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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Angel. Date: July 14, 2017, 11:33 am
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b><u>Kara Sevda �
The Proper End</u></b>
* 4 Years Later**
-����������<b><i>Kemal Soydere Consulting Firm</i></b>
<strong>Zehir</strong>: �<i>Patron</i>, I�m heading out to meet
with the guys from the new client. We need to finalize those
remaining details with their lawyers, so I�ll pick Zehra up from
her office first.�
strong>Kemal</strong>:
�<i>Tamam</i>�Zehir.��But that will take some time. Will Burak
go with you as well? Poor kid will bored and restless.�
<strong>Zehir</strong>: �<i>Yok abi</i>, I�ll pick him up first
then drop him off at your parents. I spoke with
Fehime�<i>hanim</i>, Deniz has been impatiently waiting for
him.�<i>Vallah patron</i>, save my son from your daughter. The
last time, he came home covered in glitter. It took 3 washes to
get most of it off him. And I had to trim my moustache because
they got stuck there too.�
strong>Kemal</strong>�(laughing
and patting him on the back): �Don�t worry�<i>kardesim</i>, this
phase will pass soon. Her art-teacher mother is her role model.
All the furniture at home still bear the marks of her
water-color phase. I wish I knew who included that glitter
packet in the art-kit she got from her last birthday.�
<strong>Zehir�</strong>(mischievously chuckling):
�Okay�<i>patron</i>. I�m off anyway. Will you be here much
longer?�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �No, I�ll be leaving soon.
I�ll have a quick drink with Niyazi and the guys. They want to
give me some information on the competition from Zonguldak. It
seems they�re planning to expand to Istanbul as well. Call me if
you finish on time, you could join us�
strong>Zehir</strong>:
�<i>Eyvallah</i>�<i>patron</i>.�<i>Gorusuruz�</i>
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Gorusuruz</i>�
-����������<b><i>Soydere House</i></b>
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Tamam</i>�Deniz, this time you�ll
play without any glitter. Your�<i>dede�s</i>�head can�t get any
more shiny than it is now�
strong>Deniz</strong>: �<i>Tamam
anne</i>�
strong>Husseyin</strong>: �Leave my granddaughter,
she can rub as much as she wants on my head. I�ll just stroll
down to the shop. My new assistant Kaan is capable of getting
rid of it�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �How is he anyway? Kemal
mentioned he was asking for a raise. He�s been here barely a
month. I hope he�s dependable.�
strong>Husseyin</strong>: �He
is, he is. He had a family situation he needed money for. His
father fell off a ladder in the village some weeks ago. And
expenses had been piling for the mother. He needed to send her
something to tide her over till his father got back on his feet.
Nothing to worry about. He�s a dedicated worker.�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �That�s good to know. You can rest and
take your time at home assured the business is still standing.�
**Deniz knocks over a lamp, looks at Nihan who wrinkles her
nose at her then runs to Husseyin**
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�<i>Ozaman</i>, I have to go now. I�m meeting with Yasemin.
Since she just moved back, she really needs my help in putting
together her exhibition. Fehime�<i>anne</i>! I�m leaving.�
<strong>Fehime</strong>�(comes in from the kitchen): �Did you
just say you were going to do more work? You just got back from
school and haven�t rested yet. I hope my grandson is not being
stressed with all this.�
strong>Nihan</strong>�(rubbing her
protruding belly and smiling): My boy feeds off his mother�s
energy. I can already tell he�s going to be a sportsman. The
kicks I�ve been getting these past days have been powerful.�
<strong>Fehime</strong>: �Tut tut tut
tut,�<i>mashallah</i>.�<i>Tamam yavrum</i>, get going so you can
finish on time�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Tamam
gorusuruz</i>. Deniz, bye bye.�
����������<b><i>Nihan in
the car with Yasemin</i></b>
<strong>Yasemin</strong>:�<i>Ya</i>�Nihan, I�m losing my mind.
What was I thinking planning this exhibition on such a scale.
I�m about to cancel it.
