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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: Angel. Date: July 15, 2017, 8:12 am
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<span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">It\'s already late.�<span
title=\"Mi-a v?zut cineva pantofii?\">Did anyone see my
shoes?�<span title=\"Mam?, m�ncarea e preg?tit?, s? nu o la?i pe
Deniz prea mult la soare.\">Mom, the food is ready, do not let
Deniz stay too much in the sun.�<span title=\"Dac? e vreo
problem?, m? suni.\">If there\'s a problem, call me.<br><span
title=\"Nihan, stai lini?tit?.\">Nihan, don<span lang=\"en-us\"
xml:lang=\"en-us\">�t worry<span lang=\"en\"
xml:lang=\"en\">.�<span title=\"Voi avea mare grij? de nepoata
mea.\">I will take good care of my granddaughter.<br><span
title=\"Nihan iese gr?bit? ?i fuge spre ma?in?.\">Nihan hurries
and runs to the car.�<span title=\"Traficul e infernal la ora
asta ?i trebuie s? ajung? la ?coal?.\">The traffic is infernal
and she has to get to school.�<span title=\"A reu?it s? devin?
ce ?i-a propus.\">She managed to become what she wanted.�<span
title=\"Profesoara de arte Nihan Sezin Soydere, so?ia
inginerului Kemal Soydere, mama...unui copil, Deniz.\">The arts
teacher Nihan Sezin Soydere, wife of engineer Kemal Soydere,
mother of � one child, Deniz.
i><span title=\"�n cealalt?
parte a Istanbulului...\">On the other side of Istanbul ...</i>
<span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">At Kesan Automobile
Workshop.<br><span title=\"Bun? ziua, m? poate ajuta
cineva?\">Hello, can somebody help me, please?�<span title=\"Am
ni?te probleme cu ma?ina.\">I have some problems with my
car.�<span title=\"A? vrea s? face?i o revizie.\">I\'d like you
to revise it.�<br><span title=\"Sigur, dar pentru asta trebuie
s? o l?sa?i c�teva zile aici.\">Sure, no problem, but for that
you have to leave it here for a few days. Murat�<span
title=\"Murat!\">!�<span title=\"Murat, vino aici!\">Murat, come
here!<br><span title=\"Dintr-un birou din fa?? apare un t�n?r
�nalt, brunet, cu ochi p?trunz?tori.\">From a front office, a
tall, dark-eyed young man appears.<br><span title=\"M-ai chemat,
Omer?\">Did you call me, Omer?<br><span title=\"Da, te rog s? te
ocupi tu de ma?ina aceasta ?i s? o faci ca nou?.\">Yes, please
take care of this car and make it as new.<br><span title=\"Bine,
spuse b?rbatul dup? care se �ntoarce �n birou.\">All right, said
the man, returning to the office.<br><span title=\"Omer �l
urmeaz?.\">Omer follows him immediately.�<br><span title=\"Ce se
�nt�mpl? cu tine, Murat?\">What\'s wrong with you,
Murat?<br><span title=\"Visul...iar am avut acela?i vis.\">The
dream ... I had the same dream again.�<span title=\"O femeie cu
ochi verzi ?i z�mbet ce lumineaz? totul �n jur.\">A woman with
green eyes and a beautiful smile that lights everything
around.�<span title=\"Nu pot s? �i v?d clar fa?a, dar are o
feti?? �n bra?e ?i vine spre mine.\">I cannot see her face
clearly, but she has a little girl in her arms and comes towards
me. I wake up scared everytime.�<span title=\"Acela?i vis de 4
ani ?i nu reu?esc s? �l deslu?esc.\">The same dream for 4 years
and I cannot figure it out.<br><span title=\"�mi pare r?u,
frate.\">I\'m sorry, my brother.�<span title=\"Nu pot s? te ajut
cu nimic.\">I cannot help you with that.�<span title=\"Bunicul
te-a g?sit grav r?nit la marginea unui drum ?i bunica te-a
vindecat cu leacurile ei.\">The only thing I know is that my
grandfather found you badly wounded at the side of a road, and
my grandmother cured you with her remedies.�<span title=\"C�nd
?i-ai revenit ai spus c? nu �?i aminte?ti nimic ?i nu vrei s?
mergi la poli?ie p�n? nu afli ce e cu tine.\">When you came to
your senses, you said you don�t remember anything, and you don�t
want to go to the police until you find out what\'s wrong with
you.�<span title=\"Apoi te-ai obi?nuit cu noi ?i de atunci e?ti
parte din familia noastr?.\">Then you got used to us and since
then you\'re part of our family.<br><span title=\"Mul?umesc,
frate.\">Thank you, my brother.�<span title=\"Nu voi uita
niciodat? ce a?i f?cut pentru mine.\">I will never forget what
you did for me.
