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| #Post#: 63-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: Shane Date: April 10, 2013, 7:31 am | |
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| There was a young boy waiting for things to happen. He was | |
| bored. His name... was Shaun Engiabo. He had no friends. He had | |
| plenty of enemies. He had to run, away, away from everything. | |
| He ran for it. | |
| So close... | |
| He collided with a lamp post as bullies laughed at him. | |
| Bully 1: "What's the matter, Engiabo? Scared?" | |
| Bully 2: "Chicken?" | |
| Bully 3: "Buk buk buk buk buk baa!" | |
| The bullies laughed. Shaun got up and ran past the lamp post, | |
| only to be surrounded by ten more bullies. They began beating | |
| him up. It hurt. So much pain. So much blood. | |
| Why didn't he die yet? he wondered. Why was he still alive after | |
| he was being beaten to a pulp? | |
| Voice: "STOP." | |
| Bullies: "Huh?" | |
| Shaun opened his eyes. A beautiful girl was standing there, her | |
| eyes showing intense rage. | |
| Girl: "I said STOP. If you continue to beat up that guy, I'm | |
| gonna kill you." | |
| The bullies laughed. | |
| Bully 1: "Get her." | |
| The bullies rushed at her, only to suddenly catch fire and burn | |
| to ashes. | |
| Bully 1: "What the?! What is she?" | |
| Girl: "Inhuman." | |
| The girl threw a fireball at the bully, turning him into ashes. | |
| She ran to Shaun and helped him up. | |
| Girl: "You okay?" | |
| Shaun: "N-no..." | |
| Shaun lost consciousness. He was in too much pain... | |
| #Post#: 65-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: KarjamP Date: April 10, 2013, 9:55 am | |
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| After the adventure in Variant H, PK and KarjamP were having a | |
| break in Karjam's Domain. | |
| KarjamP: "Did you hear about The Dragon Riders Planning Forums | |
| having a The Battle now?" | |
| PK: "Huh? Well, I think we need to go to that equivalent of | |
| DRACONIA!" | |
| KarjamP: "Not so fast. I think we should have a break from | |
| adventuring first." | |
| PK: "...I guess you're right." | |
| #Post#: 66-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: Taylor Date: April 10, 2013, 2:20 pm | |
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| Meanwhile, on a planet far away... | |
| Girl 1: "Hurry up! We're gonna miss it!" | |
| Girl 2: "It's not my fault!" | |
| Girl 3: "Stuff a sock in it and just hurry! We're gonna be late | |
| if we don't make it there in time!" | |
| The girls suddenly stop. | |
| Girl 1: "What's going on there? Who's that with a stocking over | |
| her mouth?" | |
| Girl 2: "... Don't they usually use gags when they silence | |
| people about to be executed?" | |
| Girl 3: "Yeah, you're right... Oh no! It's Vicky!" | |
| Girl 1: "What?! We'd better hurry!" | |
| Girl 2: "Never mind school, our friend's more important!" | |
| Girl 3: "I agree!" | |
| The girls rush closer to the crowd surrounding the gallows. | |
| Girl 1: "What's going on here?" | |
| Guard: "This girl here has been caught stealing hosiery from the | |
| clothing shop." | |
| Girl 2: "That's a lie!" | |
| Guard: "Et amun? Prove it." | |
| Girl 3: "If you just remove that sto--" | |
| Guard: "Arrest these girls for being accomplices to that girl!" | |
| Girl 3: "What?!" | |
| Several guards come and grab the girls by their arms, dragging | |
| them to the gallows where their friend was. | |
| Girl 1: "Somebody! Help--" | |
| A stocking is stuffed over her mouth, preventing her from | |
| talking. | |
| Girl 2: "Those things must be really useful as gags if the | |
| people stopped using actual gags..." | |
| Stockings are stuffed over the mouths of the remaining two | |
| girls, as the three girls are tied up with rope and hung by | |
| their arms on long steel bars. The rope was too thick for them | |
| to break, but it was also easy to cut with a sword. | |
| Guard: "Anyone else want to try and save them? No-one? Good. | |
| Drop 'em in." | |
| A trap door opens below the girls as the ropes get cut and they | |
| fall down! Eventually they land on hay. The foul air was slowly | |
| suffocating them, as there was thousands of ancient musty | |
| corpses in the room. The room goes dark, although one of the | |
| girls had a glow-in-the-dark necklace on. The room started | |
| filling up with a green-coloured gas, but a barrier surrounded | |
