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| "William Williamson" MMSA story by DMK and PJ Franklin | |
| By: David M. Katz Date: April 12, 2024, 10:07 pm | |
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| https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=55757 | |
| Well over a year ago, I had this idea of an anthology of short | |
| stories all using one character name: William Williamson. The | |
| William would not be the same William in each short, just a | |
| re-used name. I tinkered around and wrote bits and pieces of | |
| shorts that might end up in the anthology. One such short was | |
| titled "Rural Virginia, 1830." The project lost my interest and | |
| so "Rural Virginia, 1830" ended up in a folder, forgotten and | |
| neglected. | |
| I have been desperate to kill a writer's block and so I went | |
| back through some unfinished works. Most are garbage and are | |
| just a paragraph or two. I found "Rural Virginia" and realized | |
| it was a complete story and rather readable. My issue was it | |
| consisted of only 1700 words. I retitled it to "William | |
| Williamson" and added more to it by advancing the story 25 years | |
| and giving William a son. At least the writer's block seemed to | |
| have eased up a bit. | |
| My regular proofer and editor is out of the country and so I | |
| sent the thing to PJ to destroy for me. ( I seriously recommend | |
| that all authors find someone to send your story drafts to for | |
| destruction before you submit them.) PJ sent it back saying he | |
| liked it but . . . the transition was too abrupt. | |
| I had no clue how to fix it and I also was bothered by the fact | |
| that the story was outside my usual age range. PJ said he had | |
| some thoughts and asked permission to join the story. | |
| "William Williamson" then became a full-blown collaboration. | |
| PJ's contributions were brilliant and his additions prompted | |
| more inspiration from me which prompted more inspiration in him, | |
| yada, yada, yada. The final product is close to 6700 words. | |
| I think the final product is well worth the work and I am | |
| pleased with the result. Please give it a look. | |
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