i><span title=\"Cealalt? parte a
Istanbulului, ora 18.\">On the other side of Istanbul, 18
o\'clock�</i>
span title=\"Mami, mami, ce bine c? ai
venit!\">Mommy, mommy, I�m so glad you came!<br><span
title=\"Draga mea, ce dor mi-a fost de tine!\">My dear, I�ve
missed you so much!�<span title=\"Ai fost cuminte?\">You didn�t
upset your grandmother, right?<br><span title=\"Nihan, nepoata
mea nu m? sup?r? niciodat?.\">Nihan, my granddaughter can never
upset me. Let�s have dinner.�<span title=\"Trebuie s? �?i fie
foame.\">You must be hungry.<br><span title=\"Masa a fost
delicioas?, mam?.\">Everything was delicious, mom.�<span
title=\"Deniz a adormit.\">Deniz has fallen asleep
already.�<span title=\"Eu voi ie?i pu?in s? iau aer.\">I�ll go
out to get some fresh air.<br><span title=\"Nihan, mergi �n port
de 4 ani �n fiecare sear?.\">Nihan, you go at the harbor every
night for 4 years.�<span title=\"Nu e momentul s? mergi mai
departe?\">Isn�t the time to move on?
span lang=\"en\"
xml:lang=\"en\">I cannot do that, mom. My soul is there. I feel
closer to Kemal. Come on, go have some rest too. I\'m coming
back quickly. Mom ... thanks for everything. I would not have
succeeded without you.<br>
he two embrace and Nihan
leaves.<br>
i><span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">On the
other side of Istanbul�</i>
span lang=\"en\"
xml:lang=\"en\">Murat, you�re absent again and you didn�t eat
anything.<br>
cannot, my brother. I can�t find my peace.
Something\'s happening to me tonight. I have the feeling that I
will be faced with destiny. Don�t listen to me, I have no idea
what I\'m talking about. I�ll go out for a walk.
span
lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">Nihan walks on the pontoon, takes
Kemal\'s letter out of her pocket, reads it again and tears
start to fall down on her face.<br>
y love, I miss you so much!
Deniz is growing more and more each day and looks so much like
you. Why? Why did you leave me alone? I will never get over your
loss.<br>
ihan wants to get up and leave, but she stumbles over
and falls into the water. Panicked, she begins to struggle and
swallow water. She doesn�t have the power to come out, but
suddenly she feels some hands picking her up. She gets to the
surface and can finally breathe.<br>
re you ok?<br>
hat voice
was like a knife. She started to tremble and slowly opened her
eyes. Her heart skipped a beat.<br>
o! It cannot be true! Is
that you? Is that really you?<br>
he man seems
surprised.<br>
hese eyes. I know ... the eyes from the dream.
But he can�t say more because Nihan faints in his arms. He
quickly takes her out of the water and tries to wake her up. She
slowly comes to her senses.<br>
ho are you? You look just
like...<br>
\'m Murat. I saw you in the water and jumped after
you.<br>
urat? No! You are Kemal! My Kemal!<br>
emal? I don�t
know what are you talking about. I ... Your eyes ...<br>
urat,
tell me all about you. Who you are, what you do, about your
family.<br>
... I have nothing to say. I don�t remember
anything about my life. A family found me hurt 4��years ago,
saved me and called me Murat. Since then I live with them.
Almost every night I have a strange dream with some eyes, some
eyes just like yours ...<br>
t cannot be true! Kemal! My love!
It\'s really you! You came back to me. It\'s not a dream, it\'s
for real!<br>
hat are you talking about?<br>
know who you
are. I know everything about you.<br>
ou? Who are you?<br>
am
Nihan, your wife.
i><span lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">Two
days later at the hospital�</i>
span title=\"Kemal, a fost o
minune c? ai sc?pat.\">Kemal, it�s a miracle you are
alive.�<span title=\"Din p?cate ai avut o leziune puternic? la
cap ce ?i-a cauzat amnezie.\">Unfortunately, you had a bad head
injury that caused you amnesia.�<span title=\"Nu ?tim sigur dac?
memoria va reveni par?ial, total sau niciodat?, dar familia te
va ajuta cu siguran??.\">We don�t know for sure whether the
memory will come back partially, totally or never again, but
your family will certainly help you get over this.�<br><span
title=\"Iubitule, haide s? mergem acas?.\">Honey, let\'s go
home.�<span title=\"Eu voi avea grij? de tine.\">I\'ll take care
of you, says Nihan.<br><span title=\"Nihan ?i Kemal intr? �n
cas?.\">Nihan and Kemal enter the house.�<span title=\"L�ng?