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Sakin
ol</i>. You�re just tense because it�s next week.�<i>Merak
etme</i>, you�ve already done so much. It�s going to be a big
success�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �<i>Sagol canim</i>. I
don�t know what I�d do without you. Thank God you�re helping me.
I wish it was a joint exhibition like we�d always planned. But
I�m definitely going to pressure you to do yours once you give
birth.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Olur</i>, let my prince
come first, then afterwards we can start planning. Though I
don�t think it can happen within the next 2 years.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �What do you mean. Of course it�s
going to happen soon. You�re about to give birth to the first
Soydere grandson. Do you think Fehime�<i>hanim</i>�is going to
leave him for a second? She missed out on Deniz�s birth and
first months. I�m sure she�ll be all over you. And there�s your
mum as well. You just sit back with a nice cold drink while the
2 grandmothers fall over themselves. You�ll have enough time to
paint.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �That would be perfect, but
don�t forget I�m not the only one giving birth soon. Zeynep is
also far along as well.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Ahhh. I
forgot Zeynep. You two are due about the same time right?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Evet</i>. Within 2 weeks of each
other. So its really close.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Ah
Zeynep, how is she now? The poor thing went through a lot back
then.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �I can only say thank God. It
didn�t go well with the first 2 psychiatrists she saw. She was
too closed off with them. Thankfully the doctor who eventually
helped her really made her open up. She had a breakthrough with
her. We�re all so relieved she overcame it. And with Hakan
supporting her through it all, she eventually opened her heart
to him. Their love is a beautiful thing truly.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �So she�s playing housewife now?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Yok yok</i>. She�s a teacher also.
Her school isn�t far from Kemal�s office.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Everything worked out for good then.
Everyone overcame Emir Kozcuoglu�s blight. Has he regained
consciousness yet?�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Not yet. The last
I heard, the doctors said his state was unchanged. Hitting is
neck on that rock really damaged his spine.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Wow. The great Emir Kozcuoglu. Just
look at him now. If he wakes up today, what else does he have
asides his mother. Zeynep was brave to end the marriage with him
in a coma. How did that happen anyway?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �I really can�t explain it, but it was
a complex legal process. It even involved Mujgan�<i>hanim</i>�at
a point to stand in for him�<b>(excuse my ignorance of the law
in these situations, it just fits with the story in my
mind)</b>.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �<i>Neyse</i>, its good
you all are at peace now.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �It�s the
best feeling in the world. It�s a miracle I still have Kemal
with me. Thank God the mine malfunctioned at the last moment and
the blast wasn�t as damaging as they predicted. My Kemal lost
part of his right leg, he gets to wear a prosthetic, but he�s
here with me. I can touch and hold him whenever I want. Deniz
can play with her baba as she wants. And now we have another one
on the way. I�m really grateful for my life Yasemin. I gave up
so many times in the past years. I gave up when I saw that mine
explode. But I�ve come to accept that after the fiercest storm,
the sun will always shines.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>:
�<i>Aynen canim</i>�and see what happened. Emir is quite
literally knocked out of your life.�<i>Ama</i>, I hope you�re
all ready for if he wakes up.�
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�<i>Merak etme</i>, we are all bracing for when that happens.
