written and I loved how you perfectly described | |
| Nihan and Kemal\'s encounter many years later. It was | |
| AMAZING.� | |
| /quote] | |
| hank you! I loved yours. For me, it had | |
| something special. I can relate to that end.� | |
| #Post#: 959260-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:06 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=mili15 | |
| date=1500843578] | |
| reading l thought \"why isn\'t it longer, l want more\" | |
| if only they let us write the end... poor Asu can\'t even | |
| imagine our ideas for her... | |
| /quote] | |
| eah, the snake would | |
| have been crushed. No mercy there.�� | |
| was limited by time and | |
| space and I kinda rushed the story a little bit. When I have | |
| time I will try to make it more complex. | |
| #Post#: 959263-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:10 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=Sandy2604 date=1500843994] | |
| would have been crushed. No mercy there.�� | |
| by time and space and I kinda rushed the story a little bit. | |
| When I have time I will try to make it more | |
| complex. | |
| /quote] | |
| even thought writing something for | |
| myself using your idea, this gave me some inspiration | |
| #Post#: 959268-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6 | |
| By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:13 pm | |
| --------------------------------------------------------- | |
| [quote author=mili15 date=1500844216] | |
| writing something for myself using your idea, this gave me some | |
| inspiration | |
| /quote] | |
| can\'t wait to read it!� | |
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