| the girls. A mysterious figure stepped into the range of the | |
| light emanating from the necklace of one of the girls. | |
| Figure: "You'll be fine, don't worry." | |
| The figure stepped forward, removing the "gags" from the girls. | |
| Vicky: "Thanks, who are--?" | |
| Figure: "Shh! Don't talk." | |
| Vicky nodded as the mysterious figure untied the girls. Then she | |
| beckoned for them to follow her. She ran through a massive pipe, | |
| the girls following her. Eventually they came to a dead end, | |
| then the mysterious figure opened a hatch above her. She climbed | |
| out, the girls following her. They went through the forest, | |
| sneaking by guards to not alert them of their escape, until they | |
| reached a cave. They entered it. | |
| Figure: "... Good, nobody will notice us here." | |
| The girls sat on the ground, shivering. They had almost died, | |
| yet the stranger saved them. The stranger took off her gas mask. | |
| Stranger: "I'm Nadia Glarestorm. I'm a member of Organization | |
| Xi." | |
| Vicky: "Organization Xi?" | |
| Nadia: "Yes. It's an organization for people who are unique - | |
| like you girls, for instance. I know not your names, but I know | |
| you are all unique from other people." | |
| Vicky: "I'm Vicky van der Westhuizen, the fourteenth. These are | |
| my friends, Lily, Dianke and Taylor Smith. They're all sisters." | |
| Taylor (Girl 1): "Nice to meet you, although I fail to | |
| understand how we're unique. Other than Vicky, I mean, since | |
| she's... a Saiyan." | |
| Dianke (Girl 3): "As my sister said." | |
| Lily (Girl 2): "So why are we hiding?" | |
| Nadia: "Those guards want to kill you since their king knows | |
| that you have special powers. Somehow, he knows. I don't know | |
| how, though. We have to get out of here, and the only way to do | |
| so is via the Organization." | |
| Nadia opened a portal. | |
| Nadia: "That goes to headquarters. Coming?" | |
| The girls nodded as they went through, Nadia being last. The | |
| portal closes after them. | |
| ... | |
| Ten minutes later... | |
| Guard: "Huh? Where are they? Could've sworn they went in here. | |
| Oh well, I must've been dreaming, there's no way they could've | |
| escaped the gas chamber!" | |
| #Post#: 67-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: KarjamP Date: April 10, 2013, 3:48 pm | |
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| After having a tea break, PK said, | |
| PK: "If we aren't British, why are we having a tea break?" | |
| KarjamP: "It's a nice drink, isn't it?" | |
| PK: "Well, I guess so." | |
| KarjamP: "Okay, do you think it's time for us to come there?" | |
| ???: "Wait!" | |
| KarjamP: "Eric?" | |
| PK: "Great, a little crossover." | |
| Eric: "Since my last adventure with that pirate and that data | |
| girl, I think I'd still want to adventure some more." | |
| PK: "Well..." | |
| KarjamP: "If you say so, I guess." | |
| PK: "Anyway, let's open the portal to Variant H!" | |
| A portal opened as they jumped in. | |
| They'd arrived in Gansbaai. | |
| KarjamP: "It's only recently that I've realized Gansbaai was | |
| close to Cape Town." | |
| PK: "You didn't know?" | |
| KarjamP: "I had never heard of the town before Author Shane told | |
| me where he came from." | |
| Eric: "Why are we doing here?" | |
| PK: "We're looking for this world's Shane Neumann." | |
| Eric: "Almost forgot about him." | |
| #Post#: 68-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: Taylor Date: April 10, 2013, 4:36 pm | |
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| ORGANIZATION XI HQ | |
| Taylor: "It's big." | |
| Dianke: "It's awesome." | |
| Lily: "It's falling apart." | |
| Vicky: "It's hilarious." | |
| Nadia: "It's horrific! THE FIRE NATION HAS ATTACKED!" | |
| It was raining meteorites as the Fire Nation of the planet of | |
| Zenriek attacked. The Nation of Quintessence had no hope. | |
| Taylor: "Now what?" | |
| Dianke: "We die?" | |
| Nadia: "Enter the portal, it should take you to Surfacia!" | |
| Vicky: "Roger!" | |
| Lily: "Gotcha." | |
| The four girls entered the portal as it closed. | |
| Nadia: "Safe trip, you four." | |
| EARTH / SURFACIA | |
| The girls arrived on Surfacia, in Gansbaai. | |
| Lily: "Cold place." | |
| Vicky: "It's autumn and raining." | |
| Taylor: "Dianke always carries an umbrella." | |