But Kemal and the authorities have put measures in place�.This
is the place right? I think that�s the lady and her team waiting
for us.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �<i>Evet</i>, it�s
her.�<i>Ay</i>! I just felt the panic again.�<i>Yardim
et</i>�Nihan�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Sakin
ol</i>�Yasemin.�<i>Ah ah</i>! They�d think you�d never planned
an exhibition in the past�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �<i>Tamam
tamam</i>. Let�s go�
*After the meeting with the exhibition
team. Nihan and Yasemin walking back to the car. Nihan is
chatting on her phone**
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Really I�m
tired of playing big sister to Eda in this her relationship with
Shafak. Now they�re fighting because he went with his friends to
Izmir for the weekend.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>:
�<i>Eee</i>?�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �I�m so tired. The poor
boy invited her, but she refused. What could he do? It�s his
best friend�s birthday. They went to relax and he asked her to
come along. But she wanted �alone time� with him.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �So they�ll be breaking up soon I
guess.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Asla</i>. This is how they
relate. It�s what we�ve seen over the years. They can�t do
without each other. I won�t be surprised if they�re making up
this very minute. I usually ignore it when she starts
complaining because it�s over in less than a day. She just uses
me as her venting wall and I sit there and take
it�..ahh�<i>Ayhan</i>�abi is
video-calling.�<i>Merhaba</i>�Ayhan�<i>abi</i>,�<i>merhaba</i>�L
eyla.�
<strong>Ayhan & Leyla</strong>: �<i>Merhaba</i>!!!�
<strong>Leyla</strong>: �<i>Nasilsin canim</i>?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Ben iyiyim.�</i>You both look
fantastic. So tan. How�s the cruise going?�
<strong>Ayhan</strong>: �<i>Vallah</i>�Nihan, it�s amazing. We
arrived Seychelles yesterday and this place is fantastic. I wish
you could see it.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �I�m sure you�re
having an amazing time.�
strong>Leyla</strong>: �We
are�<i>canim</i>. I spoke with Vildan some minutes ago. She was
leaving a lunch with her friends from the children�s
foundation.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Yes they had a meeting
today. They�re planning a fund-raising gala for the children.�
<strong>Leyla</strong>: �<i>Ay guzel</i>. I wish I could be a
part of it.�
strong>Ayhan</strong>: �Well right now, you�re
enjoying being a part of me�<i>Kleopatra</i>. Not so?�
<strong>Leyla</strong>�(rolling her eyes):
�<i>Evet</i>�Ayhan�<i>bey</i>, I wouldn�t want to be anywhere
else right now. I just miss my children.�
<strong>Ayhan</strong>: �I miss them too�<i>Kleopatra</i>.
Don�t worry, just a couple more weeks and we�ll be back home?�
<strong>Leyla</strong>: �<i>Tamam</i>. Nihan, where�s Kemal? We
were thinking you might be together.�
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�He�s fine. He had an engagement with his friends from back in
the day. I�m sure he�ll call me soon.�
strong>Ayhan</strong>:
�And how�s the pregnancy coming along. I hope you�re getting
enough rest. You�re almost there. We should be coming back at
about the same time.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Tamam
abi</i>. We miss you guys. I�ll make sure Kemal calls you
later.�
strong>Ayhan</strong>: �<i>Tamam canim</i>. Talk
later.�
strong>Leyla</strong>: �<i>Hadi gorusuruz</i>�Nihan.
Kiss Deniz for me.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Bye
bye�..<i>Aferdersiniz</i>�Yasemin, I kept you waiting.�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �No its fine. It�s good to see Leyla
and Ayhan looking so happy and relaxed�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �It sure is.�<i>Eeee</i>, where do you
want me to drop you off?�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �I�m
parked close to the children�s hospital. You can drop me off on
the way.
* They drive off and keep chatting. Nihan�s
phone rings**
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Efendim
askim</i>�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Canim</i>. Are you
through with your meeting with Yasemin?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Evet</i>�Kemal. We just left. I�ll
be dropping her off soon then heading back to your parents to
pick up Deniz.
* Yasemin waves**
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�Yasemin says hello�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �Hello Yasemin�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �Will you come to us there?�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �Most likely. So I guess we�ll meet
there. My car is back by the way, they�ve adjusted the gas pedal
issues, so I�m back to driving once more.�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Harika</i>. That�s good news.�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Evet</i>�..
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �Ayhan and Leyla called a while ago.
