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| Re: painting the world [Denied For Plagiarizing] | |
| By: whtever Date: January 5, 2013, 10:54 am | |
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| Creator: Physics Puzzle Maker | |
| Game: Spectrum of Light | |
| By: Tbremise | |
| To start off, today I'll be reviewing a game by tbremise: | |
| �Spectrum of Light.� Tbremise is actually quite well known on | |
| the main site and is mostly recognized for his most famous | |
| series, �The World of Whomp." He seems to be an expert with the | |
| physics creator or so it seems. Though someday I would like to | |
| see him try a different creator for once. | |
| The title may mislead some people. Art? Well art isn�t | |
| really my thing but I�ll give it a go. Then I saw the | |
| screenshots and boy did that change my perspective of things. | |
| The playfield was colorless. That�s strange. I thought art was | |
| full of pretty colors? I was expecting something more, I don�t | |
| know� colorful. Where are all the colors? This was going through | |
| my mind when I first saw the screenshots, and I was a little | |
| confused. But even though there were no colors, I was impressed. | |
| For some reason I just had a feeling that it wasn't going to | |
| blend in with other PPG's. I knew from the look of the | |
| screenshots that it was going to be unique. And I was right, all | |
| the way from the start of the game to the final touches, in my | |
| eyes I witnessed unique style. It was totally different from | |
| what I expected. That is what I love about this game; there are | |
| just not too many people out there who got unique style. But | |
| �Spectrum of Light� has got a totally new style to it and I | |
| think that tbremise should continue down this path. | |
| Wait! Hold up! So were painting the world? Aw� I see. Let us | |
| start with the story. You are basically trying to bring color | |
| back into the world. You have the power to sustain colors, but | |
| when you fall into a deep sleep, you wake up to find the world a | |
| dark, colorless place. A world without color, I wonder what life | |
| would be like. There would be no sunshine or pretty flowers or� | |
| hold up! Let�s not get off topic here. Does that sum it up for | |
| you? But it�s not as easy as it looks. No, if you�re thinking | |
| that this is art class, you better get out of here. He added | |
| puzzles, just to spice things up. Every puzzle that you | |
| complete, adds color to the world. Now that I have explained the | |
| story, let us move on to the puzzles. | |
| Puzzles bring back the colors of the �rainbow.� Hmm. | |
| That�s interesting, I have never heard of that before. But hey, | |
| let�s just go with the flow of the game. To be honest, the | |
| puzzles were somewhat disappointing. That doesn�t mean that the | |
| game is terrible. Let�s just make this clear, every game has | |
| some flaws. You could also put it this way; every piece of art | |
| has its own flaws. That doesn�t mean that the game isn�t good. | |
| It�s just I found that the puzzles were just too simple for me. | |
| There wasn�t anything special about the puzzles. You know what | |
| I�m saying? Although they were simple, towards the end they did | |
| get a bit more challenging. But in the end, I think that he | |
| could have really put more effort into the puzzles. And I think | |
| if he decides to make a sequel to this game, he should challenge | |
| the players more with the puzzles. | |
| The concept is probably the biggest factor to the physics | |
| creator. If you don�t got yourself a good concept, you most | |
| likely don�t got a very good game. As soon as you find a good, | |
| fresh concept then all you have to do is let your imagination | |
| run wild. Spectrum of light fulfills the first part of the | |
| equation, however falls short on the second part of the | |
| equation. The concept was impressive. It was unique and | |
| different. It had a great feel to it. But you need all of the | |
| variables to solve an equation. I really think that tbremise | |
| held back a little bit on letting his imagination run wild. For | |
| one the puzzles didn�t blow you away. And every level looked the | |
| same, I almost felt like I was playing the same level over and | |
| over again. Except for the fact, that the puzzles were different | |
| in each level. Overall, I loved the concept but I think | |
| tbremise held back on his imagination. | |
| Alright, let us wrap up the review with the conclusion. The | |
| game was truly a piece of art. Like I already said, art isn�t | |
| really my thing, but this game was outstanding. The game seemed | |
| to fulfill most of the variables. That sums it up. Now the real | |
| question is: Was this game feature worthy? I truly think that | |
| this game deserved the feature. But it was really just barely | |
| across the line of feature worthy. If it wasn�t for the unique | |
| style and feel to it, I don�t think it would deserve the | |
| feature. This game truly was a magnificent piece of art. Now on | |
| to the cons, pros and the ratings. | |
| Cons: | |
| Puzzles were too simple. | |
| Lack of imagination. | |
| Pros: | |
| Unique Style | |
| Story | |
| Concept | |
| Ratings: | |
| Gameplay- ***/***** | |
| Puzzles- **/***** | |
| Concept- ***/***** | |
| Style- *****/***** | |
| Overall- ***/***** | |
| Alright that�s all I got to say. I want to give tbremise a | |
| round of applause for making a truly epic game. Farewell, until | |
| next time. | |
| #Post#: 3004-------------------------------------------------- | |
| Re: painting the world [Denied For Plagiarizing] | |
| By: blackmustangs075 Date: January 6, 2013, 10:23 am | |
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| You know, I was going to Accept you into being a reviewer. As I | |
| was reading this, I was thinking; "This is a really good review. | |
| He might be our second reviewer!" But as I went on through | |
| reading this review, I thought of something; "This may have been | |
| written by a professional, due to the fact that his previous | |
| writing pieces are not nearly up to par with this one." So I | |
| went onto the Sploder Mainsite and went to tbremise's page. | |
| Clicked on the game, Spectrum of Light. So I scroll down a bit, | |
| still with me here? I saw a review down there. A single review | |
| made by flippenout. The reviews were nearly identical, you only | |
| changed a few words to make it seem like your own writing piece. | |
| Flippenout is not here to do the review for you. You are your | |
| own person, with your own thoughts, and we want to hear what YOU | |
| think. Plagiarizing is NOT okay here. Your reviewer hold has | |
| been extended to 1 month. I would appreciate if next time, you | |
| do not plagiarize. Thank you. | |
| The copied review is here: | |
| http://www.sploder.com/games/members/flippenout/review/1826/a-game-by-tbremise/… | |
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