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The Sirens are Screaming my name [Feel free to post]
By: Jstar Date: August 10, 2013, 9:26 am
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Name: Screamingsirens
Age: 32 Moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: DevilClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance {{Must be at least four sentences}}: Screamingsirens
is a black tom with white paws. His eyes are a bloody red with a
hint of green in it. Each of his paws has one claw that is
weirdly larger than the others. This claw is what he likes to
use for a big finish in a battle, the death blow. He has a scar
on his forehead that opens from time to time. He has scratches
and scars all over his body. His tail was cut, making it a
little bit smaller than what it should be.
Personality {{Must be at least four sentences}}: Screamingsirens
is a nasty tom. He is rude and cruel, and sometimes he can be
much of a r.pist. He was loyal to Hissingstar at the start, but
when Zero attacked that all changed. He kills any cat from
another clan if he wants. And he swears whenever he wishes.
History {{Must be at least three sentences}}: Well
Screamingsirens started as Screamingkit. His brother made fun of
him so Screamingkit killed him. His mother then ignored him, so
Screamingkit took care of himself. He became Screamingpaw and
had a bad mentor. This mentor taught him all he has in his
personality. In a battle training session, his mentor gave him
the gash on his forehead, and he became a warrior early, due to
no more warriors to mentor and he couldnt be treated that bad
anymore. But he loved the way his mentor treated him, but he got
his warrior name anyway. He is now Screamingsirens. After the
battle that Zero hosted, he yowled, "Bow down to your new
leader!" That new leader was of course Zero.
#Post#: 18346--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Sirens are Screaming my name [Feel free to post]
By: black rose Date: August 10, 2013, 2:31 pm
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There's just one thing you need to fix. Where it says "But he
loved the way his mentor treated him, but he got his warrior
name anyways."
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