They�re now in Seychelles. I told them we�d call later on.�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Guzel</i>. They�re really having
the time of their lives. I�m envious.��Once the kids are a
little grown, we�re taking our own world-cruise too.�
<strong>Nihan</strong>:�<i>Tabii ki,�</i>we deserve it!�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Aynen</i>. I also spoke with the
guys at Vanessa. The furniture we ordered should be delivered in
about 2 weeks. Hopefully Deniz should be past her glitter phase
by then.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Nihayet</i>. I�m
relieved. I hope it turns out to be as we expected.�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �I�m sure they won�t disappoint us�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �I don�t think they will. I was going
to ask about�.�<i>Bir dakika, bir dakika</i>. What�s going on
there?�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Ne</i>? Nihan? What�s
happening? Niha�.she hung up.�
*Kemal dials again**
<strong>Operator</strong>: �The number you have dialled is not
reachable�
* Nihan brakes sharply and jumps out of the car**
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Nihan!�<i>Ne oldu</i>?! Nihan!�
*
15 minutes later. Kemal�s phone rings**
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �Yasemin? Where�s Nihan?�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Kemal, I think you need to come down
here. This is now beyond me.�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �Where
is there? What happened to Nihan? Why can�t I reach her phone?
What�s going on Yasemin? Tell me.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>:
�I don�t even know where to start explaining from�.<i>hadi
yapma</i>�Nihan. Kemal, I�ll send you our location. Please come
quickly. Hey you, don�t touch her�.�
strong>Kemal</strong>:
�Yasemin�<i>Alo</i>�Yasemin!!...<i>bu ne</i>?�
* 20
minutes later, Kemal arrives at the location. He kicks the car
door open and grabs his cane to balance himself**
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �Yasemin! Where�s Nihan? What
happened?�
* Yasemin points to a group of construction
workers huddled together**
strong>Kemal</strong>: �I don�t
understand.�
strong>Yasemin</strong>: �Your wife prevented
these men from doing their work. She actually threw her phone at
that one over there with the cut on his brow.�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �Nihan did what?!�
<strong>Yasemin</strong>: �I think you should get closer to
understand. Kemal, I have to go. I�m meeting my fianc�e�s mother
for dinner. I don�t want to be late. Don�t worry, I know you can
handle this situation.�
* Kemal moves closer to the group. As
they part, he sees Nihan lying down with her back to the ground,
eyes closed. **
strong>Kemal</strong>: �Nihan!!�
* Nihan
turns her head, looks at him, winks and turns back**
<strong>Workman 1</strong>: �Is this lady your wife sir?�
**Kemal tries to push past him.**
strong>Kemal</strong>:
�Yes she is. Why is she lying there? What happened to her? Did
you harm her?�
strong>Workman 1</strong>: The only person who
got hurt here is one of us. In addition to that, there has been
too much of our time wasted. I�ve delayed calling the police
because she�s pregnant and her friend said you�d come talk some
sense into her. So sir, do what�s needed and get your wife out
of here so we can continue our work.
strong>Kemal</strong>:
�Why would my wife disturb you. What has she got to do with your
work?�
strong>Workman 2</strong>: �<i>Beyefendi</i>, all we
know is we�re supposed to work on this road�s expansion, and
your wife jumped in front of us and refused us breaking down
this wall.�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Ne</i>? What wall?�
** Kemal looks up, stares at the wall and makes out very faint
red paint that reads �Nihan Kemal Seviyoor�**
*Kemal slowly
rolls his eyes, shakes his head and starts walking towards Nihan
**
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Ya</i>�Nihan,�<i>yapma. Yapma,
lutfen</i>.�
*Nihan opens her eyes and looks directly at
him**
strong>Nihan</strong>: �What should I do Kemal? I can�t
let this happen�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Ya
birak</i>�Nihan!�<i>Birak</i>! I can�t believe you�re causing
all this commotion over this wall�
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�Commotion? Kemal, this is our wall!�
strong>Kemal</strong>:
�This wall belongs to the government. They want to remove it.
Yes, we have our mark on it, but when was the last time we were
here. You can barely see our names any more.�<i>Hadi</i>�Nihan,
stop this.�
*Nihan gives him an icy stare**
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �So this wall means nothing to you?�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �Of course it means a lot to me. We
have so many memories here. But we have so many more, and we�re
making more as we go along. Come on, don�t get into trouble
because of this.�
*Nihan stares at him longer**
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Hayir</i>, I�m not moving from
here. If it doesn�t mean so much to you, it does to me. I�ll lie
here till the police come�
*Kemal braces himself against his
cane and squats beside her**
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Bir
tanem</i>, what have we lived? Isn�t our story the stuff of
legends and fairy-tales? Do we need this wall as proof of our
love? We�ve shown time and again we�re stronger by ourselves.