sc?ri st? timid? o feti??.\">There is a little girl sitting near
the stairs.<br><span title=\"Tati?\">Daddy?
span
lang=\"en\" xml:lang=\"en\">At hearing these words, Kemal starts
to tremble and looks at Nihan. She whispers to him: Deniz ... I
told her that daddy came back to us.<br><span title=\"Deniz fuge
�nspre el ?i �l �mbr??i?eaz?.\">Deniz runs to him and hugs him
tight.�<span title=\"Nihan �i �mbr??i?eaz? pe am�ndoi ?i �ncepe
s? pl�ng?.\">Nihan embraces both of them and begins to
cry.�<span title=\"Kemal nu �?i aminte?te nimic, dar simte c?
acolo e locul lui.\">Kemal doesn\'t remember anything, but he
feels like home.�<br><span title=\"Deniz a adormit
fericit?.\">Deniz is so happy she couldn\'t fall asleep. How are
you feeling?<br><span title=\"Cople?it.\">Overwhelmed.�<span
title=\"?tii, mintea mea nu �?i aminte?te, dar inima mea
da.\">You know, my mind does not remember, but my heart
does.�<span title=\"Spune-mi povestea noastr?.\">I feel that I
belong here. Please, tell me our story. I want to know. I need
to know.�<br><span title=\"Eram tineri ?i inocen?i, ne-am
�ndr?gostit ?i chiar dac? toat? lumea a fost �mpotriva noastr?
am �nvins.\">We met on a bus. We were young and innocent. Then
you rescued me just like a few days ago and we fell helplessly
in love. We faced so many obstacles, but we managed to be
together in the end. Until life took you away from me.�<span
title=\"Dar din fericire e?ti din nou aici.\">But fortunately
you are here again.�<span title=\"Pentru totdeauna.\">Forever.
<i><span title=\"?ase luni mai t�rziu...\">Six months later
...</i>
span title=\"Ce faci, Kemal?\">What are you doing,
Kemal?<br><span title=\"M? uitam din nou la poze.\">I�m looking
at our pictures again.�<span title=\"�mi amintesc fragmente, dar
nu totul.\">I remember moments, but not everything.<br><span
title=\"Ai r?bdare, iubitule.\">Have patience, sweetheart.�<span
title=\"Dragostea mea ?i a lui Deniz te vor vindeca.\">Deniz and
I will heal you.<br><span title=\"Chiar dac? nu �mi voi aminti
trecutul, voi crea noi amintiri.\">Even if I don�t remember the
past, I will create new memories.�<span title=\"Sufletul meu nu
te-a uitat ?i chiar dac? a? avea 10 vie?i, m-a? re�ndr?gosti de
tine mereu.\">My soul has not forgotten you, and even if I had
10 lives, I would fall in love with you all over
again.�<br><span title=\"El o �mbr??i?eaz? tandru, dar dintr-o
dat? privirea i se �ntunec?.\">He hugs her tenderly, but
suddenly his eyes change.<br><span title=\"Nihan, m? doare r?u
capul.\">Nihan, my head is hurting really bad.�<span
title=\"Nihan...\">Nihan ...<br><span title=\"Kemal se
pr?bu?e?te la p?m�nt.\">Kemal collapses to the ground.<br><span
title=\"Iubitule, r?spunde-mi.\">Honey, answer me!�<span
title=\"Te rog!\">Please!�<span title=\"Kemal!\">Kemal!
<i><span title=\"Dou? ore mai t�rziu, la spital.\">Two hours
later at the hospital�</i>
span title=\"Domnule doctor, cum
se simte so?ul meu?\">Doctor, how does my husband feel?<br><span
title=\"Pute?i intra.\">You can come in.�<span title=\"Vrea s?
v? vad?.\">He wants to see you.<br><span title=\"Nihan intr?
speriat?.\">Nihan is really nervous.�<br><span
title=\"Kemal?\">Kemal?<br><span title=\"Vino!\">Come!�<span
title=\"Apropie-te!\">Come here!<br><span title=\"Te sim?i
bine?\">Are you feeling alright?<br><span title=\"Mai bine ca
niciodat?.\">Better than ever.�<span title=\"Nihan, so?ia mea,
via?a mea, sufletul meu.\">Nihan, my wife, my life, my
soul.�<span title=\"�mi amintesc totul.\">I remember
everything.�<span title=\"Totul...\">Everything...<br><span
title=\"Kemal, vorbe?ti serios?\">Kemal, are you serious?�<span
title=\"Nu pot s? cred.\">I cannot believe it. I knew our love
is stronger than anything. Nothing can separate us now. We are
going to be together. Forever.
