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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: Angel. Date: July 14, 2017, 11:44 am
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	Poyraz Kozcoglu

	oyraz never learned much about his dad, he
	only knew his name, Emir Kozcoglu, often heard about him as a
	special, smart, successful, rich and very famous businessman,
	but he never met his dad, he knew that he had died when he was
	little, or at least that�s what his mom Zeynep told him. Poyraz
	grew up together with Deniz, his older cousin, Zeynep�s brother
	Kemal and his wife Nihan, they were his closest family.

	t was
	Poyraz�s 24th birthday today, now he lived with Deniz in their
	apartment, he was finishing university, Business and Management
	degree and after that he was supposed to take over a hotel and
	restaurant his late dad Emir left for him, until now his mom was
	taking care of it. Deniz finished the same university and she
	was helping her parents in their companies. Poyraz was a decent
	student but he liked to go out, have fun, often get drunk and
	change girls, just a typical rich boy some would say. Deniz was
	like his cover for his mom, she helped him with studying and she
	was great with keeping secrets.

	�Oh c�mon again, seriously
	Poyraz� � Deniz came into his room slamming the door. Poyraz was
	sleeping with two girls next to him. � �Do you know what day is
	today, you know that aunt and my parents are coming in couple of
	hours, just look at you!� � she shouted while he was trying to
	open his eyes, of course after one of those nights, when he went
	out, drank a lot and picked up some girls. ��You two, up, up
	c�mon faster, get your things and leave the apartment, here take
	this for taxi� � she took some money from Poyraz�s wallet and
	handed it to one blonde girl, who was trying to keep balance and
	somehow leave the room. � �Get up, now it�s two o�clock, they
	are coming around four, so just enough time for you to get sober
	and pull yourself together, and don�t make me remind you what
	are we going to talk about today� � Since it was his 24th
	birthday they promised him to tell him more about his father,
	who he was and why his name isn�t mentioned that much in their
	family. � �Oh and don�t worry, of course l have prepared
	everything� � she tried to tease him just what she always did,
	they were like a real brother and sister but at the same time
	also best friends, sharing secrets and always helping each other
	no matter what problem they had. � �Oh, of course you did,
	perfect girl� � he took his old shirt and threw it trying to hit
	her. � �Don�t even try, or you are dead, just imagine aunt
	Zeynep�s face when l tell her when you came home last night and
	with whom.� � �Ok, ok, l understand, now please give me some
	privacy, sister�. Poyraz knew his mother was very worried about
	him and his life, he was easy-going, kind of trouble maker, but
	he was always trying to hide those things from her and doesn�t
	upset her. When he started living with Deniz, she moved in and
	lived with Kemal and Nihan, they had a big house and since Deniz
	isn�t with them anymore they had free space for her, also she
	wouldn�t be alone.

	�Please, calm down Zeynep, we have a
	story, and we�ll see how he�ll react when we tell him, please
	calm down.� � Nihan was trying to ease Zeynep, who was worried
	about whole situation and big reveal about Emir, even Deniz
	didn�t know many details about famous Emir. � �Don�t worry
	please, you know how much he believes and trusts me, l�ll try to
	calm him down and explain everything.� � Kemal told his sister,
	and it was true. Back when Kemal found out Zeynep was pregnant
	he promised her that no matter what he�ll help her, and take
	care of her and Poyraz, he always acted as older brother and was
	her guardian even when she was going through hard time with
	their parents. Kemal wasn�t Poyraz�s dad neither he wanted to
	be, or replace that role, but he was there as a role model, as a
	person who tried to help him with his problems while growing up.
	� �Thank you both, for being here and helping me, l�d never do
	this alone, even after 23 years it�s really hard to think about
	it, l am afraid he will hate me, or blame me for bad things that
	happened.� � Zeynep was scared of this talk. � �Should we go,
	maybe we�ll get in some

	raffic on our way, are you ready
	girls?� � Kemal was ready to go, he was very impatient about
	this talk too.

