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| Comments and Questions | |
| By: Jack Date: February 25, 2025, 11:10 am | |
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| I'm probably going to upload each chapter to it's own thread, | |
| but lock those threads, so they'll stay in order, so I'm | |
| creating this thread for active participation. I would welcome | |
| any feedback on whether having it all in order in one thread, or | |
| being able to read each chapter separately works better. | |
| Thanks | |
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| Re: Comments and Questions | |
| By: afinch Date: February 25, 2025, 8:02 pm | |
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| I just finished reading every chapter in two sessions. If I | |
| hadn't already been exhausted, I'd have read it straight | |
| through. I am pretty sure I was one of the original people | |
| reading it a few years ago. I guess I'm getting old--I didn't | |
| used to actually cry reading stories. but I did here, several | |
| times, as well as laughing out loud. I'll write more privately | |
| so as not to give away spoilers. | |
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| Re: Comments and Questions | |
| By: David M. Katz Date: February 25, 2025, 8:29 pm | |
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| I note Joep refers to Mrs. Vaughn as Ruth. Is that significant? | |
| Answer privately if you need to. Or, do I just need to read | |
| further? | |
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| Re: Comments and Questions | |
| By: Jack Date: February 25, 2025, 9:49 pm | |
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| David | |
| First, Joep is his first name, but he goes by Sieger. | |
| Second, this is quoted from Medium, but they have a paywall, so | |
| I'm not going to provide a link. | |
| Students refer to their teachers by their first names, putting | |
| aside any formalities with language or addresses, and students | |
| typically feel free to speak their minds or can refuse to | |
| participate in class if they don't want to. | |
| I spent a lot of time reading about and researching Norway | |
| before starting this story, and JC Wardh gave a lot of feedback, | |
| so much of this is just trying to set the stage for how | |
| different and alien things seem to Sieger. | |
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| Re: Comments and Questions | |
| By: Zyngaru Date: February 26, 2025, 8:34 am | |
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| [quote author=Jack link=topic=3418.msg30505#msg30505 | |
| date=1740541766] | |
| David | |
| First, Joep is his first name, but he goes by Sieger. | |
| Second, this is quoted from Medium, but they have a paywall, so | |
| I'm not going to provide a link. | |
| Students refer to their teachers by their first names, putting | |
| aside any formalities with language or addresses, and students | |
| typically feel free to speak their minds or can refuse to | |
| participate in class if they don't want to. | |
| I spent a lot of time reading about and researching Norway | |
| before starting this story, and JC Wardh gave a lot of feedback, | |
| so much of this is just trying to set the stage for how | |
| different and alien things seem to Sieger. | |
| [/quote] | |
| I find the use of just first names of adults by children creepy, | |
| only because that is not the way I have lived for 7 decades. I | |
| do agree with the concept that first name usage creates a closer | |
| bond. That is why at the Children's Home I worked at many | |
| decades ago, we used Aunt and Uncle with the first name. To | |
| create a bonding and yet keep it respectful. | |
| One of the reasons I like Family Business is that you use that | |
| same concept. I was able to flow right into the story because | |
| it is something I was used to. | |
| As for teachers first names, I don't think I ever knew any of my | |
| teacher's first names. | |
| So, I can see that as something odd for Sieger. It would really | |
| be odd if he used a teacher's first name in class. The other | |
| students would be stunned for sure. Depending on the teacher | |
| how they would react. | |
| No, I haven't read the first chapter yet. Like I said in chat, | |
| I started with chapter 15. Hahahhaa. | |
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