i><span title=\"Opt luni mai
t�rziu...\">Eight months later ...</i>
span
title=\"Kemal?\">Kemal?�<span title=\"Kemal, e gata
gr?tarul?\">Kemal, is the barbecue ready?<br><span title=\"Nihan
iese �n curte ?i �i vede pe Kemal ?i Deniz juc�ndu-se.\">Nihan
goes out in the yard and sees Kemal and Deniz playing.<br><span
title=\"Haide?i la mas?.\">Come on now,��<span title=\"Mie ?i
lui Ozan ne este foame.\">Ozan and I are hungry.<br><span
title=\"Kemal o ia �n bra?e pe Deniz ?i merg spre Nihan.\">Kemal
takes Deniz in his arms and goes to Nihan.�<span title=\"Cei
trei se �mbr??i?eaz? ?i Kemal o m�ng�ie pe burtic?.\">The three
embrace and Kemal caresses her belly.
span lang=\"en\"
xml:lang=\"en\">My son is as greedy as his beautiful
mother?<br><span title=\"Kemal, �ntotdeauna m?
tachinezi.\">Kemal, you always tease me.<br><span title=\"Nihan
prive?te spre mare lini?tit?.\">Nihan looks calmly at the
sea.�<span title=\"A realizat tot ce ?i-a propus.\">She became
everything she wanted.�<span title=\"E profesoara de arte Nihan
Sezin Soydere, so?ia inginerului Kemal Soydere, mama a...doi
copii, Deniz ?i Ozan.\">She is the arts teacher Nihan Sezin
Soydere, the wife of engineer Kemal Soydere, mother of ... two
children, Deniz and Ozan.
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: QueenLola Date: July 23, 2017, 3:39 pm
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@Sandy2604�. The memory loss angle.....something I haven\'t seen
in a dizi yet (at least those I\'ve watched). Poor Kemal, living
those years as Murat. Knowing there was something/someone out
there for him.
t was beautifully written. I loved it.
Congratulations <em>canim</em>
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 3:49 pm
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[quote author=QueenLola date=1500842395]
memory loss angle.....something I haven\'t seen in a dizi yet
(at least those I\'ve watched). Poor Kemal, living those years
as Murat. Knowing there was something/someone out there for
him.
Congratulations <em>canim</em>
/quote]
hank you. Yours
was great, just like a KS episode. They should\'ve hired us to
write that freaking end together. Imagine the whole thread
working on that. What an end would have been!�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: NihKem Sonsuza Kadar Date: July 23, 2017, 3:54 pm
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@Sandy2604, I simply love this. This story was well written and
I loved how you perfectly described Nihan and Kemal\'s encounter
many years later. It was AMAZING.�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: QueenLola Date: July 23, 2017, 3:54 pm
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[quote author=Sandy2604 date=1500842990]
was great, just like a KS episode. They should\'ve hired us to
write that freaking end together. Imagine the whole thread
working on that. <strong>What an end would have
been!�</strong>
/quote]
hey said the end was legendary
right? We would have shown then what legendary means�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 3:59 pm
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@Sandy2604�
reat idea,� while reading l thought \"why isn\'t
it longer, l want more\"
h if only they let us write the
end... poor Asu can\'t even imagine our ideas for her...
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:01 pm
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[quote author=NihKem Sonsuza Kadar
date=1500843266]
story was well written and I loved how you perfectly described
Nihan and Kemal\'s encounter many years later. It was
AMAZING.�
/quote]
hank you! I loved yours. For me, it had
something special. I can relate to that end.�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:06 pm
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[quote author=mili15
date=1500843578]
reading l thought \"why isn\'t it longer, l want more\"
if only they let us write the end... poor Asu can\'t even
imagine our ideas for her...
/quote]
eah, the snake would
have been crushed. No mercy there.��
was limited by time and
space and I kinda rushed the story a little bit. When I have
time I will try to make it more complex.
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:10 pm
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[quote author=Sandy2604 date=1500843994]
would have been crushed. No mercy there.��
by time and space and I kinda rushed the story a little bit.
When I have time I will try to make it more
complex.
/quote]
even thought writing something for
myself using your idea, this gave me some inspiration
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 6
By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:13 pm
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[quote author=mili15 date=1500844216]
writing something for myself using your idea, this gave me some
inspiration
/quote]
can\'t wait to read it!�
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