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My poem: falling into yellow |
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By: andysnipe007 Date: February 21, 2020, 2:00 pm |
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I have fallen into Yellow. |
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Honey coloured smiles, |
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Sunshine kisses, |
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I have stumbled, |
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Knees scraped, |
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Spilling mustard onto concrete, |
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And laughing, |
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Golden bells tinkling from our throats, |
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As we grip each other |
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And laugh, |
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And laugh some more |
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At the citrine silliness of it all, |
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But sometimes I am not yellow, |
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I am crimson fire, |
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Anger and something else, |
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Claret drips from my teeth, |
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Biting back something, |
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Untameable. |
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Or I am a melancholy violet, |
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Quietly shrinking, |
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Wasting hours in the night staring, |
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At lavender and lilac, |
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Behind my eyelids |
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A field of solitude |
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It�s a pity |
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I have hay fever. |
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Mostly I am yellow though, |
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Sinking further into lemon |
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And ochre |
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But mostly just yellow. |
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Sleeping softly in apricot, |
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Thinking of blush pink |
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And baby blue; |
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The shades of you |
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Re: My poem: falling into yellow |
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By: ggnore Date: February 21, 2020, 2:01 pm |
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There�s just something about the last two lines. Every once in a |
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while you hear a line and you think �this line is incredibly |
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special�. Those last two were like that for me, great job! That |
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was wonderful. |
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