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ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED] |
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By: wolfie Date: July 18, 2013, 1:33 pm |
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[color=forestgreen][sub]Name: Jurisdictionjudge [Jury] |
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Age: 18 moons |
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Gender: male |
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Clan: SerpentClan |
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Appearance {{Must be at least four sentences}}: Jury is a |
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regular sized cat with big paws. I actually quite like |
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describing Jury, because he is SIMPLE. Jurisdictionjudge is |
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actually just black with amber eyes. His whiskers are long, and |
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his tail is normal length, and then he's got his scarf. His |
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scarf is rather large, and so it makes himself look bigger, |
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because Jury is always unsatisfied with the way he balances out. |
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He wanted to be a muscular Medicine Cat! Obviously, that will |
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never happen. Anyway, Jury's scarf is a dark forest green, and |
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it trails across the ground; He's learned not to trip over it. |
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Personality {{Must be at least four sentences}}: His |
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personality? An annoying meanie if you don't know him very well. |
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He doesn't very much like anyone he doesn't know, but if you get |
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the chance to warm up to him, you get a good friend for life. |
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Like Jury and Guilt, for instance. One pair that won't |
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[probably] get seperated. [I mean, they're best friends! And.. |
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fianc�es... eve] But if you anger him when he's NOT your |
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friend... oh ho ho, you have another thing coming for you. |
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Prepare to die early.<3 |
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History {{Must be at least three sentences}}: Jurisdictionjudge |
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was a regular cat in the Clan, grew up to be a warrior. And then |
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he found out he was a wimp. Ooooh, yes. Jury was much better at |
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plants than battle moves, and I guess that's how it should be. |
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Jury the Surgeon. Hm. Anyway, the black tom quite liked hunting |
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even after his promotion to Surgeon, but he never had the time |
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to hunt. Oh well. |
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RELASHONSHIPS: |
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Guilt: He's getting married to him. So, first gay couple on the |
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site!<3 |
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Flickeringstar: Neutral. |
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Innocence: He sort of treats her like a little sister/big sister |
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thing. |
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#Post#: 14934-------------------------------------------------- |
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Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED] |
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By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:23 pm |
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Pretty good, but there are a few choppy fragments you could |
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combine to make a full sentence. Other than that, I like it! |
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Also, there's a period missing somewhere. ;3 |
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#Post#: 14948-------------------------------------------------- |
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Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED] |
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By: wolfie Date: July 26, 2013, 8:42 pm |
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bump<3 |
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#Post#: 14954-------------------------------------------------- |
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Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED] |
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By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:47 pm |
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Better! Appurroved! |
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#Post#: 14957-------------------------------------------------- |
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Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED] |
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By: wolfie Date: July 26, 2013, 8:49 pm |
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Yayy |
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/locking my bio |
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