	They are almost here, mom sent me a message,
	are you ready?� � Deniz was going through house checking if
	everything was fine. - �Seriously, look at this mess, please
	just put those shirts in the closet and please hide this,� - she
	threw a box of �cigars� at him. � �Oh my God, you really can be
	pain in the ass sometimes, you know that, Miss Perfect� � he
	made funny face and rolled his eyes.

	�Oh, here they are,
	let�s go� � bell ring interrupted their little fight. � �Hello,
	welcome� � Deniz opened the door wide and let her parents and
	aunt in. � �Birthday boy, how are you, felling older already� �
	Kemal was joking. � �Canim benim, l wish you all the best and to
	be healthy� � Zeynep hugged him so tight. � �Thanks, mom, now
	it�s enough, please�.

	hey talked about everyday life during
	lunch and everything was just as it should be, but the time has
	come. They sat on the balcony with a view on sea and other part
	of Istanbul. Kemal was the one to start. ��Well l think it�s
	time, we know what you were waiting for this long, this maybe
	won�t be comfortable and pleasant, but we are going to tell it.�
	� Poyraz saw his mom becoming bit nervous, but also aunt Nihan.
	�Hmm well, where to start� � Kemal was trying to come up with
	the best way to start, but he knew that this also will affect
	Deniz. � �Emir was Nihan�s friend from her childhood, they used
	to go to same school and their fathers were partners in company.
	As you know, well Deniz you do, your mom and l have been
	together 6 years before you were born, but then we broke up, and
	separated for 5 years. Well the reason was that Ozan, Nihan�s
	late twin brother killed a girl, and Emir in order to help him
	cover the crime made an ultimatum and asked to marry Nihan, she
	decided to accept it and they got married, so Emir was Nihan�s
	first husband.�- Kemal started the story from beginning, he
	thought that would be easier. He looked at Deniz who was shocked
	to hear this, she never knew about her mom having other man
	besides Kemal, she thought that they were each other�s first
	love. Nihan put her arm on Deniz�s leg, and just nodded her head
	as she wanted to confirm the story but also to calm her down.
	Poyraz was also shocked and he was trying to understand the fact
	that his dad was his aunt�s husband. Kemal continued with the
	story � �Well yes he was her husband for 6 years, but it was
	just on paper, Nihan never loved him. Than l came back to
	Istanbul, started seeing and meeting with Nihan, and after some
	time, Zeynep met Emir, he tried to fool her, talking and
	promising how he�ll make her a model and famous. She didn�t know
	that he only wanted to be with her in order to take revenge on
	me, for being with Nihan. Many bad things happened during that
	time. Emir had a sister called Asu, she�d passed away few years
	ago in mental institution. I met her back in Zonguldak and she
	was like a best friend to me, but l didn�t know that she was in
	love with me, nor that she was sister, but l�ll skip that part
	of the story. So Asu decided to kill Ozan in order to separate
	us. After that tragedy, Zeynep continued seeing Emir. Even
	though he was still married to Nihan, and for some time he was
	your dad too sweetheart, and to be honest he loved you a lot and
	so did you loved him. He simply was different person when he was
	with you Deniz. After some time Nihan divorced Emir and we
	became a family. Emir went crazy after that, he tried on so many
	ways to separate us, and at the end that killed him, while he
	was chasing after us one night he had a traffic accident.� �
	Kemal finished the story with a relief but it was only a little
	piece of the truth, he said only the main parts, skipping many
	many events, hospitals, Nihan trying to commit suicide, but most
	of all he didn�t say that Zeynep was married to Ozan, it would
	be too much for Deniz and Poyraz to understand.

