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Author: glenda <[email protected]> | |
Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2021 20:42:34 +0000 | |
opus2: last minute adjustment before publication of the link | |
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.PP | |
Is this name familiar to you? Maybe you encountered | |
\fIcirosantilli\fR on a StackOverflow or remembered one of the iconic | |
-provile picture he chose ? Did you encountered the name on GitHub? If | |
+profile picture he chose? Did you encounter the name on GitHub? If | |
so you may have immediately noticed how he weaponized this popular code | |
hosting platform into a freedom of speech silver bullet against China's | |
censorship. | |
. | |
.PP | |
The entire user profile was turned into a long document that can | |
-resist the most ferocious censorship. A vast amount of images and | |
+resist to the most ferocious censorship. A vast amount of images and | |
keywords censored by China is published straight on the front page, | |
-making it outstanding to the curious visitor. | |
+making it outstanding to the visitors. | |
. | |
.PP | |
-Would china dare to try take down the biggest code hosting platform, | |
+Would china dare to try to take down the biggest code hosting platform, | |
harming most of IT companies in the world? And even if it tries, would | |
it succeed? And so without provoking too much tension with the U.S.? | |
. | |
.PP | |
-While China's government censorship of its own violence is world famous, | |
+While China's government censorship violence is world famous, | |
so is GitHub's DDoS mitigation services (provided by a dedicated company, | |
-not performed by GitHub itself), after undertaking 1.3 Terabit per second | |
+not performed by GitHub themself), after undertaking 1.3 Terabit per second | |
during a famous DDoS attack. | |
. | |
.PP | |
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Or maybe you are interested in one of the many computer-relat… | |
teaches on its website? | |
. | |
.PP | |
-This activist doubled as student and teacher might catch you down the | |
+This activist doubled as student and teacher might take you down the | |
rabbit hole of both computer science and fight for freedom. | |
. | |
.DS |