And now we have Deniz and Ozan. Proof of this great love. Is
there anything that can shake us now or ever, or question our
bond?�<i>Asla.</i>�
* Nihan opens one eye and looks at him**
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �You sound just as you did in that
letter you left for me when you thought you were going to die. I
was supposed to go on living without you remember? Do you really
think that would have been possible? Since that horrible
incident, I�ve gathered and kept everything that could be
considered a memory for us. If it means keeping this wall too,
then I�ll do it. So many years have passed, but I�m still shaken
every time. I want to hold on to everything about us. I feel if
I lose sight or grasp of any of them we�ll lose each other.�
**Kemal smiles. Drops to the floor and lies on his back**
<strong>Workman 2</strong>: �<span lang=\"tr\"
xml:lang=\"tr\">Who are these crazy people?�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �What are you doing Kemal?�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Merak etme</i>. I�m just resting.
Do you know how hard it is for me to squat in that position for
that long?�
* Nihan and Kemal lie on their backs in silence.
Seconds pass**
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Kemal, I�m hungry��
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Tovbe tovbe.�</i>You really came
prepared for this protest.�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Is it my
fault I�m fighting to show our love? What should I have done?�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �You shouldn�t have kept my son hungry
for so long. Your hunger always comes with dangerous
situations�
* More seconds pass. Kemal sits up**
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Hadi</i>�Nihan, we�ve done our
protest for the day. Let these men go about their business
already.�
* He pulls Nihan up into a sitting position and
looks deep into her eyes**
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Benim
kara sevda, benim omrum, benim canim karim</i>. What would I do
without you? My eyes see nothing else asides you. Many would say
they lose their senses around their loved ones, but that is when
I am most collected. Your breath is the very reason for my
being. Knowing you, Deniz and Ozan are safe and together is my
life�s goal. You want to mark the world with our love? No
building in Turkey would be safe.�<i>Hadi</i>, let�s go mark all
the walls. Where do you want to start? The Parliament Building?
The Presidential Complex? Let�s go and show them.�<i>Hadi
canim</i>. But first let�s give Ozan some food�<i>tamam</i>?�
**Nihan smiles and Kemal pulls her to her feet**
<strong>Workman 1</strong>: �<i>Nihayet�</i>
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Kusuruna bakmamak beyler</i>. My
wife was just really excited today. This wall means a lot to
her. Please continue your work�
*Kemal puts his arm around
her, and Nihan holds his cane**
strong>Nihan</strong>: �Why
did you use this today? Do you feel pain?�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �All I know is I grabbed it as I left
because I felt it would come in handy. Maybe I�d need to defend
my wife��
strong>Nihan</strong>: �My hero. Thank you�
*She
kisses his cheek and they start walking away**
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �Will you really go and mark the
Parliament Building?�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �<i>Yok
artik</i>! You really think I�d get into that kind of
trouble.�<i>Hayir canim</i>, not even for you.�
<strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i><span lang=\"tr\"
xml:lang=\"tr\">Inanam?yorum</i>�Kemal. You just wanted me to
get up.�
strong>Kemal</strong>: �Of course. My stubborn
pregnant wife decides to lie down on the ground surrounded by
heavy duty machines and all kinds of dangerous things. What else
am I to do?�
strong>Nihan</strong>: �<i>Sana</i>�<i><span
lang=\"tr\" xml:lang=\"tr\">Inanam?yorum.�</i><span lang=\"tr\"
xml:lang=\"tr\">You got me with your sweet words.�
<strong>Kemal</strong>: �But you know everything I said up to
that point was from my heart right?�
strong>Nihan</strong>:
�<i>Tabii kocacim. Biliyorum</i>�
* They keep walking away,
and the camera pans to the blue sky above**
*As the credits
roll, scenes and pictures from the future**
����������Kemal
crying in the delivery room as he holds new-born Ozan.