	oyraz was
	furious, angry, disappointed, he couldn�t believe what he had
	just heard. Everything was spinning around him. His uncle�s
	words were like a voice inside his head, repeating all bad
	things his dad

	as done. He saw his mom was worried, almost
	crying and watching at him trying to see his reaction. Poyraz
	stood up without saying a word and went straight to his room,
	slamming the door. His whole body was shaking, facts that Emir
	was Deniz�s dad and his mom was his lover, or Nihan was his
	wife, were spinning in his head, he never expected to hear
	something like that, he never imagined his dad as a world�s
	biggest idiot. His whole life he taught he was a criminal or
	something similar so that�s why they never talked about him.
	Second thought crossed his mind � �l am acting just like him� �
	His behavior was the same, a rich kid, spending lot of money
	just on having fun. That�s why his mom was so worried about him,
	she was scared he�ll become like Emir. Poyraz was very nervous,
	he hit the wall few times and threw some stuff around the room.
	�It�s been an almost hour since he is inside, and he locked the
	door� � Zeynep tried many times to talk to him, but he didn�t
	open his door. ��l am worried about him, what if he makes
	something stupid?� � �Don�t worry, l�ll try to talk to him, l
	think he�ll listen to me.� � Kemal stood up, kissed his sister
	and went to Poyraz�s room. ��Mom, l don�t want to talk, leave me
	alone� � Poyraz shouted after hearing the knocking again. ��It�s
	me Kemal� � Poyraz decided to open the door and let his uncle
	inside. � �You know, l am just like him, l am hurting her so
	much, for so many years her only goal was to make me different,
	to be a normal boy, just like the others, and l never understood
	her, l thought she was trying to make me perfect, but she just
	didn�t want to have another jerk next to her, and l am acting
	like that� � Poyraz was walking left to right while Kemal was
	sitting on bed. ��Come sit next to me. You are nothing like him,
	ok? You are far from that, he was a lunatic, trying to hurt
	other people when they wanted the same like him. You are just
	acting as young people nowadays. There�s nothing wrong if you
	want to have some fun. But that�s right my sister was always
	trying to protect you, to raise you different, she was trying so
	hard while bringing you up, to be a normal person, to erase all
	chances of you becoming something like Emir. Please calm down,
	because you never had an intention to hurt anyone on purpose.� �
	Poyraz set next to Kemal. � �Do you know where his greave is?� �
	Poyraz asked, he wanted to go there and to know where his dad is
	buried. � �l do know, why, you want to go there?� � �As a matter
	of fact l do, don�t know why, but l have some weird feeling� �
	�Ok, l�ll take you, but we won�t say it to girls.� � Kemal
	hugged his nephew and he felt more on ease when he saw that
	Poyraz has calmed down.

	ext week, Kemal and Poyraz went to
	Emir�s grave. There were some flowers. � �Zeynep is coming once
	a year, mostly around your birthday, Emir was a psycho but he
	was very kind to Deniz and to Zeynep when she was pregnant, so l
	guess she comes and shows him some kind of respect. You know,
	she believed that she could change him, that her love will make
	him start thinking differently, but she was wrong.� � Poyraz was
	standing calm, watching the picture of a man, he saw few times
	before, and by the first look he�d never say such man could be
	an idiot. They stood there in calm for few minutes. � �Uncle
	Kemal, l want to tell you something� � They were walking towards
	car, and Poyraz had few tears in his eyes. � �l never told you
	thank you, for being next to us, and for helping my mom and me.
	I have never told you this, but l have always thought of you as
	my father, cause you were always there next to me, you were
	helping me go through hard times, l learned many things from
	you. And l love you so much� � Poyraz turned towards his uncle
	and hug him tight. � �Oh and l won�t call you dad, just to let
	you know� � Kemal hugged him back with tears in his eyes feeling
	so proud that he made such strong and positive man. ��Don�t
	worry l won�t call you son, either� � �Yeah, and don�t tell
	girls l cried, l mean Deniz would wipe my ass around whole
	Istanbul� � Poyraz run his hands over his eyes and opened the
	door of the car.
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: QueenLola Date: July 23, 2017, 3:24 pm
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	@mili15�well done <em>canim</em>. Congratulations�

	really
	loved the Poyraz focus. Bringing him back to life, and showing
	us his life. I liked the stubborn/naughty�Kozcuoglu gene in him.
	Thank God it wasn\'t as dominant as his dad\'s.

