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Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK |
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By: David M. Katz Date: November 14, 2025, 11:22 am |
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I have been searching for ways to motivate my writing. I asked |
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some author friends to send me blurbs and prompts to see if they |
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offered a jumping off spot. Skip Trace offered "framed by my |
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brother" as a prompt. |
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That clicked with me and I sat to write out my usual sort of |
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product but it wasn't working. I felt I needed to go in a dark |
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direction and do something I rarely do and that is put a shitty |
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dad in the picture. What is better than a shitty dad? Well, a |
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shitty big brother added in as well. |
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Simon is gay. His brother has turned hateful because of it and |
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the dad, well, he's just an a s s hole. Mom is ambivalent at |
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best. Jake, the older brother, is a dumb jock but does manage to |
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set Simon up to be punished by Dad. |
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This one is not happy and fluffy but I am still proud of it and |
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would ask you to give it a shot. |
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https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=59839 |
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AI rendering of 16 yo Jake and 14 yo Simon: |
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Re: Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK |
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By: David M. Katz Date: November 14, 2025, 11:24 am |
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Weird. |
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The censor let me get away with "shitty" three times but blanked |
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out "a sshole". Oh, well, fixed it. |
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Re: Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK |
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By: afinch Date: November 14, 2025, 4:05 pm |
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I loved it, although I loved your previous, less dark story |
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more. Not an issue with your writing--just with this one, I |
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wanted to reach through the screen and strangle the 16 year old |
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brother and his abusive father. |
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