| Dianke: "I do. Let's find-- hey, who are those odd-looking | |
| guys?" | |
| #Post#: 69-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: KarjamP Date: April 11, 2013, 2:47 am | |
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| Eric: "Who, us?" | |
| PK: "We're friendlies from another world." | |
| KarjamP: "Eric and I are from Karjam's Domain. | |
| "The Purple Karjam, the one in purple, of course, are friends of | |
| us." | |
| #Post#: 71-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: Taylor Date: April 11, 2013, 3:25 am | |
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| Vicky: "... Karjam's Domain? Never heard of it. And I've got a | |
| galactic map in my pocket!" | |
| Lily: "Which allows her to see every galaxy and all their stars | |
| and planets and so forth." | |
| Dianke: "And Karjam's Domain doesn't appear there. So where are | |
| you really from?" | |
| Taylor: "And don't even think about using mind games. We're | |
| immune to them, as Elva-- how the hell are we over there?!" | |
| There was a group of four who looked - and even acted - similar | |
| to the Smith sisters, standing near the 7-11 store of Gansbaai. | |
| They giggled as they went in. | |
| Taylor: "That can't be us!" | |
| Dianke: "What troubles you most is the fact that there's two | |
| girls who look and act just like Lily, right?" | |
| Vicky: "That troubles me too. Are those... Nobodies?!" | |
| Lily: "Nobodies?" | |
| Vicky: "... Long story, too lazy to explain." | |
| Taylor, Dianke and Lily: "What a drag..." | |
| #Post#: 74-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: KarjamP Date: April 11, 2013, 4:49 am | |
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| KarjamP: "Of course it's not in your galaxy map! | |
| "Karjam's Domain resides in an alternate dimension!" | |
| #Post#: 75-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: Taylor Date: April 11, 2013, 6:44 am | |
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| Vicky: "... An alternate dimension?! Well, that's new..." | |
| Taylor blinks and collapses to her knees. | |
| Dianke: "TAYLOR!" | |
| Lily: "We'd need to get to a hospital..." | |
| Taylor: "N-no..." | |
| Taylor finds herself seeing a guy similar to the Purple Karjam. | |
| PK: "I will not let you harm Shane Neumann, Nega-Lime Karjam!" | |
| NLK: "He has ruined my plans in several other Variants that you | |
| have not yet discovered. HE MUST DIE IN THIS ONE!" | |
| Nega-Lime Karjam charges up four energy blasts, each one large | |
| enough to destroy the planet. | |
| Taylor: "NO!" | |
| Taylor leaps up, her eyes open, fire in her eyes. | |
| Taylor: "Huh? W-where is that guy?" | |
| Dianke: "What's wrong? Something happen?" | |
| Lily: "What guy? What are you talking about?" | |
| ? ? ?: "Dimensional Scream. The Dimensional Scream ability shows | |
| the user visions of the past or future when someone or something | |
| is touched, although there are times that it could have a | |
| different effect, as was this case." | |
| Vicky: "Gah! My notebook!" | |
| Vicky takes out a notebook. | |
| Vicky: "This thing is like a dictionary... but a Dimensional | |
| Screamer? Right next to us? Wow, that's new." | |
| Lily: "Aren't those from Pok�mon Mist-something?" | |
| Dianke: "Mystery Dungeon, yeah. But that's different from the | |
| Pok�mon one..." | |
| Vicky: "So what did you see?" | |
| Taylor describes her vision. Dianke points to someone who looks | |
| like Nega-Lime Karjam, who wore sunglasses. | |
| Dianke: "That guy over there with the sunglasses? Looks as | |
| though he's on vacation, though..." | |
| Lily: "If that guy is truly evil, it's just a hoax. He's not | |
| really on vacation, I bet." | |
| Taylor: "Well, now what? Who is this Shane Neumann he spoke of | |
| in that vision, anyway?" | |
| #Post#: 77-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: Prologue: Before the Beginning | |
| By: KarjamP Date: April 11, 2013, 10:00 am | |
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| PK: "That person with the sunglasses sure does look like | |
| Nega-Lime." | |
| KarjamP: "I think we need to be careful in the future to prevent | |
| him from shattering the universe." | |
| PK: "You're right." | |
| Eric: "Why not sort the problems out now?" | |
| PK: "I don't think Earth's ready for the showdown of beings with | |
| great power." | |
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