	oor kid,
	imagine if he knew the whole story...\"your mum was married to
	your aunt\'s twin who she almost killed. And your aunt was
	married to your dad who tried many times to kill your uncle\"�
	Loved it.
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 3:39 pm
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	[quote author=QueenLola date=1500841463]

	<em>canim</em>. Congratulations�

	focus. Bringing him back to life, and showing us his life. I
	liked the stubborn/naughty�Kozcuoglu gene in him. Thank God it
	wasn\'t as dominant as his dad\'s.

	knew the whole story<strong>...\"your mum was married to your
	aunt\'s twin who she almost killed. And your aunt was married to
	your dad who tried many times to kill your
	uncle\"</strong>�

	/quote]

	em>Te?ekk�rler
	can?m</em>

	ell l got this idea by chance, and l was also
	thinking, \"probably everyone else will have \"NihKem\" as main
	focus of their story\", so l wanted to try something else. I
	started it when Angel mentioned this competition, back than both
	Kemal and Poyraz were alive

	know, but all those
	brother/sister and partner relationships were crazy in this show
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: NihKem Sonsuza Kadar Date: July 23, 2017, 3:50 pm
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	@mili15, canim, this story rocks. Although our dear Poyraz
	didn\'t get his happy ending, I love how you told his story.�
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: Lena Date: July 23, 2017, 3:55 pm
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	[quote author=NihKem Sonsuza Kadar
	date=1500843028]

	Although our dear Poyraz didn\'t get his happy ending, I love
	how you told his story.�
	/quote]

	oyraz Karayel the show is
	one of my top favorite shows of all time, and I can\'t tell you
	how psyched I was when Emir named his son Poyraz. How can one
	forget the pain of the show they loved when they are reminded of
	it one way or another in some other show. �
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:06 pm
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	[quote author=Lena date=1500843300]

	favorite one.
	/quote]

	em>vay be,�</em>

	ust because of
	the name?�

	quote author=NihKem Sonsuza Kadar
	date=1500843028]

	Although our dear Poyraz didn\'t get his happy ending, I love
	how you told his story.�
	/quote]

	thanks, thanks canim,
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: Sandy2604 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:09 pm
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	@mili15�Excellent story, so unexpected and nicely put together.
	Definitely an idea that not many would have thought!�
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: Lena Date: July 23, 2017, 4:12 pm
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	[quote author=mili15 date=1500843986]

	be,�</em>


	canim,
	/quote]

	ecause of the name, the idea, the way the
	story was told and written, and how interesting it was to read.
	I mean, I was so sleepy in the morning and I remember this story
	waking me up instantly because it peeked my interest. Very
	special to my heart for these reasons, and because Poyraz
	Karayel is a legendary character and in a way (although this
	Poyraz has no relation to that Poyraz) it was kind of a small
	tribute to him. THANK. YOU.
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: mili15 Date: July 23, 2017, 4:23 pm
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	[quote author=Lena date=1500844375]

	the idea, the way the story was told and written, and how
	interesting it was to read. I mean, I was so sleep in the
	morning and I remember this story waking me up instantly because
	it peaked my interest. Very special to my heart for these
	reasons, and because Poyraz Karayel is a legendary character and
	in a way (although this Poyraz has no relation to that Poyraz)
	it was kind of a small tribute to him. THANK. YOU.
	/quote]
	thanks for such nice words,��

	ur Poyraz was part of the show
	for few months, maybe like 15 episodes, but l noticed that in
	such short period he got many many fans,and not only Zeymir
	part, so as you wrote small tribute
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	Kara Sevda Writing Competition- Contestant 4
	By: Lena Date: July 23, 2017, 4:26 pm
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	[quote author=mili15 date=1500845031]

	words,��

	maybe like 15 episodes, but l noticed that in such short period
	he got many many fans,and not only Zeymir part, so as you wrote
	small tribute
	/quote]

	wasn\'t a Zeymir fan in all honesty.
	I always liked Nihan and Emir together. Emir/Poyraz and
	Emir/Deniz. And of course, Leyla and Emir. �

	nd, I meant
	every word. �
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