-����������Kemal, Nihan, Deniz and Ozan family portrait.
-����������Family gathering with the entire Soydere clan at
Zeynep�s twin girls 1<sup>st</sup>�birthday.
����������Kemal,
Nihan and the kids on a road trip to Bodrum.
-����������10-year and 5-year old Deniz and Ozan with their
parents on kite hill.
����������Nihan and Kemal 15-year
anniversary.
����������A much older Kemal standing at the
prison gates hugging a just released Tarik.
����������Aerial
view of an older comatose Emir in bed. Camera zooms in and
focuses on his right hand. His index finger twitches once
-����������Screen cuts to black
� � � � � � � � � � � � � �
� � � � � � � ��<img alt=\"YcsNbeD.jpg\"
src=\"
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: mili15 Date: July 15, 2017, 4:00 pm
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love the use of Turkish words, and for some l can really hear
characters saying them, mostly Nihan�
lso great parallel with
Emir and Mujgan, the time he was in coma, and that finger at the
end
lso so many details about NihKem, true fan wrote this
one.�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: zurri Date: July 15, 2017, 4:22 pm
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The person who wrote this A kara�sevda fan?�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: NihKem12 Date: July 15, 2017, 4:26 pm
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Am I allowed to say that this is my favourite story? Others are
amazing too but this one stood out to me. I totally can imagine
this scenario and I can see this actually happening in the show.
Well done�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Ariadne Date: July 16, 2017, 2:36 am
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Love this story, very nice! Nihan wanting to protect the wall
and doing what she did made me laugh. It\'s so her!
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: NihKem Sonsuza Kadar Date: July 16, 2017, 5:14 am
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After reading the stories for the second time, I feel like this
is definitely the best out of all of them. �Don\'t get me wrong,
the other ones are definitely amazing as well, but this one
stands out a whole lot more to me.�
have a feeling that
Angel wrote this. I mean, she\'s hella creative and she knows
Turkish, so of course she would include some Turkish�in her
story. But then again, I feel like I\'m wrong, because if Angel
wrote a story, she would definitely include Emir.
t\'s either
Angel or Nora. Those are my guesses.�
nyway,�I think it\'s
better if we wait�for the big reveal instead of guessing which
story is whose.
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Nora. Date: July 16, 2017, 6:14 pm
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[quote author=NihKem Sonsuza Kadar date=1500200054]
reading the stories for the second time, I feel like this is
definitely the best out of all of them. �Don\'t get me wrong,
the other ones are definitely amazing as well, but this one
stands out a whole lot more to me.�
Angel wrote this. I mean, she\'s hella creative and she knows
Turkish, so of course she would include some Turkish�in her
story. But then again, I feel like I\'m wrong, because if Angel
wrote a story, she would definitely include Emir.
either Angel or Nora. Those are my guesses.�
think it\'s better if we wait�for the big reveal instead of
guessing which story is whose.
/quote]
ell i can tell you
that this one is not mine��I can write reviews and share my
thoughts all day long, but writing a story is a whole different
thing. I\'m not good at that at all.�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Lena Date: July 16, 2017, 6:18 pm
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[quote author=Nora. date=1500246890]
that this one is not mine��I can write reviews and share my
thoughts all day long, but writing a story is a whole different
thing. I\'m not good at that at all.�
/quote]
on\'t be so
hard on yourself. I truly believe anyone can write at least one
good story. We all have it in us. We are natural storytellers. �
�
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Nora. Date: July 17, 2017, 9:59 am
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[quote author=Lena date=1500247099]
yourself. I truly believe anyone can write at least one good
story. We all have it in us. We are natural storytellers. �
�
/quote]
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Kara Sevda Writing Competition-Contestant 2
By: Burness Date: July 17, 2017, 8:13 pm
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Whoever wrote this story ...Thank you ! You made me forget the
actual terrible end we got ,I was imaging this story and for a
moment I convinced myself this was the real ending ..
uch a
beautiful story with a lot of details.Good job
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